VN Ren'Py The Theater of Sinners [v0.3 ALPHA 1] [JustXThings]

[Armaster]

This is some fantastic shit. Love me some corruption and dark story.
If the dev keeps going like this I will dev sub.
The metro scene was amazing. Keep up the good work.

 

[Behemoth19]

HOLY SHIT ! that is some good shit dude. nice domination writhing for a change ! ffs you would think all corruption games comes from woke feminists now days.anyways. good job dude. bust my nuts off. 5 out of 5. keep this shit going and go crazy experimenting with BDSM, pet play, and other stuff. even pee witch im not into but hey, il take 1 for the team for this game.

 

[JustXThings]

(clarifying a bit on the development plan for whoever interested)

Dev Plan

I plan on two sort of updates and the development time varies depending on which I am working on.

- Non-story updates

Basically events that focus on the character interactions with others and could be scrapped out of the story w/o major issues.

They are simpler because they are linear and easier to write. Pre-conditions to the event happening are set in stone, etc.

Spoiler: Example

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Updates of this kind can be 'fast paced', but I am against providing an update that feels lack-luster for its lack of content. So, expect slow updates (1.5, 2 months in average).

- Story updates

These are trickier. I have to keep in mind different scenarios depending on the previous interactions (the level of the characters they interact with) and their traits. I really, really, really want to keep the decision making consistent. Dialogs, expressions, body language, etc. should match as well.

Spoiler: Example

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Besides, an story update w/o enough content feels really bad. And lots of exposition w/o any 'action' feels even worse.

Here expect the time of a non-story update, because it should have at least that amount of content, plus some extra time for its complexity.

- Usability updates (no content)

Unfortunately this has to be done as well. I say unfortunately because it involves no content and I tend to procrastinate out of it.

For instance, I am not that happy with the time transitions. It is not that clear when time passes. This is a simple one, but needs to be done.

And I also want to include some tool-tips to the events to hint whenever there are variations, which stats are raised and so on.

Summary

I would like to have the season 1 finished by the end of the year. I am unsure to be honest since it is difficult to plan free time.

Spoiler: Season 1 End

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

There should be a couple of update packages focusing on some character interactions based on whatever people likes the most. I might do some polls or things like that based on the popularity. Otherwise I'd just choose whatever from a hat with paper names =D

I cannot give full figures but I hope I will refine the process in-between. First game, first mistakes, lots to be learned, etc.

 

[L7Bear]

When it comes to writing the grammar/spelling is different from the story.
What I've read so far is excellent storytelling and just my kind of perverted.

That said, it could use a proofreader who is fluent in English.

Spoiler: grammar issues

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Looking forward to v0.02

 

[Priappus]

Great game,thanks.

 

[paust.alex]

"Rule 12: Content (a game, image, video, story, animation, etc.) depicting nudity or sexualization or sexual/erotic activity involving a male character is prohibited. A "male character" is one that visually has a cock, or if non-visual is otherwise clearly intended to represent a male. 2D and 'unrealistic' depictions are generally looked upon more favorably. As this involves some discretion, if you are unsure ask a Staff Member."

I guess you're missing the point here. Since there's a female protagonist, not a male, the point is that any cock other than mine should be excluded. And since there's a female protagonist here, it won't be your dick, but that other guy's dick, which is NTR, for me at least, especially if the heroine is sympathetic.

By the way, are the heroines virgins?

 

[Alleykatt]

I thought this game was great. Looking forward to more episodes, full to the brim with strange cocks for them to get off on.

 

[Davewatch]

Well very interesting game and mechanics something of a new perspective really and a breath of fresh air. Love it and please keep up the good work I am looking forward to the next installment Cheers

 

[slavegal]

WOW, nice work! I like it!

 

[ntrvip]

I will be watching this till more content is added!

 

[pendoza]

I had a lot of fun with this game. Characters are diverse and story setup is great. Sure English is a bit rough and the he / her / his / hers is a bit of now and then but it certainly has potential. I think it's better to just have multiple chapters than the choosing at the end and I do not like the puppet in the beginning. Every development in that is wasting time to be better spend at the game itself.

But quite long for a first release.

 

[JustAUser89]

I like that the characters look like normal girls and dont have diemnsions out of this world. Good start Dev!

 

[asdik2626]

It's a almost full game. I loved it too much.
I really hate lesbian content.

 

[drconfused]

To each their own, but I prefer to watch them be fucked by something my own size...average. But yeah, the absurd ones are just not necessary, lol.

I hear you there, I am on the same wavelength. It's all about being able to relate.

 

[Byczer]

Is femdom tag for man or woman?

 

[pharal]

Wow! Great release! I love this kind of stuff and there is far too few of any that fits my tastes to this degree (despite corruption and domination games being popular). I loved Rebeca and her handling of Agnes
Quite a lot of content for a 0.1 release!

I have a couple of questions that I hope you will answer if you get the time.

1. Are there no scenes for Rebeca in the event picker for this release? I couldn't get any to open, but I have only been through a couple of variations.
2. Will there possibly be a diagram released on how to reach different scenes? It would be nice to know if one has missed anything.
3. Will there be a betrayal aspect? I am thinking about Rebeca getting Agnes to betray Paula in some way... like Agnes being controlled by Rebeca to help pull Paula down into depravity and submission? (especially nice if Paula never chose to submit so far aka staying "innocent").

 

[kained]

Absolutely love what I've played so far. The renders are beautiful, the girls beautiful, and the kinks are right up my street. Allowing me to be unrepentingly evil towards adorable Paula. Awesome. Ugly bastard theme going. Awesome. I want to see how the personalities can be fine tuned throughout the game and see what can happen in my unrepentingly evil playthrough. I'd definitely prefer her personality to be innocent, desire freedom and reject her humiliation fetish while still ending up in miserable situations. Can't wait. Thank you. Great game.

 

[Ktosja321]

I really liked to play this game. Submiting to a spanking was one of the best written scenes I have seen so far. Can't wait for next release.

 

[L7Bear]

Is femdom tag for man or woman?

Female dominating female, as far as I've seen so far.

 

[taglag]

What we have here is a person making a porn game for Adult's, who is actually wanting to make it because they are enjoying making it.

So much better than a patreon money sponge. I just love when people do mod's and games because they truly want to and enjoy doing it. (Of course I understand people not being able to make games for free also..)

It just seems to be seen even in the story telling and aggressive way you are making this. I like everything you are doing.

I wanted to thank you again