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Finally finished playing the update, i like it even more. Ty @AceOfNiagara for suggesting it to me.
mega link is downWell it's mostly because I learn or improve something with each update and then I'd have to redo and redo and redo and wouldn't get anywhere. So I feel like it's better to finish the whole game and then put all that I've learned into the next one and make something really good.
I played the game today for the first time and here's my two cents:
The renders are good, the women are beautiful and have a very nice variety of characters and appearances/body types.
The Story is interesting enough, the writing has some genuine humour.
What I didn't like that much was the writing in the sex scenes, it was basically nonexistent, apart from the spoken dialogue.
That isn't enough for me, I need more than just porn images, to find it really sensual/ erotic.
In general the writing is a bit sparse, it's not so much that it reads like it's written by someone where English isn't his first language, it's just that it is just the basics really. No flourish, no elegance. It isn't bad, it's just not enough, at least for me.
This could be a really great game, it has the looks, it has a workable halfway original story (which is a lot by the standards in erotic Western VNs), it just needs a bit more oomph in writing and in the sex scenes.
I mean, some of the girls love the MC, but apart from saying they love him, it seems like they just want sex, there's no real romance, no closeness, nothing apart from sex basically.
The situation in the world and what is happening gets told, but that's about it, the MC barely has any questions, none of the women are fe. afraid of this completely unknown creature, a human male, you'd expect there'd be more shock among the crew, more shock from the MC when he hears it.
Once the crew knows about MC's pheromones, would some of them take care not to get to close to him?
IDK, the story is just full of these things, where it feels a lot more should happen, a lot more interaction should happen.
Don't get me wrong, it is an enjoyable game, it just feels like it could be so much more.
Not knocking it, just letting you know.Well google links don't work cause.. well.. google.. and mega I don't know, I updated the links, they worked fine for me before. I'll go upload it to more sites now
Well I just finished uploading to workupload and then, when I clicked share, I got the page not foundNot knocking it, just letting you know.
Thank you for your time and effort put in.
Totally feeling the pain.Well I just finished uploading to workupload and then, when I clicked share, I got the page not found
That's like my life in a nutshell
Ye I noticed this too, the only mistake I've seen as far as I can remember lolSo i'm still playing, but when Natasha is with the MC she says "[Name] just come back to us please"
i'll report any other issues as i continue
Yes, he does have a major mental disability and there is nothing wrong with that.Is the mc retarded? Why does he keep saying stupid shit? View attachment 873771
Quite simple reallyIs the mc retarded? Why does he keep saying stupid shit?
That's fair enough...Quite simple really
"Is the mc retarded?" Yes.
"Why does he keep saying stupid shit?" Because he's male.