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I really appreciate you going through the game so thoroughly and thanks a lot for pointing out the mistakes. Will surely fix those. Also thanks for the suggestions will try my best to sort these things and give the players a better experience...
I really appreciate you going through the game so thoroughly and thanks a lot for pointing out the mistakes. Will surely fix those. Also thanks for the suggestions will try my best to sort these things and give the players a better experience...
Agreed. And I think this should apply to all or most of her interactions imo.
Even if she is eventually gonna have sex with them, I think a slower pace would be better and more suited to her initial personality. The transition from a shy loving gf to a full blown whore happens way too fast in this type of corruption games.
I personally enjoy the build up just as much as the hardcore stuff. Teasing and seducing makes the whole thing hotter and more enjoyable.
For example, I liked the scene where Gail teases Theo, and when she leaves the door open for Noah. But I wish she went way slower with Dave, Ava and even the delivery guy.
Also, DamagedCoda, I think the choices on the Noah scene are mixed up:
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This Android port doesn't use the compressed version of the game but the original bloated images and videos.
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Correct!
For me there is no transition, because we know nothing about Gail's personality. Her being slutty doesn't mean that she can't be loyal to her boyfriend at the same time.
So instead to show an transition form a shy to a slutty girl I personally would build on a strong female personality who decided to use her "weapons" to achieve her aim. Even if it means that she needs to act slutty. The consequence by doing that would be that more and more she starts to like her new "more" slutty appearance. Which could have a negative impact on her relationship with her boyfriend.
Gail was a full blown slut in 0.2. She still does it in 0.3 but there are now ... choices which she attempted to resist but got fuck anyway. I feel the developer tried to pull a bandage on a window that is cracking heaps in plot.
The bandage did what it could which I give 4 stars for the affect but the crack is already there.
I am also fucking confuse on how Gail thinks. We are just thrown into a life threatening decision within 2 mins of the game where we have no head or tail who is who, what is what. A supposedly choice where Gail can enjoy to fuck her boss or resist but still got fucked hard.
There are scenes which Gail behave so head strong such as with the bus scene when she shoved her heels but cried like a whim when she refuse Dave in the office room.
Ava said she hasn't had sex in a very long time but due to one kiss suddenly they are having sex.
Give more background , yea introduction chapter definitely as suggested. My advice to the developer is this game ' feels right ' if you are doing a super fast pace sex game. The bandage seems to now suggest a slower pace loving girlfriend mode may be in play now but it kind of ' feels weird ' with the slower pace for the loving path due to existing cracks of inconsistency.
I think there is a lot more potential if this game can start afresh as a slow corruption mode where Gail has to fight to keep her position with Cindy fighting her for it. This kind of corruption game plot is right up my alley. Probably also just have one central character like Jessica in Jessica Oneil Hard News instead of two Gail which creates confusion as there are times where the plot does not make sense.
I really love how Gail looks. It is not very often you get such a hot looking female game with larger than life proportions.
Good luck, best of luck.
The bandage did what it could which I give 4 stars for the affect but the crack is already there.
I am also fucking confuse on how Gail thinks. We are just thrown into a life threatening decision within 2 mins of the game where we have no head or tail who is who, what is what. A supposedly choice where Gail can enjoy to fuck her boss or resist but still got fucked hard.
There are scenes which Gail behave so head strong such as with the bus scene when she shoved her heels but cried like a whim when she refuse Dave in the office room.
Ava said she hasn't had sex in a very long time but due to one kiss suddenly they are having sex.
Give more background , yea introduction chapter definitely as suggested. My advice to the developer is this game ' feels right ' if you are doing a super fast pace sex game. The bandage seems to now suggest a slower pace loving girlfriend mode may be in play now but it kind of ' feels weird ' with the slower pace for the loving path due to existing cracks of inconsistency.
I think there is a lot more potential if this game can start afresh as a slow corruption mode where Gail has to fight to keep her position with Cindy fighting her for it. This kind of corruption game plot is right up my alley. Probably also just have one central character like Jessica in Jessica Oneil Hard News instead of two Gail which creates confusion as there are times where the plot does not make sense.
I really love how Gail looks. It is not very often you get such a hot looking female game with larger than life proportions.
Good luck, best of luck.
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I think it is mostly correct that way it is - you have a locked the door with Kat inside the room and encourage Kat to get more personal. If you don't lock it you close that option. But I think there should be corrupt +1 and additional lesbian +1. Then it would be more clear why locking the door is the naughty way.
