VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Primaries [v0.07] [JoJoBrady]

[Normdk]

Second: A big point is being made about Isabella. Her character will be explained a bit more down the line but I do understand that not everyone is happy with her first few scenes. I probably could've handled her introduction better, so I am sorry if it left a bitter taste in your mouth. I tried to calm her down in 0.06 and will continue to do so going forward. I also might add an option to call her out in her introduction scene.

JoJoBrady - Thank you very much for your replies and your vision for the game.
I also support that the write writes and enjoys the story - change too much and your inspiration might dry up and the game can suddenly just pummel downhill.

When that is said - Im very glad you consider the call out option.
For me it was the feeling that Isabella did her thing - while Carter was constantly asking her to stop.
"Are you stroking my hair"
"I thought you just "wanted to chat".."
"your leg is getting to know me a little too well"
"im sure that's a go to line"
"touch my boobs and I'ill certainly have royal blood on my hands"
"I wonder why I have a tough time bying that"

Those are all Carters responses to what Isabella is doing and saying from MC's point of view until he strongly urges Isabella to S T R O K E Carters chin - a weakspot she have.
That was when I was surprised. And I was angry at Isabella first - but now I re-read the scene while writing this - actually much more angry at MC.

The 6 lines above hinted a contained rage building, where Carter keeps trying to ask the advanches from Isabella to stop.
If Carter had shown any type of interest or desire, even a strong blush or a line that asked for more "oh please, im sure you say that to every gal you meet... You cant possible be interested in little me *blush* you are so pritty" <-- anything corny would work for me.

Insteed I see MC giving Isabella the go-for-it and also says where to touch Carter - and I was sitting going "what.. the.. hell.. - your long time friend is asking Isabella to stop, but you dont care and urges Isabella - an unknown - forward.. what..?? Am I the bad perv. now?"

And since this was Isabella's intro, she was the one getting all the anger initially - because she didnt stop so she shares the blame -but now I also feel a tad ... emmm ... regarding our MC.
That was why I got the strong reaction and felt Isabella didnt respect any lines at all.

The later scenes with her was good and I dont dislike her from anything beside the initial "I-dont-care-and-I-touch-who-I-want" attitude.

And I enjoy the game humor and inner dialog a lot - so I hope you will enjoy making this game for a long time
Preferable until the end of the game

Best of luck from here and forward

 

[Harry6hp]

Compressed version?

 

[Harry6hp]

looking forward to the next updates and
thanks for considering to think about that intervene option in Isabella's introduction

and good luck with the future

 

[Deathlore421]

I really hope this hasn't been abandoned, dev hasn't been on f95 since feb 5th, and last confirmed he was working on this jan 25th.

 

[Ａｎデリ]

good game, i hope dev still working it need more content

 

[Princearif]

What is Android alternative?

 

[Princearif]

Really good game! Waiting for update :")

 

[Princearif]

The dev is missing :")

 

[AmazonessKing]

Nice style, mate!

 

[fregonard]

so is that forced lesbian crap avoidable now or do we just choose not to see it happen ? and the game has been here for almost a year and the dev still hasn't put the right tags,is the sandbox still in the game ?

 

[Kellan]

Pretty good game but sex scenes without any text is just dull.

 

[Seveas]

Man, I completely missed this game before. It's great, already one of my top games! Just a little more text during the sex scenes and I have almost nothing else to complain about! Great job!

 

[Nick Nosferatu]

Man, I was looking at my folder yesterday wondering what happened to this game, what a pleasant surprise to see an update.

 

[dudemon]

I just started using android to play games. I'm wondering how i run them from the folder after i unrar them

 

[Someone]

The character design give me a weird feeling i can't grasp.
Is like they are more cartoonish than they should be even for koikatsu standard.
Kinda remind me of Raita and pre-Gantz Oku Hiroya. Is not bad looking. I don't think i ever managed to make the eyes of a character look like this with the koikatsu engine.

