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That's why i said kinda......
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cuz it doesn't fit that well.....
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cuz it doesn't fit that well.....
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It's true, but a lot of my patrons knew me from here. And they didn't give opinions. So this forum is a nice place to know if there's something bad about the game, like the comment below you.
I agree that the sound is annoying. Will consider about that.
Yes, it's more like Yuri's Part Time Job. Because the MC doesn't feel humiliated.
Re: Alarms.
A couple times in the first week to establish his routine? That seems reasonable. But by Day 27 I'll be chucking the game files out the metaphorical window!
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Only 3 first days in the game (you haven't heard that anymore since the 4th day in game, right?). That's why I'm considering if I should remove it or not.Re: Alarms.
A couple times in the first week to establish his routine? That seems reasonable. But by Day 27 I'll be chucking the game files out the metaphorical window!
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Red choices are the ones which are bad eitherways regardless of route and you will miss sex scenes.
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Ok ... the premise is strange. The start is awkward and confusing - "another asian girl" - sure the MC may have seen more than one up to that point, but his thinking is just exposition for the player, and we havent seen any other asian girls. And its pointless. You could just start without that and with a proper introduction to the MC and his current situation (recently graduated, started at that agency and stuff). Then you can cut alot of the boring 1 liner text later on.
The writing is so plain and simple ...
- I think I should have a bath before going to work.
- After having a bath, I changed into my suit and walk to bus stop.
- It takes me half an hour to arrive at the office.
- That is X.
- She is an assistant of my boss, Y.
- I work as a photographer here.
- This office is an agency.
... you get it. This way, the MC sounds more like a kindergarten boy or maybe elementary school ^^
Our first task is to go shopping the the wife of the invisible boss - after we had nothing to do at work. Never had a day as an employer without any work - your boss will always find something to do - and no, not shopping with his sexy wife
And with a journalism major he gets a job as a photographer? ... Sure, photojournalism is probably part of that, but that is not a photographer for modeling stuff ... right? ... And then we become a model? ... after the current content I dont think that will make more sense than the rest.
60% of the content is some cross promotional content for other games.
The game falls flat on every aspect. There is no character building, the setup is weird and confusing, the renders are mediocre and the amount of content is short (cut out the cross promo and it is even less).
The game does not introduce you to any of the characters or the MC. There is the fresh graduated student MC, the invisible boss, his (probably?) hot/slutwife, the asian girl, the blond office chick, the other asian girl and another girl with an undead dude (all 3 cross promo). That is all there is to say about the "characters".
I get it, when you cant produce 400 high quality renders for you first release, but than pick them wisely and use them to set the stage for your game. That is just writing. Just look at the successful games our there - they are a success because the have characters the players care about.
so - tl,dr: mediocre at best. Nothing terrible and most of that can be fixed with a better writer. Currently its a bland game, with bland writing and bland "characters" (you cant really call the render model that to be honest).
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The writing is so plain and simple ...
- I think I should have a bath before going to work.
- After having a bath, I changed into my suit and walk to bus stop.
- It takes me half an hour to arrive at the office.
- That is X.
- She is an assistant of my boss, Y.
- I work as a photographer here.
- This office is an agency.
... you get it. This way, the MC sounds more like a kindergarten boy or maybe elementary school ^^
Our first task is to go shopping the the wife of the invisible boss - after we had nothing to do at work. Never had a day as an employer without any work - your boss will always find something to do - and no, not shopping with his sexy wife
And with a journalism major he gets a job as a photographer? ... Sure, photojournalism is probably part of that, but that is not a photographer for modeling stuff ... right? ... And then we become a model? ... after the current content I dont think that will make more sense than the rest.
60% of the content is some cross promotional content for other games.
The game falls flat on every aspect. There is no character building, the setup is weird and confusing, the renders are mediocre and the amount of content is short (cut out the cross promo and it is even less).
The game does not introduce you to any of the characters or the MC. There is the fresh graduated student MC, the invisible boss, his (probably?) hot/slutwife, the asian girl, the blond office chick, the other asian girl and another girl with an undead dude (all 3 cross promo). That is all there is to say about the "characters".
I get it, when you cant produce 400 high quality renders for you first release, but than pick them wisely and use them to set the stage for your game. That is just writing. Just look at the successful games our there - they are a success because the have characters the players care about.
so - tl,dr: mediocre at best. Nothing terrible and most of that can be fixed with a better writer. Currently its a bland game, with bland writing and bland "characters" (you cant really call the render model that to be honest).
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I hadn't any color code for choices ...
Kingpin Route: You join his business and seduce the women. They will be corrupted over time. 2 branches: Domination & Sharing (both branches contain Harem).
one question....how u can became kingpin and not share?
one question....how u can became kingpin and not share?
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Lucian Light said:
I've always find it funny that in this games the bad guy route its the one to have the sharing route, because irl that would never happen, no mafia boss or kingpin would do that, trust me i know what im talking about, here in Mexico we had cases of people being murdered only because they talked nice to some narco girl so yeah kinda weird, but its good to see a dev that knows his plan and go with it, anyway good luck with the game.
I've always find it funny that in this games the bad guy route its the one to have the sharing route, because irl that would never happen, no mafia boss or kingpin would do that, trust me i know what im talking about, here in Mexico we had cases of people being murdered only because they talked nice to some narco girl so yeah kinda weird, but its good to see a dev that knows his plan and go with it, anyway good luck with the game.
soo....u will made porn actres/whores from them and kill customers?Thank you, guys. You two answered each other's question already.
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Don't you think answering that will spoil the game? I don't think letting people know what will happen in the future months before it happens is a wise choice to develop a game.
idk it just doesnt made sence
i would definitely like to see dominance route more than romance, but still cause it doesnt made sence, safe vote choice for detective harem route is better for me
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So you're my newest patron, I guess? Since no one sees that unless a patron.idk it just doesnt made sence
i would definitely like to see dominance route more than romance, but still cause it doesnt made sence, safe vote choice for detective harem route is better for me
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When I made that poll, I intended to write the details (which explained what you asked). But I didn't, so I can see how much people want 'sharing'. After the poll ends, there will be a detailed explanation about routes, which will answer your question. That's the reason why I haven't answered it yet.probably
But of course, the answer will be considered carefully so it won't spoil the game.