Hey Dev!
This is some feedback after playing some more today. I really like the characters visuals, every girl is very good looking and even MC is very handsome and unique. I also see that you're super good at making great expressions that manage to convey feelings well! Very few devs even care about that, I see a bunch of games where eyebrows barely move. 10/10
There is this one sequence of scenes that I think could be improved with a bit of reordering of events and rewriting. I'll try to explain as best as I can but it might be a bit long, but rest assured it's not criticism, I just feel like it could be improved. Anyway lets get to it.
PS: english is not my first language, if reading feels clunky then that's the reason, sorry.
The part I'm talking about is that long scene between the girls in their apartment at night. The way it is right now I dont think it feels impactful enough and you could use this chance to present better each girl personality.
Living Room - Mickey vs Abbi
Living Room - Isi x Abbi
Balcony Isi x Mickey
Balcony Isi x Mickey x Abbi
Bert Flashback
Balcony again
My thoughts with all of this
Future
Anyway, that's all I had to say, thank you for reading if you did and good luck with everything