 

[Someone]

Played it.
Well, one thing i appreciated is that the dev is aware he is making a porn game. Nice to see once in a while a game that don't need years of updates before the first sex scene. Nice game overally. Would have appreciated if there was more use of the body sliders to avoid the "same character with different hair style/color" effect, but that's just a minor issue.

I honestly don't see it being as serious as the detractors suggest. I don't see any intend to steal Carter away from the MC, if anything, she wants both parts to be involved, and she would love it if the MC and Carter were more intimately together.

Seriously... i see this shit happen all the time. When i've seen that scene i tought "niiiice! threesome incoming"
But look like the usual insecure idiots unleashed their NTR paranoia once again. This shit is becoming a psichosis lately.

 

[Pervo]

My thoughts on playing through this for the first time with this new version are as follows.

Simply speaking, I like it!
There is a natural progression to the story. While it may be following some cliché elements in its approach, it is a story being constructed to reflect the values of love, friendship and heroism, which are very commonly covered elements so one must bear that in mind whilst playing. It is engaging, interesting and incorporates a universe that is relatively vast and has the potential to further expand with ease.

Characters themselves have interesting personalities. None of the key characters display repetitive features, which to me signals good writing and forethought before constructing them. There are features which to me appear out of place but that is expected if this is the developers first foray into story telling.

The designs of characters are visually pleasing. Yes I'm not a fan of the ginormous breasts but they don't out me off enough to stop playing.

In terms of flaws, there are a few things to point out. The key flaw I would point out is the lack of Mc's spine. Whilst I understand it is to reflect his lack of confidence in general, he is literally being pushed around like your standard errand boy. He stutters while making comments. His white knight features are through the roof. It makes empathizing with him very difficult in many situations. A key example being when his supposed best friend knees him in his nads. I don't care what species you belong to, let alone gender, if you knee me in my nads, you'll get a f**king fist to the face. Instead, the Mc fails to even register his displeasure in a strong manner. That is really off putting. Being a nice guy is okay. Being a pushover isn't. I really hope moving forward the Mc will be written with more backbone and ability to call out cunt moves would be incorporated.

I had a similar reaction to the Isabella/Carter first interaction with her coming across like an absolute molester. It seems due to feedback, the option to call her out was added which is the right call so very positive to see the developer has taken feedback on board.

In conclusion, I found the game engaging, if somewhat lacking in certain areas. I will look forward to how it progresses and really hope the developer will complete his project to bring about a solid game.

Cheers Dev!

 

[Thy Fallen One]

Played it.
Well, one thing i appreciated is that the dev is aware he is making a porn game. Nice to see once in a while a game that don't need years of updates before the first sex scene. Nice game overally. Would have appreciated if there was more use of the body sliders to avoid the "same character with different hair style/color" effect, but that's just a minor issue.

Seriously... i see this shit happen all the time. When i've seen that scene i tought "niiiice! threesome incoming"
But look like the usual insecure idiots unleashed their NTR paranoia once again. This shit is becoming a psichosis lately.

Seriously... i see this shit happen all the time. when i see that scene i see ntr. but it looks like the usual sexist idiots unleash their girl on girl dont count as relationships lesbians dont exist. This shit is becoming a psychoses lately that dont believe a girl can steal a girl.

 

[Someone]

Seriously... i see this shit happen all the time. when i see that scene i see ntr. but it looks like the usual sexist idiots unleash their girl on girl dont count as relationships lesbians dont exist. This shit is becoming a psychoses lately that dont believe a girl can steal a girl.

Oh, you copypasted what i wrote and changed something...
Oh, well... i guess i was wrong on everything and i must re-evaluate my life.

 

[JoJoBrady]

Once again, I appreciate all the feedback!

Again, sorry for the wait for the 0.07 release! If I feel like the next release is taking a bit of time I will be more vocal here, but I do intend to finish the game.

Cheers until the next post!