This one had pretty good content with side characters. Hopefully some with the main ones soon.
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To all the new players since this recent patch just got released, I refer you to the post above!Hey guys just wanted to say something so that you all are aware. I actually am in the dev's Discord and there seems to be some channels that were originally titled in a foreign language. So in terms of the script, the spelling, the grammar and overall way the dialogue is in the game you should all be aware that English is not their primary language.
Not to give the Dev any passes or anything their game should be criticized fairly as all games should on this site. But I think if you guys are aware of this, then I think the same comments that keep appearing about some of the wonky things the MC says and the way and manor the dialogue is written will not continue to be posted as frequently.
This is the Dev's first game, and down the road they will probably fix the script or have someone proof read it for them and improve it. We all got to remember these are adult or porn games so things that define games here are Models, overall story, originality, sexual content, and gameplay. Although script is important yes, that is by far the easiest thing to improve on and correct without having to change the entire direction and development of the game itself. I hear you all out with your concerns but I hope this message made things a little bit more clear for the lot of you that have critiques about the writing
I explained why the dialogue seems a bit rough around the edges. As for the renders and animations it seems they are looking to get a new graphics card in the near future so that should improve greatly! (Market is pricy atm many devs are looking upgrade)
TLDR for quoted post:
This is the devs first game and English does not seem to be their first language, which explains the rough spots in dialogue and wording at times. I’m sure the dev would really appreciate your constructive criticism! Their Patreon is linked to message them, and on there you can find their Discord linked if you’d like to contact them there as well! I’m sure they would appreciate the feedback since I’m assuming most of us want to see this game improve and do well
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The dev is still using abbreviations or "text speak" in some dialogue, it really should be avoided.
I know the dev knows this as just a moment later in the same conversation its written like this.
So I'm just pointing it out so it can be corrected.
Though I'm not really sure why I'm bothering, the dev still insists on typing "he he" about 57 times per update and not only that uses in the sentence often after a comma like its part of the dialogue and not just a sound the speaker is making.
Is it really that hard to use *laugh* *giggle* *chuckle* .etc instead of just typing "he he" and "ha ha" over and over?
I know the dev knows this as just a moment later in the same conversation its written like this.
So I'm just pointing it out so it can be corrected.
Though I'm not really sure why I'm bothering, the dev still insists on typing "he he" about 57 times per update and not only that uses in the sentence often after a comma like its part of the dialogue and not just a sound the speaker is making.
Is it really that hard to use *laugh* *giggle* *chuckle* .etc instead of just typing "he he" and "ha ha" over and over?
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Definitely some review cheating going on as some of those fake accounts magically woke up after your post just to post on another thread. If it's the dev doing it i would advise him to remove those fake reviews before mods gets on his case.
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Maybe the person is actually saying BTW Like, Bee Tee Double-U? I've heard people say that plenty of times.
The game still won't let me continue to chapter 8 after I download and installed it and no one is giving me any answers,what a waste to download it and can't get past chapter 7.I tried deleting chapter 7 and starting all over on the new update and still the same.I'm just gonna delete it and try a better game.
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Big plot holes in this game.
I mean, sure, the game is one big fantasy, but that's a gigantic level of BS to grasp. right there. That's the relative equivalent of the LAPD waltzing up to Judge Judy's house and her grandkid answers the door and the cop says your life is in danger and we need you to come down to the station (cops don't do that). Uh... no, that would never happen. The next question would be "do you have a warrant?", and the next statement would be "get the hell off my property before you're thrown out and cited for trespassing".
Why is it every single protagonist in all of these games is a complete clueless moron?? He's supposed to be this dependable guy all the girls flock to, but he has a perpetual neutral zone between his ears with no common sense. The MC is supposed to be intelligent, not a vacant retard, yet here we are. This scene makes absolutely no sense whatsoever, given the setting and the MC's description. Now I fear the second cliche is about to start (please say it isn't so) the mob... ugh. Geez, this was doing so well too.
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I mean, sure, the game is one big fantasy, but that's a gigantic level of BS to grasp. right there. That's the relative equivalent of the LAPD waltzing up to Judge Judy's house and her grandkid answers the door and the cop says your life is in danger and we need you to come down to the station (cops don't do that). Uh... no, that would never happen. The next question would be "do you have a warrant?", and the next statement would be "get the hell off my property before you're thrown out and cited for trespassing".
Why is it every single protagonist in all of these games is a complete clueless moron?? He's supposed to be this dependable guy all the girls flock to, but he has a perpetual neutral zone between his ears with no common sense. The MC is supposed to be intelligent, not a vacant retard, yet here we are. This scene makes absolutely no sense whatsoever, given the setting and the MC's description. Now I fear the second cliche is about to start (please say it isn't so) the mob... ugh. Geez, this was doing so well too.
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Well i played the two last chapters and even if the girls are gorgeous and the renders are good, the story is quite weak and worse we start to get the usual mafia crap. Oh my god, when a dev will have some imagination and not just copy paste the "parents who did someting bad and i need to fix it" story!
And as usual we get a lame porn game, by this i mean that as the dev cannot make you fuck the aunt and her daughters immediately, so he will throw at you some random girl to fuck.
The police girl, the girl in the jewellery store, the girl in Megan office, all this seemed completely forced and unnatural, at least we can reject them, thanks god!!
Why rejecting them you will ask ? Just because this is done without proper introduction, you just need to say yes and intoduce them literally !!
I hate this, it looks like the dev was thinking " I need to give those bastards something to fuck or they will suspend their Patreon Subscribestar account!"
Many games do that, it's lame and not a good sign, it just looks like a standard porn story with no meaning, some don't mind it, the moment they got their noodle hard and can jerk off some steam they are good! But not me it's not enough fortunately.
And as usual we get a lame porn game, by this i mean that as the dev cannot make you fuck the aunt and her daughters immediately, so he will throw at you some random girl to fuck.
The police girl, the girl in the jewellery store, the girl in Megan office, all this seemed completely forced and unnatural, at least we can reject them, thanks god!!
Why rejecting them you will ask ? Just because this is done without proper introduction, you just need to say yes and intoduce them literally !!
I hate this, it looks like the dev was thinking " I need to give those bastards something to fuck or they will suspend their Patreon Subscribestar account!"
Many games do that, it's lame and not a good sign, it just looks like a standard porn story with no meaning, some don't mind it, the moment they got their noodle hard and can jerk off some steam they are good! But not me it's not enough fortunately.
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It's quite a common thing here, do you see the average rating of those games, most of them are around 4 stars even if they are just a pile of crap. How many times did i download a game having 5 stars and getting disapointed by some average crap at most!
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Yeahhh man that's life, hard to find a really good game here since a while. I found a couple of really good ones and got updates from games i love but most of the time i try a good rated game and i end up by quitting after a few minutes.
So i don't give a shit anymore about those stars. When you are a dev and know you can get a lot of money from your patrons if a lot of people play your game, would you not try to boost your reviews ??
It's like the book reviews online. Just read the 1 and 2 star reviews and decide if those complaints would ruin it for you. Probably worth looking at the good bad ratio. A couple of my favorite games have 200+ reviews with 9-11 that aren't 5 stars.