Only real complaints so far are
A batch of Spelling/grammar/punctuation errors.
Middle of the Hack101 program dropping the :
"Modelling was really good to me. I made good money and it's how I It's how I met my husband, he was a photography. His name is Matthew"
Might want to do a slow read of everything, maybe put it through a word processor before the game gets too large.
Her getting mad at you mentioning having an affair, then instantly "How is your room?" or the continuation of making her mad and then her reset to default face.
Telling her you won't talk about your family then "I'm adopted" The characters are a bit ADHD
A few grainy images like Joanna in the hallway after you get the key in study