VN Ren'Py The Theater of Sinners [v0.3 ALPHA 1] [JustXThings]

[soldano]

Hey JustXThings, thanks for this "bonus" scene with Paula. You are awesome, dude.

 

[sirlee]

You need to max Mr. Smith level.

Do all jogging events with Mr. Smith alone. Then the 'waiting for Anton' event. Then do the jogging event with Mrs. Agata.

thanks

 

[Gold613]

I got a question and I followed so played in many different ways I personally possibly think, I barely skipped anything but eventually I tried multiple combinations to skip.

So here is a issue/question I have. For the route with Agnes and Rebecca and their little game, at one point it says a week has passed and Paula has not said anything about Rebecca or whatever, However we do get a point in where we instantly get a bar scene for where Agnes tells a bit about herself before getting a dress chosen for her. There is in all that a conversation about within a week Agnes making Beca eat a cum salad and her mentioning and talking about the dressing for her salad and her eventually saying where she got it from.

I personally thought I was missing something or doing something wrong but I was like huh did do combination wrong or whatever. I mean that sounds like something interesting and I am pretty sure a lot of people would have loved to see the build up to that and the scene itself ( from the point of her seducing and managing to get it and than to eat it in front of Agnes, the whole shebang ) I don't know if this scene is in there or that it was just all text and nothing but I feel if it is the latter that is quite disappointing in itself. Plenty of potential there.

So now that I mentioned my issue and disappointment. I checked because of my frustration to see if there were images to it and there were non so I have to the conclusion it is not even in the game...
I come with the question's of:

1.) Is this something that we will get in the game and will it be a bit more flashed out ?
2.) If the answer is no to question 1 than I have to ask, why not ?

Anyways you have a great game and it does have great potential. I hope to see a lot more of it sooner rather than later, But I really hope that situations like the Agnes her salad "dressing" where it is currently a mention as to what happened instead it being a small ey did this for you and no scene no nothing of it can be pretty much avoided as much as possible and just give the scene and the build up to them actually happening, taking place and letting us see and experience it.

But it is your game so what you do or don't is always up to you.

 

[JustXThings]

I got a question and I followed so played in many different ways I personally possibly think, I barely skipped anything but eventually I tried multiple combinations to skip.

So here is a issue/question I have. For the route with Agnes and Rebecca and their little game, at one point it says a week has passed and Paula has not said anything about Rebecca or whatever, However we do get a point in where we instantly get a bar scene for where Agnes tells a bit about herself before getting a dress chosen for her. There is in all that a conversation about within a week Agnes making Beca eat a cum salad and her mentioning and talking about the dressing for her salad and her eventually saying where she got it from.

I personally thought I was missing something or doing something wrong but I was like huh did do combination wrong or whatever. I mean that sounds like something interesting and I am pretty sure a lot of people would have loved to see the build up to that and the scene itself ( from the point of her seducing and managing to get it and than to eat it in front of Agnes, the whole shebang ) I don't know if this scene is in there or that it was just all text and nothing but I feel if it is the latter that is quite disappointing in itself. Plenty of potential there.

So now that I mentioned my issue and disappointment. I checked because of my frustration to see if there were images to it and there were non so I have to the conclusion it is not even in the game...
I come with the question's of:

1.) Is this something that we will get in the game and will it be a bit more flashed out ?
2.) If the answer is no to question 1 than I have to ask, why not ?

Anyways you have a great game and it does have great potential. I hope to see a lot more of it sooner rather than later, But I really hope that situations like the Agnes her salad "dressing" where it is currently a mention as to what happened instead it being a small ey did this for you and no scene no nothing of it can be pretty much avoided as much as possible and just give the scene and the build up to them actually happening, taking place and letting us see and experience it.

But it is your game so what you do or don't is always up to you.

The short answer would be time, but let's expand a bit on that.

Because I REALLY want to finish the story, I off-screen many events because only knowing they happened is enough to set up the mood. Unfortunately doing everything would require a sheer amount of time and I don't want to spend years on finishing the story. In this case, knowing that Agnes went through a porn discovery journey to find that task for Rebeca is enough to "explain" that Agnes is corrupting herself.

