VN Ren'Py Abandoned Thinking About You [v0.9.2] [Noir Desir]

[Noir Desir]

thank you for share , your game is great

Thanks!

 

[ANTagonist]

Some of the lines in this make me giggle more than they should. I just can't help but imagine them being said with the utmost straightest of faces and expressions. It's like full-blown porno dialogue. I love it.

 

[Sam]

Updated OP, thanks for the links @Noir Desir

Game is looking good, lots of potential.

 

[Rev]

Looks interesting, any non-mega links?
Mega hates me :idontcare:

 

[Noir Desir]

Looks interesting, any non-mega links?
Mega hates me :idontcare:

Install MEGAsync. MEGA will start to like you

 

[Sam]

Looks interesting, any non-mega links?
Mega hates me :idontcare:

Added some mirrors.

 

[Endless]

So far, i like this game very much. It has the typical sister-brother story but its still unique. The sister seems really smart & capable. She just doesn't fall into your lap, conquering her will make it more rewarding. The art has a great elegant look to it. Keep up the great work Noir Desir.
A walkthrough would probably help in starting now or in the next version so we can know what choices lead where - to sister (Julia) or Eve.

 

[Rev]

Added some mirrors.

Thank you.

 

[alienslayer]

thank you the game is great

 

[Noir Desir]

Thanks

 

[Adoringfan]

I gotta say I was very impressed, game is written pretty well too. The sister seemed fleshed out which is a nice change from most of the one dimensional sex dolls that litter almost every other game. Two things I can think of atm: add in some random events or hidden contents, (just not like second happiness though, cause that game hides content too well and if this was an Easter egg hunt, those eggs would be rotten long before anyone ever found them) people like finding stuff, it's like a treasure chest in a dungeon, no one ever complains about treasure, (unless it's a fucking mimic and then come the tears). Other thing is more choices so it won't feel like a storybook. So far everything is shaping up nicely, art assets are unique and memorable you write well and have a decent flow with your dialogue especially the way characters interact with each other. Keep it up and you might be the new favorite rookie.

 

[Noir Desir]

Thanks, Adoringfan! Of course I fully agree with your suggestions. I plan to make such changes in the next version of the game.

 

[EloquentBarbarian]

Thanks, Adoringfan! Of course I fully agree with your suggestions. I plan to make such changes in the next version of the game.

Any E.T.A. on when the next part will be coming??
Really enjoyed the dialogue and banter, and how the game is playing out. It has me intrigued and wanting more.
Good job

 

[Noir Desir]

Thanks. I should finish the new part in a few days.

 

[drpeanut779]

Played through version .2 recently. So far so good! Especially liked the HOMM3 reference because it caught me a bit off guard but I am a huge fan of HOMM3.

 

[Cal]

This game is quite enjoyable. The writing is entertaining in and unto its own- it seems to be openly mocking some of the atrocious dialogue we suffer through in so many of these games. I love the dry wit.

 

[Noir Desir]

Thanks. Tomorrow v.03 will be available for my patrons, and in 10 days will be free. The new part of the game is as long as v.01 and V.02 together. There are also many choices, so to find all the scenes you need to play more than once.

 

[maxnuku]

V0.3 is out

 

[Lidz88]

Thanks. Tomorrow v.03 will be available for my patrons, and in 10 days will be free. The new part of the game is as long as v.01 and V.02 together. There are also many choices, so to find all the scenes you need to play more than once.

Any links?

 

[thomasxlong]

I just created a thread in the request section;

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Please add a +1 on there instead of posting in this thread asking for a link. Thanks guys