VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Secret Family [v0.2.0] [Diamond Novels]

[bagodoughnuts]

Where is the written script. I might try to fix if if I knew how to find it.

 

[Deleted member 1766066]

Very promising, script needs a better proofread though

 

[mgtoons]

I wish there were more games with loli that didn't involve you as the dad. I was really excited when I saw this and the renders, but if the the MC's LIs are his daughters then it is a pass. Love loli and anything other than being their dad. Uncle, mom's boyfriend, counselor, etc... so many other options than dad.

 

[Sycho]

Where is the written script. I might try to fix if if I knew how to find it.

Depends on which scripts you're looking for. The Spanish version will be in the "\game" folder, but for "English", it'll be in the "\game\tl\English" folder. But you'll need the latest version of UnRen. Choose both options 1 and 2.

 

[Ayhsel]

If dev are here, they really really need a proof reader. The amount of grammatical mistakes is very big and can only hurt them in the long and short run.

Second, I think we all know where this is going. It is better to include the patchs from the beginning to avoid problems down the road...

Unless I am mistaken and this game will avoid all taboo

 

[TakeALook]

what's this site? it seems empty

You need to create an account on there before you can see any threads.

 

[Karl Smith]

Good morning Good afternoon Good night
It is always good to see new games being released that your characters were made with great care and detail
Long life

 

[Walter Victor]

You need to make a loli patch, because thanks to some stupid people, this thread will be locked and your Patreon account will be taken down.

F95 doesn't care about 'loli'. It's an available tag, after all, and there are numerous games with that tag. Click on the tag and it will list them. There are over 400 of them, some, of course, abandoned, but others completed. What F95 does have a problem with is sex with prepubescent girls.

Here's the rule:
7. Content (a game, image, video, story, animation, etc.) depicting nudity or sexualization or sexual/erotic activity involving prepubescent character(s) is prohibited. A "prepubescent character" is one that visually shows no sign of puberty, or if non-visual is otherwise clearly intended to represent a prepubescent character. 2D and 'unrealistic' depictions are generally looked upon more favorably. As this involves some discretion, if you are unsure ask a Staff Member. [Emphasis mine]

The blonde may be a close call. She looks very young facially, but her tits are certainly those of a more mature girl.

As is mentioned in the rule, it's all discretionary.

Patreon, of course, will have none of this - incest OR loli.

 

[Dolphin3000]

Very good start! Beautiful female characters, and nice starting point.


Advice:

- English needs proofreading

- In order to avoid future ban or deletion, ages and relationship (daughter, niece, wife, sister, father etc.) should be input by the player at the beginning of the game. (Default would be 18 for lower age and friend for relationship)

- Sometimes the story jumps considerable amount of time. I believe the transition of time should be more fluid. For instance. The wife calls them for dinner and right after the MC is talking to his niece in the bedroom. Then he is in the living room and goes to his bedroom. I suppose a quick scene of the dinner, and his niece asking him to put her to bed, then the MC goes to the living room, later the MC checks on his daughter and after that he goes to bed with his wife, would be smoother.

- The game has already too many possible romanceable characters, and promises to add more. In the long run it will be difficult to add content for each of them in the updates, leaving players frustrated for the small amount of content or even the lack of content involving their favorite girl. (So, don't add more romanceable characters)

Keep up the good work!

 

[Pudthumper]

She looks cute to me

I agree that she's cute but I also agree that her face could use some adjustment.

 

[Pudthumper]

F95 doesn't care about 'loli'. It's an available tag, after all, and there are numerous games with that tag. Click on the tag and it will list them. There are over 400 of them, some, of course, abandoned, but others completed. What F95 does have a problem with is sex with prepubescent girls.

Here's the rule:
7. Content (a game, image, video, story, animation, etc.) depicting nudity or sexualization or sexual/erotic activity involving prepubescent character(s) is prohibited. A "prepubescent character" is one that visually shows no sign of puberty, or if non-visual is otherwise clearly intended to represent a prepubescent character. 2D and 'unrealistic' depictions are generally looked upon more favorably. As this involves some discretion, if you are unsure ask a Staff Member. [Emphasis mine]

The blonde may be a close call. She looks very young facially, but her tits are certainly those of a more mature girl.

As is mentioned in the rule, it's all discretionary.

Patreon, of course, will have none of this - incest OR loli.

So if she's got tits, she fits?

 

[El_Loco]

F95 doesn't care about 'loli'. It's an available tag, after all, and there are numerous games with that tag. Click on the tag and it will list them. There are over 400 of them, some, of course, abandoned, but others completed. What F95 does have a problem with is sex with prepubescent girls.

Here's the rule:
7. Content (a game, image, video, story, animation, etc.) depicting nudity or sexualization or sexual/erotic activity involving prepubescent character(s) is prohibited. A "prepubescent character" is one that visually shows no sign of puberty, or if non-visual is otherwise clearly intended to represent a prepubescent character. 2D and 'unrealistic' depictions are generally looked upon more favorably. As this involves some discretion, if you are unsure ask a Staff Member. [Emphasis mine]

The blonde may be a close call. She looks very young facially, but her tits are certainly those of a more mature girl.

As is mentioned in the rule, it's all discretionary.

Patreon, of course, will have none of this - incest OR loli.

Thank you for showing me this demonic rule #7. I honestly don't understand it. It's just a game, a human fantasy. That is, he can not portray his fantasy with the help of renderers, you need to leave everything in your head? And as murder and dismemberment-please see, just write " 18+", and as loli-ban everything, close everything.

 

[Chimba]

 

[Ripson]

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[Aristos]

Ridiculous story, cringeworthy dialoges, text full of grammatical and spelling mistakes (and I'm talking about the Spanish version, which I presume is the dev's native language), weird faces everywhere, and of course the "delightful" totally adult girls who have to be told to go to sleep and tucked in in bed.

Any game with loli content will automatically get 4 stars no matter how crappy it is. This one was no exception.

 

[HandofVecna]

I'm not going to trash the game but it does need a lot of work. It's just a .00001 at this point.

Get yourself a native English speaker on here to help you out. That would be a huge step. I would mostly agree with all the other constructive criticism people have given thus far.

Good luck.

 

[Vrijgeest]

It is a mess. Sorry it just is. Please get a proofreader. Please get some structure in the relationships. The suggestion that the player sets the relationships and the ages is a good one. The sister does not look old enough to have kids as she is still a kid herself. Of course it is fantasy but there are limits. A more structured approach is required.

 

[rKnight]

Visually the game is nice and I hope it keeps the same way in terms of visual quality. The dialog is odd, the narrative and characterization combine to make the whole affair seem like the first draft of the writer, it needs a proofreader.

You have to make decisions to deal with all the lolis who live in your house. You will decide which way to go.

"LOLI LOVE IS CRUEL LOVE"

Loli: "I have no choice when "BIG brother" tell me to TAKE OFF my clothes... I HAVE A FAMILY TO FEED!"

 

[Sycho]

The dialog is odd, the narrative and characterization combine to make the whole affair seem like the first draft of the writer, it needs a proofreader.



"LOLI LOVE IS CRUEL LOVE"

Loli: "I have no choice when "BIG brother" tell me to TAKE OFF my clothes... I HAVE A FAMILY TO FEED!"

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And a family to breed.

 

[Hybris]

The blond girl has a botched surgery face. Reminds me of ghoul's from fallout.

I was thinking more of the "Who's" from the live action version of Dr. Seuss's How the Grinch stole Christmas.

But yeah she is absolutely a boner killer. That said the rest of the game shows great promise.