Constructive criticism on the game play (just my opinion, I'm sure haha, but still think it would help make it better):
The moving dialogue: while trying to read, as it is scrolling across the text box, the font size gets smaller each time the text box fills up, which in turn moves the placement of the words, making it nearly impossible to read while the dialogue is scrolling. So, I have to click the dialogue box to make the words finish scrolling, so I can read it.
To move the dialogue along, I have to click the little red arrow in the bottom right corner, then click the box to make the scrolling stop.
Then, if I want to see the full image, I move my mouse all the way to the other side of the screen to hide/show the text box.
Things that could fix this, or at least allow preferences for each player: a settings/options screen, the ability to move the dialogue along with the keyboard, and/or click the mouse anywhere on the screen to move the dialogue along, the ability to change it in the settings to have the dialogue all show up immediately, instead of slowly scrolling onto the screen. Even a skip option would change things, but I don't think this is one of those games I'd be skipping much on, unless there are repeated scenes or do-overs, due to starting the save over, or something.
I think the game has potential, but these small things can make or break the game play.