Said so, I rarely write something that I am not going to use in later stages of the story as build ups within other events. Ruth baseball bat is likely to appear, the week Olivia had to go through as 'pleasure slave' will definitely appear and Agnes growing addiction to porn and shady forums is kind of the foundation for some future events for her, flashbacks to parts of the salad story-line are very likely.

 

[cloudfw]

The short answer would be time, but let's expand a bit on that.

Because I REALLY want to finish the story, I off-screen many events because only knowing they happened is enough to set up the mood. Unfortunately doing everything would require a sheer amount of time and I don't want to spend years on finishing the story. In this case, knowing that Agnes went through a porn discovery journey to find that task for Rebeca is enough to "explain" that Agnes is corrupting herself.

Said so, I rarely write something that I am not going to use in later stages of the story as build ups within other events. Ruth baseball bat is likely to appear, the week Olivia had to go through as 'pleasure slave' will definitely appear and Agnes growing addiction to porn and shady forums is kind of the foundation for some future events for her, flashbacks to parts of the salad story-line are very likely.

I actually think this is the only approach that can work here.
With three main characters and already about six major supplementary ones and multiple possible permutations creating every possible scene would slow down the progress to a crawl and probably result in an abandoned project, as we have seen dozens of times here already, especially for the more ambitious projects.

Thus picking and choosing scenes to actually show while telling about not shown developments sounds for me like an excellent possibility for this game to not get bogged down.

 

[grisax]

I forgot to write into my very positive review (which hopefully gets approved) that the splitting the game into clearly separated scenes and kinda randomizing the order of them works great for me. Each of them is a lovely titillating experience.

 

[grisax]

BTW would any graphically more gifted (than me) user kindly create some more banners, please? I just stole JustXThings' one. I believe this game deserves some promotion.

 

[JustXThings]

I forgot to write into my very positive review (which hopefully gets approved) that the splitting the game into clearly separated scenes and kinda randomizing the order of them works great for me. Each of them is a lovely titillating experience.

That is nice to read because it is one of the things I am not that sure about.

I am keeping the system, that is for sure. It has much more possibilities than making it fully linear. But I am thinking about adding some coloring system to the frames so that they indicate some sort of chronology. Or maybe a story mode which chooses for the player.

BTW would any graphically more gifted (than me) user kindly create some more banners, please? I just stole JustXThings' one. I believe this game deserves some promotion.

Oh... my banner is from Krull. Notice that it says fan =D

The other day navigating on the developer's forum I noticed what a miserable noob I am in promotional aesthetics of my own game. My banner cuts poor Rebeca's head in the update list and I didn't even think about making a proper signature for myself.

Anyway, I am a fan of Paula and Beca and both are in the signature. So, I think it fits using it.

 

[korvfisk]

wow nice, anal rape in the first minutes of the game. love it.

 

[JustXThings]

Little DEV update.

A mention very briefly that I wouldn't be working on The Theater of Sinners (ToS) until October due to HW issues. I am doing QoL stuff but talking about that is pretty boring.

I also mentioned that I'd be working on a short story instead (here I don't care if I can throw away all made scenarios due to their lack of textures, I am not re-using anything). The story takes place in the same set-up where ToS happens but 26 years before and there will be some references to Paula's mother which is 14 by that time (some sentences, this is a stand-alone story). It will be divided into two acts. Act I is written and renders looking nice.

This time no lesbian action. Humiliation, blackmail, "NTR" and a tad of incest if I manage to do it right.

Not technically NTR. As in ToS, I focus on the story while giving several perspectives to it.

Well... this post would be pretty meaningless without some kind of teaser.

Meet Clara... our protagonist.

 

[LucasR0]

loved the game, looking forward to more content, but I have to ask: why is it always old hideous men? these poor AVN girls can't catch a break lol

 

[dolfe67]

loved the game, looking forward to more content, but I have to ask: why is it always old hideous men? these poor AVN girls can't catch a break lol

Because good looking guys are boring

 

[Jhonthedon420]

Android?

 

[Anonymous100]

Wanted to give this a try but none of the download links work for me. I didn't try the compressed version since its not by the dev though.

 

[Envoye]

Any chance to get a replay button?

 

[JustXThings]

Wanted to give this a try but none of the download links work for me. I didn't try the compressed version since its not by the dev though.

Really ? I can use all of them except for MEGA. I have re-upload the MEGA one, see if you can use the new one.

