- Jan 2, 2019
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Can't do anything about the Gollum eyes, but I can do something about the grammar. Attached is a proofed script file. I also took the liberty of changing the wife's name from Broke to Brooke.The poor spelling and punctuation in the summary alone is a bad sign, but I'll check this out. Agree with many others have said about the daughter's eyes making her look like Gollum They need to be bigger and closer together.
Hopefully the dev takes you up on the offer! A lot of people (including myself) busted on the English and daughter's look, but this game has potential and I hope it does well. Hoping the dev keeps developing this!Can't do anything about the Gollum eyes, but I can do something about the grammar. Attached is a proofed script file. I also took the liberty of changing the wife's name from Broke to Brooke.
Just use the attached UnRen app to extract the .rpa files and overwrite the script file.
Despite the flaws, I found the daughter and the game to be quite charming. Keep up the good work, dev. If you like my proofing, let me know and I'll continue to help you with this project. I also do the proofing for Complex Society.
No sign on Patreon and their Itch page has gone so looks like it may be abandoned, yes.Has the game been abandoned?
No sign of life from the Dev on Patreon for over 3 months....
heya stranger yet another game that looks good, but never gets off the ground...talk about a digital dick teaseTheir itch.io is actually still there as that's where I saw it at before seeing if it was here
I agree, I usually wait until there is a few updates first. because you get into the game then its over and never gets updated again. So many games go this way, its sadAnd this, my friends, is why I only start playing a game that's at least 6 months old with some several updates to boot.
It's not full proof, but It means that around 70-80% of the games I play actually gets the completed tag