......Never pee drinking.
Never ever.
Alright, alright !
Anyway, here is a short feedback about 2.2 last update :
PROS :
- I really love that the girls are smiling and are showing how they love what they are doing, just like Lisa loves to watch her sister and masturbating in the neighborough. It's a nice change of pace in comparison with the other games where they are either resisting, showing a suffering face, or being totally stupid (with those "ahego" faces that I dislike so much). A girl smiling is always cuter than a girl clenching her teeth.
- I personally love the longer hypnosis sessions with the sister. In my opinion, writing can be as exciting than a visual event, and it creates expectations and suspense when reading the therapist's orders.
- The visuals have clearly been improved. There is almost no aliasing anymore, the clothes of the girls are more detailed and the lightning is more realistic. Good job !
MY DOUBTS :
- You said that you want to make the hypnosis with Nina a bit slower. Why not, it's logical when we consider that she's maybe not as receptive to the hypnosis than Lisa.
However, I think you are making it too slow : in that second hypnosis session, the therapist speech and orders are90% the same than the previous one, to the point I was really thiniking at one point that I was reading the same thing as before. Working with the "You're in face of a mirror..." thing is good, but you should maybe make orders more explicit tospeed up a bit the process.
Right now, if we summarize, Nina's two hypnois session just told her to be confidentabout herself, and THINKING about wearing more revealing clothes to assert herself. It's an interesting goal, but in fact, between the two yoga events, Nina's behaviour didn't change even if she wear sexier clothes the second time. The therapist should maybe give her bolder orders like, for example : "You don't want to be shy anymore. Shy is for the weak. You want to be an assertive woman, you want to be strong, you're proud of your bodies. And you want to show it, from now on, by exposing your navel at all time with your clothes, whenever it's possible." Or : "You feel confident about yourself, each day a bit more than the previous one. You want to lead your life, you're a dominant and you want to show it. You want to walk in the streets like a dominative woman. You want to wear heels to assert your dominance..."
Some things like that coud speed up a bit the process while creating some expectations for the players because (Will Nina really show her belly next time ? Will Nina wear sexier clothes from her own ? Will Nina become nastier, or even a dominatrix ? Will she end up wearing latex and high heels knee-length boot ?). Right now (but it's the start, I understand), she feels too much like a secondary characters with a plot rather undefined. And I fear that, going to slow with her, she will also be a burden for Lisa's story : because you will have to match the speed of her transformation with her sister's so that she doesn't freak out.
But anyway, I'm really eager to see what you are planning for Nina. My personal expectations are to see her ending as a really dark/mean goth slut, with agressive looks which she would have chosent to assert herself in front of others. That would be a blast to see such an innocent and prudish girl end like that ! ^^
- About the yoga sessions. They are exciting, but you shouldn't rely too much on these for the two sisters interactions as it could be redundant. Moreover, you could fall in the "cliche" events where massages will be more and more perverse, but Nina not daring to say anything, then Lisa trying a bit more, then saying that touching each other between sisters is normal, then Nina hesitating, then accepting, etc...
This plot has been done already hundred of times in adult games. With a rhythm a bit faster, you will avoid this common trap where the evolution between two characters is starting to stall and be boring. In my opinion, if you want to continue this plot where the two sisters are doing videos, you shouldn't hesitate to speed up a bit the process their "work" together (yoga, then modeling with sexy clothes, then trying makeup, then with lingerie and/or porn outfits, then testing sextoys, then masturbating together, then doing porn, etc...).
- The plot with Susan's hypnosis is rather... intriguing. I'm curious to see what the herapist is planning for her. However, don't forget that it's a porn game : don't make her story too stupid and unexciting. Making her oinking should serve a perverse plot, maybe hinting that she will end as a submissive pet for Lisa and Nina : walking on her fours at home, wearing a nostril ring with a leash attached on it, feeling sexual pleasure only when she is humiliated, insulted and treated as a cheap dirty good-for-nothing human pet. Anyway, going with something different than what Lisa and Nina are enduring could only be a good thing.
Wait and see, as they say...
- Lastly, don't negect the incest fetish. Incest is exciting because it's extreme and taboo. And I think that, even while hypnosis justifies it, Lisa is accepting a bit too easily to look at her sister and being sexually horny looking at her. She should be a bit more hesitant, even scared about her attraction. The therapist should then work her magic to make Lisa accept it, even loving it because it's taboo and because it would both make them, herself and Nina, nasty sluts with no limits.