Gambit33

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The writing is decent, at least compared to the other game ( Rogue-like) however the mc is too much of a Gary-stu. It gets boring after a while. Almost from the get go everybody is kissing his ass.

The writer obviously has a good grasp at writing, so I wonder what why he did not write a compelling story with some real challenges thrown at the mc.

I hate NTR but how fun would it have been to have Scott be a real competitor for Jeans affection?

Feel like the dev is just going the path of least resistance. Other males may well be nonexistent in the game. Prof. X is really almost a non entity outside of giving you jobs (on that note, how does he use telepathy on you if you are immune to mutant powers?) and Kurt is just a plot device and expozition dump. Piotr only shows up in one scene and Scott and Logan are only shown to exist in a somewhat humorous Convo on the phone

There is no real conflict or stakes, just a grind to earn enough love and trust points to unlock new scenes.
 

whity112

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The writing is decent, at least compared to the other game ( Rogue-like) however the mc is too much of a Gary-stu. It gets boring after a while. Almost from the get go everybody is kissing his ass.

The writer obviously has a good grasp at writing, so I wonder what why he did not write a compelling story with some real challenges thrown at the mc.

I hate NTR but how fun would it have been to have Scott be a real competitor for Jeans affection?

Feel like the dev is just going the path of least resistance. Other males may well be nonexistent in the game. Prof. X is really almost a non entity outside of giving you jobs (on that note, how does he use telepathy on you if you are immune to mutant powers?) and Kurt is just a plot device and expozition dump. Piotr only shows up in one scene and Scott and Logan are only shown to exist in a somewhat humorous Convo on the phone

There is no real conflict or stakes, just a grind to earn enough love and trust points to unlock new scenes.
not going to be any ntr thank god. also the game is in beta.
 

Gambit33

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Good

Oh no
I get it, again let's say a storyline line where Jean and Scott split up shortly before you arrive, due to Scott cheating on Jean with Emma Frost( a storyline from the comics).

You try to get with Jean, who has issues after her long time boyfriend cheated on her, and Scott hates you because he wants Jean back and sees you as an obstacle. You have drama, you have conflict, hell you could even end on a redemption arc for Scott where he eventually asks forgiveness from her and gives his blessing to your relationship.

Cliche? Absolutely, but at least it is something. What do we get instead? Some weird incest play? Yeah like there aren't enough incest games on this site.

And for clarification I am proudly part of perhaps one of the most annoying groups on this site, barring NTR addicts. I am a lifelong IIA( is it avoidable?).
 
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SolSpell

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Cliche? Absolutely, but at least it is something. What do we get instead?
The writer obviously has a good grasp at writing, so I wonder what why he did not write a compelling story with some real challenges thrown at the mc.
There is no real conflict or stakes
I think this is only the second time I've seen someone in this thread argue it should be harder to romance the girls.
It sounds like you just don't find a plot interesting unless there's cheating or love triangles.

All the girls have challenges and issues that you help them with, and the MC gets into trouble regularly.
The story is to me a high point of the game, a LOT more ambitious and serious than any other game I've found on this site.

Other males may well be nonexistent in the game
It's early in development and they're understandably not very high on the priority list. More guys will come and you will be able to do stuff with them, but they won't be going after your girls (good thing, very based).
I find this a surprising complaint when I was amazed the game even had men at all.
 

buttfan

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It's early in development and they're understandably not very high on the priority list. More guys will come and you will be able to do stuff with them, but they won't be going after your girls (good thing, very based).
Considering there are people on this site who think it is NTR if there is another straight male in the game at all (even if they don't get involved with any of the girls, and Odin forbid they are in a relationship with a girl who isn't even a potential LI for the MC), even doing this is probably going to upset some people.

As several people have noted many times in the past, for many, many things, you cannot please everyone, it is foolish to even try. Make what you like, and others will probably like it too. Some people won't, but that's just the way it is.
 

whity112

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Considering there are people on this site who think it is NTR if there is another straight male in the game at all (even if they don't get involved with any of the girls, and Odin forbid they are in a relationship with a girl who isn't even a potential LI for the MC), even doing this is probably going to upset some people.

As several people have noted many times in the past, for many, many things, you cannot please everyone, it is foolish to even try. Make what you like, and others will probably like it too. Some people won't, but that's just the way it is.
no one thnigs that
 

Dazzier31

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The writing is decent, at least compared to the other game ( Rogue-like) however the mc is too much of a Gary-stu. It gets boring after a while. Almost from the get go everybody is kissing his ass.

The writer obviously has a good grasp at writing, so I wonder what why he did not write a compelling story with some real challenges thrown at the mc.

I hate NTR but how fun would it have been to have Scott be a real competitor for Jeans affection?

Feel like the dev is just going the path of least resistance. Other males may well be nonexistent in the game. Prof. X is really almost a non entity outside of giving you jobs (on that note, how does he use telepathy on you if you are immune to mutant powers?) and Kurt is just a plot device and expozition dump. Piotr only shows up in one scene and Scott and Logan are only shown to exist in a somewhat humorous Convo on the phone

There is no real conflict or stakes, just a grind to earn enough love and trust points to unlock new scenes.
If he was an actual Gary Stu, there wouldn't be an infirmary where you are sent to every story event. About everyone kissing his ass, let's see: Xavier is like that with every young mutant as his role of older kind mentor, Rogue does kiss his ass because he is the only person she can actually interact with, Laura straight up kicks his ass for most of the first season and only starts coming around near the end, Jean is a neurotic with a desire for anyone to like her that tries to win over the one guy who doesn't have a negative impression of her, Storm is legit just being nice.

Challenges like getting his ass handed to him by Juggernaut and Sentinels? Or what kind of challenges are you thinking of?

