I decided to try out the visual novel at 0.1 and so far i'm intrigue. I like the world building set-up of an secret society, giving off the vibes of an action thriller movie with plentiful erotic content to come. Present-time Natasha designs looks lovely and youthful, i love a long-haired, curvy, well-endowed woman
and bonus has red-hair and freckles. Present-time MC isn't too shabby himself, tall, a decent body, probably one of the few decent looking MCs with a visible face
. Just a personal preference so don't mind me, but maybe his hair could grow longer as the story goes on. Aiysha looks great and lovely too
, curly long hair in a ponytail bun, pretty dark brown skin (
Thanks for not giving her the overused
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Was Aiysha in the flashback intro scene too? Based off of looking at the menu images with Aiysha, I do hope there's something between MC, Aiysha and Natasha intimately or possibly lead to something intimate later on in the story as a Trio/Throuple *fingers crossed*. Also, It'd be fun wordplay with the title "The Trinity" with those 3 as a trinity team.
I like the idea of a story-driven visual novel with a linear plot with some clear cut choices, i'd assume choices for some variations scenes for alternate outcomes or maybe like "vanilla sex only VS. both vanilla & kinky sex (
like outdoor or public sex, maledom/femsub play)".
I'm not grammar expert, but maybe combine certain short sentences together into one line to reduce the clicking on 1 image. Example, mainly these 2 lines here, "Wake up Natasha" then click "You said in a soft voice". Combine them into one line like ["
Wake up Natasha". You said in a soft voice.] Not a problem though, just a suggestion.
