I played the game and it is overall well written, I do have a couple gripes with it though :
1) I understand that the MC having a big dick is part of what moves the H story with a couple characters (Lilith / Kittenia), but it is very immersion breaking to see this minuscule bulge with this dwarf character in some non nude CG become this cock that is longer than the MCs own legs. That shit should be monstrous flacid, just saying.
2) Storywise, Lilith is very upfront that when she wants to fuck someone she goes and does it, every other character cockblocks the MC from fucking them, and that makes perfect sense. But after doing everything with Lilith and going to her in the showers, she is literally saying "FUCK ME" and the MC goes up to her and "fingers" her? What? How does that make sense? I understand the dev wanting to keep intercourse for later versions but that scene made zero sense, you want a fingering scene with the whoriest of them all? Fine, but that is probably something that needs changing to keep some character cohesion.