RPGM Completed The Story of Amru and Aisha and the Small Country [Final] [Suzuya]

[lusciousboy01]

So far so good. I love your translation! The only (mild) issue I found so far is pronouns. At the royal ruins right after the prison scene at the start, Lawrence refers to Aisha as "it" for example. Better than "him" though, I guess.

Unfortunately, AI models still has problems with pronouns. You can take screenshots of the wrong pronouns too and I can try to fix them.

 

[InstaPrincess]

Unfortunately, AI models still has problems with pronouns. You can take screenshots of the wrong pronouns too and I can try to fix them.

There is quite a few wrong pronouns but they are only noticable in a few scenes that are weird. I found another mistake though.

 

[lusciousboy01]

There is quite a few wrong pronouns but they are only noticable in a few scenes that are weird. I found another mistake though.

Normally it should be something like \N[2].
It seems the model erased the symbols and I didn't catch that.

I will fix it and upload the new version a few hours later.
Please send me the screenshots through the personal messages if you find any other mistake.

In the long run, a system to update like DazedAnon's looks much more doable.

 

[lusciousboy01]

Fixed and updated.

 

[cdvz23]

You might also want to just release the patches for those of us that already have the game. Less to upload for you too I suppose.

 

[lusciousboy01]

If you have problems with the JoiPlay compability, you can try changing the CustomTranslationEngine.js file in the js/plugins folder with the uploaded file.
It should fix the compability issue originating from my translation.
Unfortunately, there is nothing I can do if the game is originally not compatible with the JoiPlay.

 

[Diegoz]

thx

 

[dokodesuka]

I thought this little message here was so deep and thoughtful:



This happens during a sex scene with the MC, being bestowed by the magical powers of pussay

 

[Komdot]

New art from Suzuya

 

[Supreme Kai]

any fix?

 

[blablablagivemethemoney]

Probably Suzuya's weakest game so far tbh. Strong start but the NTR scenes taper off in the second act.

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[InstaPrincess]

Probably Suzuya's weakest game so far tbh. Strong start but the NTR scenes taper off in the second act.

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I disagree. I loved the Aisha perspective and her sense of duty. And I also loved the brother's reasoning and his actual love affair. It had a lot more depth than other games in this genre. And it isn't following standard NTR conventions.

For me, it's their best.

 

[Komdot]

I agree about the shitty ass ending

 

[Sc0pdawg]

So Aisha just turns into a slut for the usurper? Predictable.

• Starts as the pure, devoted fiancée who swears eternal love to Amru on coronation day.
• Literally hours after the coup she’s spreading her legs for Lawrence while whispering “this is for the kingdom.”
• Every H-scene she’s crying “I have to protect the people!” right up until she’s screaming “Lawrence-sama, harder!” and begging the officers to take turns.
• When Amru finally returns, she has the gall to say “My heart was always yours” while her womb is still dripping with half the court’s cum.

 

[Komdot]

So Aisha just turns into a slut for the usurper? Predictable.

• Starts as the pure, devoted fiancée who swears eternal love to Amru on coronation day.
• Literally hours after the coup she’s spreading her legs for Lawrence while whispering “this is for the kingdom.”
• Every H-scene she’s crying “I have to protect the people!” right up until she’s screaming “Lawrence-sama, harder!” and begging the officers to take turns.
• When Amru finally returns, she has the gall to say “My heart was always yours” while her womb is still dripping with half the court’s cum.

She learned to be a trade item before be a woman.