I think it's an OK mini-game, but there are a few things that should be changed. First of all, the death of the father. It gives really bad vibes. Mother and son are in mourning and they decide to deal with that... by fucking? And, at least in the part of the mother, by having a romance with her son? Too sick. It would be better if the father left the family for a younger bitch or something, so son and mother are angry with him and maybe even have money problems because the guy left a gambling debt or something that they should pay. That would get mom and son closer since they have to solve their problem together, but without the sadness of a death in the family and the mourning. It would be more plausible.
The use of the dead dad was because of how many incest games use that trope. Dealing with loss by fucking family members was something I always found funny so I wanted to use that.
I understand why some find it a little sour, but me personally I will never not laugh at how ridiculous it is. And I'm personally not a fan of dad being a complete asshole in these games, it always feels like making the son a white knight for the mom and I don't really find that fun
Dad being dead is basically a meme on this forum when it comes to incest games
Also, the son has too many wrinkles in body and face. He looks almost the age of the mother. He has the body of an old man. Ripped, but old. I wouldn't like if the son would look like a kid, but about 20 or 25 would be great. Now he looks 35. And that tattoo? Is he in a biker gang or something? And the cock seems to be from other body
About the mom, I like that she has a mature body, although it's a bit too exaggerated. Slightly smaller tits and maybe butt would be great.
When it comes to the son we'll just have to agree to disagree. I wanted him older than the usual incest protagonist and I like how he turned out. I was aiming for 25+ and that's how I feel he looks, and a tattoo is just a tattoo. I see plenty of people with skull tattoos that have nothing to do with bikers, at lest not where I live, it might be different where you are.
The mature mom look was what I was going for so I'm glad that's working for people, and when it comes to exaggerated tits and ass. That's jut what I prefer, compared to some of my other models Giselle is actually pretty tame lol.
Finally, I would change the focus and the ending. The mom could step by step convince the son even of spite of himself, and at the end, when she's about to call the therapist, the son would take the phone from her hand and says to her "you know mom? Actually... don't bother. I think I'm OK with this situation..."
Similar to what I said above, the ending is a gag about using incest to deal with loss. The ending you described isn't what I was going for. I understand why some aren't keen on that ending, thinking it was me judging the genre, but it was just me having a laugh.
And I was happy with how this all turned out.
Hi, my 2 scents for your next game, the panty go on top of the suspender belt, if you see it under it's only for photo-shoot/modeling.
Was actually unaware of this little fact when it comes suspenders, I don't wear them personally lol
The asset came like that built in, there was no option to place the panties on top.
As for the Son, you don't have to make him so sad/angry as counter-part of being a horny dog, a better balanced mindset need to be found, here i don't even understand why he just don't send his mom to therapy 1st thing 1st the 1st day with your character writing...
Anyway good luck.
Evan is kind of an idiot, he thought giving her what she wanted would fix the problem but it just made a whole knew one lol
If possible, to have a repeatable scense and get to choose what to do, in morning, evening and night, and to choose to sleep with his mom, she wakes him up and so on.
It will be great to enrich the contents.
That is kind of more sandbox style content, which I'm personally not to keen on.
I have considered a part two involving the therapist, so we'll see what happens