Wait, who's Kat?
And the scene I'm talking about is the one where Gail goes to change her clothes in the bedroom while Noah (the nephew) is outside, she can choose to lock the door (which should be a loving girlfriend choice) or leave the door open (which should be a corruption choice because it's the slutty choice since she's leaving the door open so Noah can see her)
I think my assumption that she's "shy" comes from that very brief moment in the beginning when she struggles with the idea of even dressing a little more provocative for her boss..
And yes, I agree that she can be slutty and loyal to her boyfriend. And I don't mind if she uses "her weapons" to achieve her goals. But I'd prefer if everything was more subtle and gradual, going from struggling to show cleavage to giving a handy to the delivery guy is too fast lol
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I was thinking a lot about how the game could slow down the pace to a level compare to Jessica O'Neil's Hard News with a strong female MC and keep the same images at the same time without the need to redo them.
Here is what I came up with:
Game starts the same as it does now. Gail is in Dave's office with the purpose to use her body to get the promotion.
She isn't sure, if what she is going to do is the best choice, but she needs this promotion for various reason:
- because she earns it,
- for the pay raise (to pay off college debts, pay rent, covering for her boyfriend too, etc..)
Struggling with the situation, she puts herself into, she remembers back how all of that started.
[Flashback - setting the groundwork for Gail's flirtatious offensive] [new images]
Gail reviews how Dave announced the open Regional Branch Manager position to his underlings.
Gail is one of the the few who survived the last purge of colleagues who weren't able to reach their set goals.
Later Cindy tells Gail that she is going to apply for the new position and she will do whatever it takes to get the promotion. [Cindy has joined the company a year before Gail but shortly after that she got promoted]
Gail knows that Cindy has her way with the colleagues and even has connection to the companies partners [Note: instead having a single CEO there are more partners on the board] this might explain why she didn't get fired even for her low-performance and not reaching her goals [setting up the rivalry between Cindy and Gail].
Gail knows that she has no chance to get the promotion if she has to compete with Cindy in a fair and square competition.
The past year she tried not to revealing much of her voluptuous breast and firm body by not wearing sexy and body firm clothes/dresses at work, but instead stick to casual non-sexy one - not like Cindy who didn't miss any chance to flirt and show off her slender body and perky breast to everyone [subliminal note about Gail being Bi].
At home in front of the mirror she inspects her body and remembers what her mother [in case for keeping the incest tag otherwise Gail's best friend's mother] [sister/Gail's best friend is Ava] told her: "Never be ashamed to use what nature/God has giving to you to use for your own advantage!".
After all, she needs the money and the job situation due to the current economic crisis isn't the best either. Who knows maybe in just a few years she might become a junior partner too, if her performance continues to rise as it does the past year.
Shortly after she started to wear more revealing and sexy clothes at work shes noticed all the glances from her colleagues and superiors which didn't happen before. [Reuse of the hallway image]
Cindy confronts Gail in the bathroom and tells her that she knows what Gail tries to pull off and that it will never work etc which leads to current situation in Dave's office... [Reuse of bathroom scene with Cindy and Gail wearing the sexy outfit]
-- End of flashback/Introduction scene --
Back in Dave's office the scene plays has it does in v0.3.
When Dave touch her leg the first choice shows up: let him continue (Corruption +1 | Dave +1) or stop him (GF +1 | Nathan +1).
Dave gets pushy and wants more from Gail. Choice: Compensate (Dave plays with Gail's boobs and sucks them) (Corruption +1 | Dave +1) or Stop him and leave his office (GF +1 | Nathan +1).
[Note: leaving Dave's office might end in a game over or to another attempt of Dave getting into Gail's pants]
Compensate enables another choice option: Go further (BJ) (Corruption +1 | Dave +1) or Stop him (no points).
"Stop him" choice leads to Gail being in control (dominate/playing bossy) and "Go further" her being submissive. [Note: No sex scene with Dave at current pace and no promotion yet.]
A few days later hallway scene with Theo.