Any chance to get a replay button?

Sure. 0.3 will introduce a gallery system as well as other QoL.

 

[Anonymous100]

Really ? I can use all of them except for MEGA. I have re-upload the MEGA one, see if you can use the new one.


Sure. 0.3 will introduce a gallery system as well as other QoL.

The new mega link worked. Thanks! When I tried the other ones earlier, either the download would get an error after downloading for sometime or the file that was finished downloading would meet an unexpected end of archieve.

 

[JustXThings]

Hi there ! I am back with my PC at last. The other day I saw that I went over 200 likes and I thought that I would add a little token of appreciation here to all those who have liked the game, reviewed it or comment around here. Thanks to all of you !

I wrote a very short scene in a parallel reality where Beca and Paula are going to a costume party. This is much more light-hearted and with VERY dubious humor and asset creativity. No sex, just pure wholesomeness.

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There we go...




beca "So... once again... who am I supposed to be ?"

paula "Venus."

beca "Venus ? Like... the planet ? the roman goddess ?"

paula "No, the sailor."

beca "The... what ?.. gosh... neverrmind... and what are you supposed to be ?"



paula "I am Tuxedo mask."



beca "Tuxedo mask ? Does that even exist ?"

beca "That is not a tuxedo by the way. It is a regular suit."

beca "Don't get me started with the "mask"."



paula "I know... I don't have a tuxedo."

paula "And I spent all time making your costume, didn't have much time to make mine."

beca "Is all this from those cartoons you watch ?"



paula "They are not cartoons ! It's called anime. It's different."

beca "Gosh... you are such a dweeb... let's go pick up Agnes."


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(lots of pointing in the subway later...)
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agnes "Hahahaha ! What the heck is that ?"



beca "I know... it looks ridiculous."



agnes "No you don't... believe me, I am pretty sure you don't know how ridiculous it really looks."



agnes "So, let me guess. Paula chose ? Mmm... which magical girl are you supposed to be ?"

paula "Venus."

agnes "Venus ? Like Sailor Moon Venus ? Mars would fit Beca better don't you think... or Homura."

paula "I thought about Homura, but the cosplay was too difficult."

agnes "And who are you ?"



paula "Tuxedo Mask."



agnes "Hahahah ! I think I just peed myself a little."



beca "I am surprised you know about this stuff."



agnes "Beca... I have a teen daughter with blue hair... what do you think ?"

beca "God... I am surrounded by dweebs and geeks... anyway... did you put it on like I told you to ?"

agnes "... yes... but seriously... people are going to notice !"

paula "Are you wearing a butt plug ? Let me see..."



paula "Oh... yes, pretty obvious. Cat tails don't come out from their assholes."

beca "So Agnes, I don't recall you greeting me like I told you to. Care saying it now ?"

agnes "Not in a thousand years..."

agnes "What are you doing ? Do not pull it !!"



beca "Say it."

agnes "..."



agnes "Meeeeaaaaaoooowww"

--- The End ---

 

[SteveНandjobs]

I finally decided to check this game out and what can I say, it's super hot, of course I don't really like the content with old men and Paula, but I like MC sub, even with maledom, but it's still exciting, although not as much as femdom, but I really like the story of Agnes and Rebecca, although there are purely subjective expectations, and some disappointments, just thoughts, for example, when I saw the connection between Rebecca and Paula, I began to wait for Rebecca to find out about Paula and start interacting with her, but this has not happened yet , and also the scene where Rebecca pisses in Olivia's mouth was not shown, on the one hand it is clear that we saw her from the face of Agnes, this is understandable, but I hope to see such a scene live in the future, maybe with an acting character, be it Agnes or Paula , and it's a pity you didn't see the scene with Erica? I don’t remember exactly the name, and Agnes, only they were going to do something interesting and the end, on the one hand this scene was in Agnes’s fantasies yes, but after such an expectation I would like to see it, but in general a very interesting game, I look forward to continuing .
P.s. I apologize for the grammar, I wrote everything in a row separated by commas, through a translator, since I don’t speak English very well.

 

[cloudfw]

Hilarious side story, JustXThings.

Glad to hear you have your PC again, very much looking forward to the continuation of the Theater!
Thank you for your work.