No, it would not be fun.

Maybe because the game is very early in development and they decided to focus on the girls first and then start introducing the rest of the team? Content with Kurt is coming and Colossus is gonna be bro-able in chapter 2, maybe even starting a friendship at the end of the first summer, Scott and Logan are referenced many times and will probably come with Colossus, shit Logan even has a line of dialogue.

Maybe because this is an introduction to the world so the story is just starting? My sibling in Christ, the game is in a very pretty alpha, patience is the name of the game.
 
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whity112

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If he was an actual Gary Stu, there wouldn't be an infirmary where you are sent to every story event. About everyone kissing his ass, let's see: Xavier is like that with every young mutant as his role of older kind mentor, Rogue does kiss his ass because he is the only person she can actually interact with, Laura straight up kicks his ass for most of the first season and only starts coming around near the end, Jean is a neurotic with a desire for anyone to like her that tries to win over the one guy who doesn't have a negative impression of her, Storm is legit just being nice.

Challenges like getting his ass handed to him by Juggernaut and Sentinels? Or what kind of challenges are you thinking of?

No, it would not be fun.

Maybe because the game is very early in development and they decided to focus on the girls first and then start introducing the rest of the team? Content with Kurt is coming and Colossus is gonna be bro-able in chapter 2, maybe even starting a friendship at the end of the first summer, Scott and Logan are referenced many times and will probably come with Colossus, shit Logan even has a line of dialogue.

Maybe because this is an introduction to the world so the story is just starting? My sibling in Christ, the game is in a very pretty alpha, patience is the name of the game.
the only thing null wins at is joging/running against anna lol
 

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Speaking of which, when are we getting a cg for running behind her?:BootyTime:
Or sexy events in general, seems all of them right now are of the girls being stressed/sad:cry:
My word we NEED that backview. More games need backviews. Can't go talking about Rogue's booty and not flaunt it. Need to have Jean and Laura back shots so we can compare cheeks (and drool over Laura's back muscles :p).


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Considering there are people on this site who think it is NTR if there is another straight male in the game at all (even if they don't get involved with any of the girls, and Odin forbid they are in a relationship with a girl who isn't even a potential LI for the MC), even doing this is probably going to upset some people.

As several people have noted many times in the past, for many, many things, you cannot please everyone, it is foolish to even try. Make what you like, and others will probably like it too. Some people won't, but that's just the way it is.
Considering an NTR freak caused the cancellation of one of my favorite games Necro Detective, I have a real hate-boner for those shitheads, usually I would be in the live and let live camp. But not today.
 

buttfan

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no one thnigs that
No one 'things' what?

If you mean the thing about other guys being in a game being NTR, I've seen it explicitly said. "the only other guy that can be in a porn game is the gay friend". As for someone freaking out about a guy having sex with another woman that wasn't even an LI for the player? Saw it on the Summer Scent thread, you don't even meet the girl, it's the player's friend hooking up with a chick while he's on vacation, and you hear about it over the phone, and some nut came in screaming about NTR and calling everyone 'cucks'; would have been funny if it wasn't so painfully stupid (I did make a point of calling him an idiot).

Or that no one thinks you shouldn't even bother trying to please everyone? Anyone with any sense that creates something shoul realize that, or they will drive themselves insane.


If he was an actual Gary Stu
In my experience I have seen the Gary Stu/ Mary Sue label used far too often. It is used when someone doesn't like something, and is offended that others like it/ it isn't the way they want it to be. But because that is just a subjective personal opinion and others can simply go "well, sorry you feel that way" they instead label it a 'Mary Sue' in an attempt to state that it is objectively bad, no argument can be made with such a narrative crime!

Of course, it isn't as effective as all that even if taken seriously, but that's not the way they see it.

On the other hand, I would argue to a large extent ALL computer games have the MC as a Mary Sue. It is intended as a player self insert, a power fantasy for the player, that is the point. But as you also state, a requirement of a Mary Sue is the character be perfect and everyone loves him, and that is almost never the case in a game, the character can and does screw up (sometimes despite what the player does) and they invariably have enemies as well who most certainly don't love the MC.

I think the only true mass market Mary Sue I've seen is Honor Harrington. She started out fine, and the series was good, but eventually it went off the rails. I think Weber just loved the character too much and he ended up making her so perfect even her enemies thought she was amazing (and those that didn't were so one dimensionally evil that the fact that they didn't love her was a sign of how bad they were).

As a note I've seen the same idea with other statements "it is bad because of THING XYZ!", and when other people go "MEH!", they come back with "how can you not be offended!?" (again, seen it, that was actually funny). The entire thing with certain people trying to make trans people and cross dressers 'groomers' is the same thing, an attempt to make it inherently evil instead of something where it's "who cares, it's not hurting anyone else, let them be them".


Considering an NTR freak caused the cancellation of one of my favorite games Necro Detective, I have a real hate-boner for those shitheads, usually I would be in the live and let live camp. But not today.
Both the extreme pro-NTR and extreme anti-NTR crowds are very weird.

It's probvably the 'extreme' part that is the problem, not the NTR so much (although I'm not a fan either).


My word we NEED that backview. More games need backviews. Can't go talking about Rogue's booty and not flaunt it. Need to have Jean and Laura back shots so we can compare cheeks (and drool over Laura's back muscles :p).
This, I have argued for exactly this. (considered my user name, that shouldn't be a surprise)
The response was that they are unlikely to add it directly into the game as that would require another full set of clothing and piece art for each character (I hadn't realized yet just how much each character was subdivided into separate pieces). However, they did say that they planned to add more static art, so they may (probably) include such shots like that. I asked for a gallery to be added for such shots.
 
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