[Additional scenes with Dave playing with Gail's boobs.. he gets more demanding... HJ, BJ, Footjob, Boobjob; Maybe some an extra scene with Cindy too to show that she is up to compete with Gail]
Theo showing up in Gail's office telling her that Dave reassigned him to her. Gail doesn't know about it and goes to Dave to ask him about it. In his office he tells her that he assigned Theo to Cindy first, but after two weeks he received a call from his college friend who told him that Cindy treated him like her personal maid to clean up her mess. The latest one was to clean up after what looked like an orgy with a lot of booze and "white powder" everywhere.
Well, Dave tells Gail that he can't risk a scandal in the company and get Cindy fired because she is "essential" for the company and many higher-ups/partners. So, before HR finds out about it he decided to reassigned Theo to her.
Gail realizes that Theo might be a key to her promotion if she can find some dirt on her with Theo's help. Maybe he had access to her personal computer/account etc.. [Motivation and a reason for Gail to keep Theo and to tease him more to get what she wants form him]
The rest like meeting Hugo (one of the partners or the current CEO) and the need to sent Gail on the business trip (archive scene with with no sex) same as the the scenes in the boutique can be reused.
On the Theo path in the boutique I would add a few addition renders. Gail calling him over to tell him to pick up the clothes she asks the sells girl to get. Theo has the option to pick either the red or the black lingerie (same scene with two different lingerie sets).
"Oh, Theo I didn't know that you had such a good taste I think my boyfriend would like the one you picked blablabla.." she changes clothes and shows the lingerie to Theo. He gets unconscious and Gail change her clothes back. Gives Theo a kiss and wakes him up.
[So far there is no reason for Gail to be sexual aroused by Theo, because he didn't earned it yet! Maybe on the business tip they get closer (Kiss, seeing her naked etc..)]
As shown it is possible to change the pace of the scenes by removing parts of the full slutty approach and shifting the scene order and adding a flashback/introduction to display Gail's motivation and reasons same as parts of her personality to support the story and its plot.
Sorry for the long post again!
Here is what I came up with:
Game starts the same as it does now. Gail is in Dave's office with the purpose to use her body to get the promotion.
She isn't sure, if what she is going to do is the best choice, but she needs this promotion for various reason:
- because she earns it,
- for the pay raise (to pay off college debts, pay rent, covering for her boyfriend too, etc..)
Struggling with the situation, she puts herself into, she remembers back how all of that started.
[Flashback - setting the groundwork for Gail's flirtatious offensive] [new images]
Gail reviews how Dave announced the open Regional Branch Manager position to his underlings.
Gail is one of the the few who survived the last purge of colleagues who weren't able to reach their set goals.
Later Cindy tells Gail that she is going to apply for the new position and she will do whatever it takes to get the promotion. [Cindy has joined the company a year before Gail but shortly after that she got promoted]
Gail knows that Cindy has her way with the colleagues and even has connection to the companies partners [Note: instead having a single CEO there are more partners on the board] this might explain why she didn't get fired even for her low-performance and not reaching her goals [setting up the rivalry between Cindy and Gail].
Gail knows that she has no chance to get the promotion if she has to compete with Cindy in a fair and square competition.
The past year she tried not to revealing much of her voluptuous breast and firm body by not wearing sexy and body firm clothes/dresses at work, but instead stick to casual non-sexy one - not like Cindy who didn't miss any chance to flirt and show off her slender body and perky breast to everyone [subliminal note about Gail being Bi].
At home in front of the mirror she inspects her body and remembers what her mother [in case for keeping the incest tag otherwise Gail's best friend's mother] [sister/Gail's best friend is Ava] told her: "Never be ashamed to use what nature/God has giving to you to use for your own advantage!".
After all, she needs the money and the job situation due to the current economic crisis isn't the best either. Who knows maybe in just a few years she might become a junior partner too, if her performance continues to rise as it does the past year.
Shortly after she started to wear more revealing and sexy clothes at work shes noticed all the glances from her colleagues and superiors which didn't happen before. [Reuse of the hallway image]
Cindy confronts Gail in the bathroom and tells her that she knows what Gail tries to pull off and that it will never work etc which leads to current situation in Dave's office... [Reuse of bathroom scene with Cindy and Gail wearing the sexy outfit]
-- End of flashback/Introduction scene --
Back in Dave's office the scene plays has it does in v0.3.
When Dave touch her leg the first choice shows up: let him continue (Corruption +1 | Dave +1) or stop him (GF +1 | Nathan +1).
Dave gets pushy and wants more from Gail. Choice: Compensate (Dave plays with Gail's boobs and sucks them) (Corruption +1 | Dave +1) or Stop him and leave his office (GF +1 | Nathan +1).
