VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Outong [v0.1.4] [Gon D. Eser]

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TigerWolfe

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This needs an editing/proofreading pass. The English is rough to read and the over reliance on "blah blah blah" is grating. Seems like there's a story here so I hope it gets a better translation. Models are definitely cute.
 
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Tuatha Dé

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it would have been funny if when you find scarlet masturbating the mc comes in and says: "Masturbating while your * was missing for 3 days"
It's not a game with a great story so putting in those humorous moments would be nice.
 
TheimmortalP

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Well, its clearly the developer is not good at English. I'm not a native English speaker myself but I can still notice the poor writing.
To be clear the story itself and the characters is "not that bad" when compared to some other porn games on this site where the entire plot is the mc father die and the mc trying to fuck his mother and sister.
But the way the story is being told, the way characters talk in poorly written English make it bad.
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Oh, it's way more than just it being a bad translation. The script from what I've seen is godawful.

And again, it's got the tag for combat, but they skip the combat!
 
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joryh

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TigerWolfe said:
This needs an editing/proofreading pass. The English is rough to read and the over reliance on "blah blah blah" is grating. Seems like there's a story here so I hope it gets a better translation. Models are definitely cute.
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SO much. I'm barely past the first fight and being told I'm the chosen one, and I'm so annoyed by it I've already fought off the urge to delete it more than once.
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Never mind. I couldn't resist any longer. The dialog is trivial and consists primarily of them repeating what someone just said to them. Maybe I'll check in on this in a season or two to see if that's been fixed, cause right now, I can't even bear to ctrl and read only a pittance of it. And no, there is no combat. Not in the way it'd deserve a tag, cause it has nothing to do with you choosing skills or attacks or anything. It's just scenes. At least up to when I fucked off at the Cindy rescue.
 
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And yes, to date myself, I saw it in the theater... So if you're into sci-fi, hunt this gem down! (and yes there are tiddies!)
 
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estrada777 said:
Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

Version: 0.1.3

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Joker Jack

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It's great so far but the things i don't like about it currently,1:MC should learn to let things go sometime(keeps trying to get people to tell him what's bothering them or shit like that, nothing wrong with that but if they don't wanna tell then let it go instead of insisting)2:MC is also overconfident like too fucking overconfident, 3: Too much secrets, i understand the goddess keeping secrets cause mc is not ready yet but other characters doing it is annoying af, especially deciding not to tell what could potentially endanger mc or other people in the name of not wanting to worry them, i wish they added the option to bluntly say no when Lucy ask to help viona if she was ever in danger so that she can rot alone cause that what you get for keeping too much secret instead of speaking up so that we can at least try to fucking help you. Apart from all these is a solid 3/5 for me
 
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okay i personally love this game it's one of the few games that i get attached to like melody i played that games 4 times :ROFLMAO: my point is we wait so long for these updates is it worth it for me to play or am i gonna get disappointment at a 5 minute update (i know it's gonna be longer then 5 mins)
 
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3.30 star(s) 19 Votes