VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Tutor [v1.1] [c.Shadow]

[ymudds]

I hope theres a lot of mind control and were(MC) is the one doing it to the woman

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I hope theres a lot of mind control and were(MC) is the one doing it to the woman

For now it isn't exactly mind control, the MC uses a potion to corrupt the LIs, and these, in addition to awakening their deepest fetishes, eventually obey him due to the effect of the potion.

 

[AgriasQuarto]

I want to do some Game Overs or Bad Endings similar to the ones at the beginning of the game, (When you don't accept Ginn's proposal, or when you don't kiss Ginn), and just like I did in those bad endings explain why it ended badly your last decision...

Imo IF-endings are a great way to flesh out your worldbuilding, exploring consequences and seeing the other side of characters. The way you implemented it with convenient reloading and informing what choices led to it is already the right way to about it. Its only frustrating when players have to navigate a labyrinth of choices, flags and values where we don't even know what we did to get the game over.

 

[c.Shadow]

Imo IF-endings are a great way to flesh out your worldbuilding, exploring consequences and seeing the other side of characters. The way you implemented it with convenient reloading and informing what choices led to it is already the right way to about it. Its only frustrating when players have to navigate a labyrinth of choices, flags and values where we don't even know what we did to get the game over.

Sorry for answering until now, I've been very busy...

It is exactly what you say, I want to explore the consequences of what would happen if you do not do such actions....

I have played cumbersome games where you don't know what decision to make and that is why what I have planned is that the last decision you made could be the bad ending or the continuation of the game.

And if the player has the bad ending at the end of the consequence the game will ask if you want to go back to the last decision or end the game, leaving it up to the player...

 

[c.Shadow]

I hope theres a lot of mind control and were(MC) is the one doing it to the woman

If you are going to see a lot of mental control, where the MC corrupts everyone, but there will be three types of effects with their different variants

 

[c.Shadow]

Speaking of the NTR to all those who are against...
The only thing I will say is that it will be optional... but that will depend on the fact that you also take care of your LYs....
If you don't want NTR, take good care of your harem...

 

[c.Shadow]

Forced NTR? As in... not optional?
You mean.. creating a scenario in which a LI is with another character designed to invoke jealousy in the player with no recourse or input whatsoever?

Like.. including a scene involving the most divisive and controversial fetish in existence, which often derails entire threads into dozens upon dozens of pages of heated and angry arguments on the topic forcing mods to carpet bomb delete entire pages, drowning out useful info or questions players or the devs might have and want to share?

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Not so much, originally the NTR was only going to be towards the wife (Alexa) and it was only going to be a key scene and trigger for the MC's fall towards corruption... Part of the plan still stands...

Now, as I said in the previous post, the NTR will be optional and depending on how much you attend to the sexual needs of your harem.

 

[Gamaer]

So far the game is great but I have two comments, firstly it would be helpful to be able to see the corruption and other things and secondly I'm really not a big fan of the bar scene where you play dominant all the time only for a short time before the end of the version still female dominance superiority that you can't avoid and say nothing in the tags of the game broke it a bit for me.

 

[c.Shadow]

So far the game is great but I have two comments, firstly it would be helpful to be able to see the corruption and other things and secondly I'm really not a big fan of the bar scene where you play dominant all the time only for a short time before the end of the version still female dominance superiority that you can't avoid and say nothing in the tags of the game broke it a bit for me.

Hello, sorry for the delay in answering you.

If there will be a way to see the amount of corruption that the characters have, but for that I want one event to happen with Ginn and Astrid
(Summary that Astrid helps Ginn create an app to know the statistics of the LYs to the main character)
In the last scene in the bar, I know that many did not like not being able to be dominant and that Alexa (the wife) was the one who took center stage...
What I intend to do is reconstruct the ideals that the protagonist already has...
In most corruption games, the protagonist is young and already has ideals of corrupting people.
What I want to imply is that the main character is already older and has the way of being of a good person, of a person who does not even have signs of evil in his head.
And the game will be about that... how a good person becomes a bad person.
He was not dominant in that scene for several reasons, he was surprised by Alexa's new stage and that she let him have a threesome with Ginn... Giving the main character access to the world of corruption that he could create.

