It's been a long time since I last checked this one out...
Anyway, here's a few issues I've noticed, most of which are just a single line that doesn't fit with choices I made. The way to find inconsistencies: Say no to everybody.
- On day 19, Lois will thank MC for her present, even if you didn't get her one (only wishlisted it).
- During the karaoke thing on day 61, Kari calls MC her boyfriend while talking to Maddie (though this might be down to her being territorial despite them being just roommates, or maybe she's just drunk already?)
- Shortly after, MC thinks to himself, "This is a side of Kari I've never seen outside the bedroom", even if he's never shared a bed with her.
- The morning of day 67 starts with a short exchange between Kari and MC, starting with Kari saying, "You were incredible last night!", while showing MC waking up alone on the couch like every day.
- And later on day 67, Kiki says, "I thought after yesterday we should clear the air.", although all that happened is her and Lois taking their jackets off.
- Also on day 67, after Sylvie tells MC that the reason for Lois' surgery was a lump, and not anything he said to her, he somehow still feels "an enormous sense of guilt" and wishes he'd never said anything.
- This one is a bit weird. On day 58, after MC brings up Greenfield's suggestion about taking out her implants, there's a line Lois says that seems to start the same way regardless of her relationship with MC, and then appends something relationship-dependent. That line came out during my playthrough as, "I love working for you195." I don't know where the 195 came from, but I guess nothing really gets appended if you have a strictly professional relationship with her, and the 195 is just leftovers from a previous thing?
- For a few days, staring I think on day 65, there's an orphaned "Good morning" line as MC greets the reception girls. Specifically, MC greets Aria (the first he greets), and before Aria replies with "Good morning, Mr. (lastname).", that same line comes from nobody.
Finally, this is a somewhat bigger point. Ashley. If you only ever leave her a small tip when you go to the café, you never even learn her name. But independent from that, MC and Lois talk about her on day 25, and she gets roped into sitting in on those meetings with Randy's victims. And if you go order a coffee from her after that, she still won't know your name, until you start giving her bigger tips and they introduce themselves to each other.
I believe that's everything I found. I'll be sure to give it another read when it's completed.