[Note: leaving Dave's office might end in a game over or to another attempt of Dave getting into Gail's pants]
Compensate enables another choice option: Go further (BJ) (Corruption +1 | Dave +1) or Stop him (no points).
"Stop him" choice leads to Gail being in control (dominate/playing bossy) and "Go further" her being submissive. [Note: No sex scene with Dave at current pace and no promotion yet.]
A few days later hallway scene with Theo.
[Additional scenes with Dave playing with Gail's boobs.. he gets more demanding... HJ, BJ, Footjob, Boobjob; Maybe some an extra scene with Cindy too to show that she is up to compete with Gail]
Theo showing up in Gail's office telling her that Dave reassigned him to her. Gail doesn't know about it and goes to Dave to ask him about it. In his office he tells her that he assigned Theo to Cindy first, but after two weeks he received a call from his college friend who told him that Cindy treated him like her personal maid to clean up her mess. The latest one was to clean up after what looked like an orgy with a lot of booze and "white powder" everywhere.
Well, Dave tells Gail that he can't risk a scandal in the company and get Cindy fired because she is "essential" for the company and many higher-ups/partners. So, before HR finds out about it he decided to reassigned Theo to her.
Gail realizes that Theo might be a key to her promotion if she can find some dirt on her with Theo's help. Maybe he had access to her personal computer/account etc.. [Motivation and a reason for Gail to keep Theo and to tease him more to get what she wants form him]
The rest like meeting Hugo (one of the partners or the current CEO) and the need to sent Gail on the business trip (archive scene with with no sex) same as the the scenes in the boutique can be reused.
On the Theo path in the boutique I would add a few addition renders. Gail calling him over to tell him to pick up the clothes she asks the sells girl to get. Theo has the option to pick either the red or the black lingerie (same scene with two different lingerie sets).
"Oh, Theo I didn't know that you had such a good taste I think my boyfriend would like the one you picked blablabla.." she changes clothes and shows the lingerie to Theo. He gets unconscious and Gail change her clothes back. Gives Theo a kiss and wakes him up.
[So far there is no reason for Gail to be sexual aroused by Theo, because he didn't earned it yet! Maybe on the business tip they get closer (Kiss, seeing her naked etc..)]
As shown it is possible to change the pace of the scenes by removing parts of the full slutty approach and shifting the scene order and adding a flashback/introduction to display Gail's motivation and reasons same as parts of her personality to support the story and its plot.
Sorry for the long post again!
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I am agree with you, but need more compete between Gail and Cindy. Maybe both of them fuck Dave. And Dave deside witch one to choose depends of performance.I was thinking a lot about how the game could slow down the pace to a level compare to Jessica O'Neil's Hard News with a strong female MC and keep the same images at the same time without the need to redo them.
Here is what I came up with:
Game starts the same as it does now. Gail is in Dave's office with the purpose to use her body to get the promotion.
She isn't sure, if what she is going to do is the best choice, but she needs this promotion for various reason:
- because she earns it,
- for the pay raise (to pay of college debts, pay rent, etc..)
Struggling with the situation she puts herself into she remembers back how all of that started.
[Flashback - setting the groundwork for Gail's flirtatious offensive] [new images]
Gail reviews how Dave announced the open Regional Branch Manager position to his underlings.
Gail is one of the the few who survived the last purge of colleagues who weren't able to reach their set goals.
Later Cindy tells Gail that she is going to apply for the new position and she will do whatever it takes to get the promotion. [Cindy has joined the company a year before Gail but shortly after that she got promoted]
Gail knows that Cindy has her way with the colleagues and even has connection to the companies partners [Note: instead having a single CEO there are more partners on the board] this might explain why she didn't get fired even for her low-performance and not reaching her goals [setting up the rivalry between Cindy and Gail].
Gail knows that she has no chance to get the promotion if she has to compete with Cindy in a fair and square competition.
The past year she tried not to revealing much of her voluptuous breast and firm body by not wearing sexy and body firm clothes/dresses at work, but instead stick to casual non-sexy one - not like Cindy who didn't miss any chance to flirt and show off her slender body and perky breast to everyone [subliminal note about Gail being Bi].
At home in front of the mirror she inspects her body and remembers what her mother [in case for keeping the incest tag otherwise Gail's best friend's mother] [sister/Gail's best friend Ava] told her: "Never be ashamed to use what nature/God has giving to you to use for your own advantage!".