 

[Borrowed_Distant]

I'm on Android and the game is basically unplayable for me. There is a box which is supposed to be the background for the game text (it looks like a piece of notepad paper), but the text is offset and only part of the text is over the background.

This makes some text completely illegible, and other text very difficult to read.

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The only way I've found to read text is to use the "History" option from the Menu, which is inconvenient.

I skimmed the thread (and searched for Android with no results) but didn't see anything about this. Is there anything I can try to fix this?

 

[c.Shadow]

I'm on Android and the game is basically unplayable for me. There is a box which is supposed to be the background for the game text (it looks like a piece of notepad paper), but the text is offset and only part of the text is over the background.

This makes some text completely illegible, and other text very difficult to read.

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The only way I've found to read text is to use the "History" option from the Menu, which is inconvenient.

I skimmed the thread (and searched for Android with no results) but didn't see anything about this. Is there anything I can try to fix this?

Hello, thank you very much for telling me that I thought that was solved because on my cell phone if you can see well, but I have already been told that some people have the same thing that happens to you.

I'm still working on version 1.2 and I'll test it on several phones to make sure it doesn't happen.
An apology for what happened

 

[AtotehZ]

The black text on a dark blue background isn't working for me. I think it was meant to be further down in the notepad looking area. Then again, no idea if it's because it's on Android. Couldn't test the PC version as Joiplay refused to play it.

 

[Rosen King]

The black text on a dark blue background isn't working for me. I think it was meant to be further down in the notepad looking area. Then again, no idea if it's because it's on Android. Couldn't test the PC version as Joiplay refused to play it.

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This is what it looks like on PC. Sounds like it's an issue on your end and/or with the Android version.

 

[c.Shadow]

The black text on a dark blue background isn't working for me. I think it was meant to be further down in the notepad looking area. Then again, no idea if it's because it's on Android. Couldn't test the PC version as Joiplay refused to play it.

It's very strange that this is happening, I have already checked on several mobile devices and they don't have this problem.
As Rosen King says it could be a problem with the android version.
Also I don't know why it doesn't let you play the pc version u.u

 

[AtotehZ]

It's very strange that this is happening, I have already checked on several mobile devices and they don't have this problem.
As Rosen King says it could be a problem with the android version.
Also I don't know why it doesn't let you play the pc version u.u

I'm sure it'll work fine when I get home to my pc. I'll try fiddling with it to see if I can get Joiplay working.

 

[AtotehZ]

There are some inconsistencies in the story. In the beginning for an example we learn MC was a tutor for those who didn't understand the classes. Immediately after "the intellectual" girl is introduced... she shouldn't be there.
Coherence is one thing that makes a story more gripping.

 

[c.Shadow]

There are some inconsistencies in the story. In the beginning for an example we learn MC was a tutor for those who didn't understand the classes. Immediately after "the intellectual" girl is introduced... she shouldn't be there.
Coherence is one thing that makes a story more gripping.

Just because they are intellectuals does not mean that they do well in all subjects, it may be that one subject is their weakness and they want to improve in it.

 

[AtotehZ]

Just because they are intellectuals does not mean that they do well in all subjects, it may be that one subject is their weakness and they want to improve in it.

I guess that's fair. I have family who deals with problem students and that's usually not how it goes in those classes, but it's not like it's a big point of contention for the story to be good.

I found out part of what was troubling me before by the way. Why the APK didn't display subtitles in the right position for me, no idea, but...
I also figured out that Google Play Store doesn't have the newest version of Joiplay. You can get APK's on Joyplay's Patreon for free, which are updated. That's how I eventually played the game.

 

[Telgar]

I really enjoyed this game, despite the occasional bad English. Please continue it.

 

[c.Shadow]

I really enjoyed this game, despite the occasional bad English. Please continue it.

I will... I've had a lot of work on the RL but the next update will have the open world ready and I'm working on the translation.
Please be patient!