Ren'Py Completed The Twilight Witches [v1.00] [Woolfie]

[Davewatch]

SEX? I understood it to mean they would all have "FUN" together but no penetration for now?

 

[Arassei]

Ouch. The Engrish is strong in this one. The story is ... let's be generous and call it underdeveloped. But what made me quit it and delete it was the angles. No close ups, almost everything shot from a distance and from above. Like porn shot on cctv. No, this one I'm not returning to unless dev does some radical work on pretty much everything.

Heya,

Underdeveloped, you're quite generous indeed, the dev stopped at his first idea "make lesbian sisters renders " and just put somes lines of dialogues completly inconsistent.
And you forget to mention the " white " part on top of MC's dick and in his ass, because the dev didn't merged the dick and the male body in Daz.

The game must be entirely reworked (script and graphics).

 

[Deleted member 1691628]

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What in Oblivion... Who knew the Night Mother was also a fashion designer.

 

[MrDL]

I hate lesbians

Why?

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

Sometimes you run across a polished masterpiece and you fall in love. -Being a Dik- Othertimes you run across a crude, Engrish job that makes you cringe a bit.. but at the same time it interests you and you can't let it go.

I'm actually enjoying this in a sado-masochist kind of a way. Woolfie has very rough skills and english is his second language.. and yet here I am after the 3rd posting of the game.

Why do I cut him so much slack? How many others would attempt to put out a game like this.. update it twice (that I know of) and have no Patreon sitting there begging for money?

My hat is off to Woolfie and I hope he continues. Perhaps this is a labor of love? Is Woolfie actually this genre's Rudy? How many of us have the balls for this kind of perseverance? Not I.. and that's why I am hanging out with the man.

 

[Effinpist]

I played the last update and had to stop because I developed a brain tumor trying to figure out what the hell they were saying. I get that English isn't the Devs first language, and I mean no disrespect, but you HAVE to do something about the fialogue and english translation. Storyline could be interesting, so I hope he can iron out the kinks and make it a playable game.

 

[Deleted member 24136]

2,5 Stars... so bad huh

 

[eventatlas01]

well thats a lot of scene i might try later hahaha

 

[valvargar]

I will try to correct some of the engrish and upload the script if i'm happy with the result

 

[valvargar]

lets see if this is an improvement

 

[Content_Consumer]

lets see if this is an improvement

Probably should put them all in an archive so people can DL them all at once and also not have to rename each one.

 

[Woolfie]

thanks valvargar I include your modifications. They will be in the next release.

 

[assman1337]

nameable mc please

 

[fkrfxr]

I love it. a bit short but great update none the less. thanks for the share.

 

[Dyson2020]

You can rename the character now but it still says Dan when he talks. I had to go into script.rpy with notepad to fix it. I just changed were it said Dan to the name I chose.

 

[dashxx549]

if you allow changing the name of the MC, please have the speaking name of the MC change too.

 

[Lorric17]

That banner image is pretty misleading. This is not a fantasy femdom game set in the ancient Temple of the Snake God, but a present-day incest harem game. Okay, to be honest, not so sure about the harem bit, but it seems to go in that direction.

 

[Woolfie]

Hi,
Here the temporary fix. just unzip the archive in the game folder.

 

[sergesan]

hi, folks...
i didn´t play the vn but i read a little in threads...if the vn is really a femdom then please tag it as this...so people like me who dont like things like femdom or humilation don´t go and download a game that isn´t what it promises...thats one of the biggest disapointments you can have...you wanna enjoy a sweety and become something salty...this also NOway a offens to the dev only a pretty please change....good luck with the vn

 

[fkrfxr]

hi, folks...
i didn´t play the vn but i read a little in threads...if the vn is really a femdom then please tag it as this...so people like me who dont like things like femdom or humilation don´t go and download a game that isn´t what it promises...thats one of the biggest disapointments you can have...you wanna enjoy a sweety and become something salty...this also NOway a offens to the dev only a pretty please change....good luck with the vn

I would not say this is not a femdom. bangin your sister yes but not femdom. the only way to know a game for sure is to play yourself as what you think is subjective. what some hate others love. I love some very under rated games and if I listened to the replies I would not have downloaded and missed a great game. same here.