After all, she needs the money and the job situation due to the current economic crisis isn't the best either. Who knows maybe in just a few years she might become a junior partner too, if her performance continues to rise as it does the past year.
Shortly after she started to wear more revealing and sexy clothes at work and notes all the glances from her colleagues and superiors. [Reuse of the hallway image]
Cindy confronts Gail in the bathroom and tells her that she knows what Gail tries to pull off and that it will never work etc which leads to current situation in Dave's office... [Reuse of bathroom scene with Cindy and Gail wearing the sexy outfit]
-- End of flashback/Introduction scene --
Back in Dave's office the scene plays has it does in v0.3.
When Dave touch her leg the first choice shows up: let him continue (Corruption +1 | Dave +1) or stop him (GF +1 | Nathan +1).
Dave gets pushy and wants more from Gail. Choice: Compensate (Dave plays with Gail's boobs and sucks them) (Corruption +1 | Dave +1) or Stop him and leave his office (GF +1 | Nathan +1).
[Note: leaving Dave's office might end in a game over or to another attempt of Dave getting into Gail's pants]
Compensate enables another choice option: Go further (BJ) (Corruption +1 | Dave +1) or Stop him (no points).
"Stop him" choice leads to Gail being in control (dominate/playing bossy) and "Go further" her being submissive. [Note: No sex scene with Dave at current pace and no promotion yet.]
A few days later hallway scene with Theo.
[Additional scenes with Dave playing with Gail's boobs.. he gets more demanding... HJ, BJ, Footjob, Boobjob; Maybe some an extra scene with Cindy too to show that she is up to compete with Gail]
Theo showing up in Gail's office telling her that Dave reassigned him to her. Gail doesn't know about it and goes to Dave to ask him about it. In his office he tells her that he assigned Theo to Cindy first, but after two weeks he received a call from his college friend who told him that Cindy treated him like her personal maid to clean up her mess. The latest one was to clean up after what looked like an orgy with a lot of booze and "white powder" everywhere.
Well, Dave tells Gail that he can't risk a scandal in the company and get Cindy fired because she is "essential" for the company and many higher-ups/partners. So, before HR finds out about it he decided to reassigned Theo to her.
Gail realizes that Theo might be a key to her promotion if she can find some dirt on her with Theo's help. Maybe he had access to her personal computer/account etc.. [Motivation and a reason for Gail to keep Theo and to tease him more to get what she wants form him]
The rest like meeting Hugo (one of the partners or the current CEO) and the need to sent Gail on the business trip (archive scene with with no sex) same as the the scenes in the boutique can be reused.
On the Theo path in the boutique I would add a few addition renders. Gail calling him over to tell him to pick up the clothes she asks the sells girl to get. Theo has the option to pick either the red or the black lingerie (same scene with two different lingerie sets).
"Oh, Theo I didn't know that you had such a good taste I think my boyfriend would like the one you picked blablabla.." she changes clothes and shows the lingerie to Theo. He gets unconscious and Gail change her clothes back. Gives Theo a kiss and wakes him up.
[So far there is no reason for Gail to be sexual aroused by Theo, because he didn't earned it yet! Maybe on the business tip they get closer (Kiss, seeing her naked etc..)]
As shown it is possible to change the pace of the scenes by removing parts of the full slutty approach and shifting the scene order and adding a flashback/introduction to display Gail's motivation and reasons same as parts of her personality to support the story and its plot.
Sorry for the long post again!
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On the long run to get the promotion (after proper corruption and gathering enough relationship points) it could be one one of the options.
Possible that Dave wants to take the full advantage of the situation by stalling his decision and letting them compete even more!
Nah the progression in this game is fine. I just want to see cheating wives/girlfriends take a D that isn't their partners. If you want to play a slow burning game, AWAM is the game for you. Zero sex scenes with Sophia except her Hubby in 3+ years. That's bullshit.
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That is fine too if Dev's like that style of a game.
Anna Exciting Affection is build like that: You wanna fuck person a, b, c, d, e ... Yes | No... move to next scene.
And dev of Anna is not doing bad on Patreon either.
Hello everyone I just started the game in android and in the first time I see the boyfriend I get the error screen any solution?
Download the latest version please, if you’re gallery is not working that means you have the beta build...
