VN Ren'Py Onhold The Office [Ep. 3 v0.3] [Damaged Coda]

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Forced Sexual Scene

  • All good no problem, keep going with the story

    Votes: 2,338 70.7%

  • No, players should be allowed to skip sexual scenes (might cause to skip few details in the plot)

    Votes: 288 8.7%

  • Don't mind but would be happier if I had the option to skip

    Votes: 679 20.5%
  • Total voters
    3,305
  • Poll closed .
Sorrow85

Sorrow85

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Hello everyone,

Ok so I was a little confused after the release of Episode 1[v0.3] but now I've sorted things out and I'm really confident about how the game and the plot will proceed. Thank you all for participating in the polls that did really help me sort things out and get back on track. Hope to give you guys a much more entertaining update. I'll try my best to add a solid amount of content.

Note: Each episode will have three versions.

Date of commencement : 23/10/2020 . Setting the deadline : 23/12/2020. If games is well done before that will definitely release it sooner.

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PietruccioTheHilander

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interesting game
-the font of the menu text is difficult to read, I recommend a simpler font
-The character models and settings are quite simple
- simple and sometimes obvious story
-even the dialogues are very superficial
-I don't like characters with big tits and big asses, they are too disproportionate
-Does the protagonist already wake up with makeup on her face?
- looks a lot like something already seen (JOHN)
3 stars
 
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PietruccioTheHilander

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Frank Rosario said:
Here is the Italian translation of "The office" version "Ep1v0.3".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

The link is: Mega
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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "The office" versione "Ep1v0.3".
Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".

Il link è: Mega
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E se questa traduzione vi piace, non dimenticate di mettere un Like, sempre ben accetto!
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why .exe?
 
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cold_arctus said:
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Amazing renders and a very promising game with nice ideas in it. Unfortunately the game suffers from a series of incoherencies among the story and dialogues.

Here is what I have found which don't work so well with the current game. It is just my feedback which you are free to take or to leave.

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The major issue with the game is that we, the players, are thrown into the middle of a scene and have to make a decision either to fuck our boss (Dave), and gain corruption points, or to compensate with him, which, however, also lead to fuck him but gain points for being a good girlfriend.

It is extremely difficult to make such a decision if you don't know much about any character. Why should choose the good girlfriend option, if I don't know what kind of guy her boyfriend is?

Furthermore, Gail's motivation to act all sexy and slutty for her boss is very thin too. Just because Gail thinks she earned it, because she "clocked" more hours and has a bachelor degree doesn't makes her the better candidate for the promotion.

If she thinks she is so much better than Cindy, then why doesn't she quit and starts somewhere else? [I know, I know, porn game logic!] All I'm trying to say is: give Gail a better motivation/ reason for what she does to get the promotion. Later in the game we learn that Nathan spends to much money on his photography equipment and their current apartment is expensive. Another motivation could be that Cindy "stole" Gail's work etc...

However, what is missing is an introduction chapter. A chapter were we players meet the MC, Gail, and learn a little bit about her and a few other characters like her boyfriend. This way the player might get a feeling what kind of personality Gail has. Right now she must suffer from a bi-polar disorder! She swings from being a feminist to a full incest-loving lust machine (fucking her sister) with a kink to SM (dominate towards Theo and submissive towards Dave). We also learn that she hasn't always been a sex bomb as we know her now, but her being chubby.

So, all in all her having sex with Dave might happen to fast. A slow teasing and corruption approach towards Dave in combination with the need to compete with Cindy might be better. At the same time it could affect her normal life, her boyfriend etc.

You have great ideas for your game, but the game at its current state doesn't look very thought through.
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excellent analysis
 
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Tried downloading 0.3 for Android and it gives me an error the first time I meet the boyfriend.

Code: 
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' 'images/version_0.2/41.jpg'>:
Exception: Could not load image 'images/version_0.2/41.jpg': error('JPEG loading error',)

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "script.rpyc", line 1206, in script
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 708, in execute
  File "renpy/exports.py", line 1345, in say
  File "renpy/character.py", line 1142, in __call__
  File "renpy/character.py", line 842, in do_display
  File "renpy/character.py", line 591, in display_say
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 297, in interact
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2702, in interact
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3194, in interact_core
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2094, in draw_screen
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 490, in renpy.display.render.render_screen (gen/renpy.display.render.c:6805)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:3520)
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 722, in render
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:4075)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:3520)
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 722, in render
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:4075)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:3520)
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 722, in render
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:4075)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:3520)
  File "accelerator.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:3520)
  File "renpy/display/image.py", line 500, in render
  File "renpy/display/image.py", line 306, in wrap_render
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:4075)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen/renpy.display.render.c:3520)
  File "renpy/display/im.py", line 583, in render
  File "renpy/display/im.py", line 266, in get
  File "renpy/display/im.py", line 628, in load
  File "renpy/display/pgrender.py", line 162, in load_image
Exception: Could not load image 'images/version_0.2/41.jpg': error('JPEG loading error',)
Can someone help me please?
 
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