motseer
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Guys, the overall plot of this story is much simpler than you are making it out to be. The protagonist is an isolated entity in the middle of brewing troubles. There is, obviously, a third party playing upon the shortcomings of the two sides. The potential conflict is being manipulated because of the isolationist policies of the Alfar and the moronic arrogance of the Templars. MC will likely save the day but, maybe, if we are lucky, he'll stand back and watch it all burn to the ground...

I can agree with your third party theory, generally. The Finnibair fake death just doesn't hold water in my opinion. The whole fake funeral thing just doesn't make sense and seems very improbable to pull off. Jus' Sayin'I'm going to clarify my point since you seem to be misunderstanding it, I am not talking about literally every elf on the globe having a hivemind and deep understanding of a large scale conspiracy plot to trigger a conflict.
What I specifically outlined and what the MC is getting at is that there's a third party, not elf nor human, that have connections within each faction that are manipulating them. My thesis was that Finn is either that connection or a pawn of whatever connection there is within the elves.
This also means that none of the other elves (besides potential complicits to Finn or whoever pulled the strings behind Finn) knowing anything about a faked death.