VN Ren'Py Abandoned TimeFuck [v0.45] [Omniwang]

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B10

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Well, I sold the Mustang and did some things Downtown I'm not proud of, but I managed to pay a programmer and artist to undo all the placeholders and polish everything up. If you had to play the concept demo, I'm so sorry. Give it to me straight, F95. Better? Needs more work? Let me know, I want to make a good game and need your input!

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It's totally refreshing, I like the game till this point. There isn't a lot happening, but I like the kind of The Flash time traveling idea.
 
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cold_arctus

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Well, I sold the Mustang and did some things Downtown I'm not proud of, but I managed to pay a programmer and artist to undo all the placeholders and polish everything up. If you had to play the concept demo, I'm so sorry. Give it to me straight, F95. Better? Needs more work? Let me know, I want to make a good game and need your input!

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Holly Fuck!! Your game has a lot of potential to become a great game! I like your concept and the humor of it (joking about Patreon etc.) Your game could become "the Deadpool version" of porn VN!

To bad that you have to rely on third parties to develop this game, because as said before, there is a lot of potential!
 

promailer

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I love it. Looking forward to new versions and expanding the game. I really hope this game will grow as it looks super awesome for the moment. Thank you and all the best
 

botc76

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IIRC, there are games on patreon which use porn images by famous adult actresses and actors.
Do they all pay the people on those pics and videos for the usage of their material?
I think not.
And yet a guy here who didn't even post the game himself, who from the start said the used assets were just placeholders gets all that shit and outrage? And as always most of you twats obviously didn't read the thread or played the game (or you should have seen that Summertime Saga assets were already removed, while Y'all still kept on raging).

I find it laughable that anybody could think that BB's Eric is in any way a protected asset, or any DAZD3D character is.
We've all seen them pop up in this game and that game, the only difference being the skill the artist has in changing them or the quality of the renders.
Getting riled up over a BB asset of all things, where the dev dropped his game like a hot potatoto, when patreon came a calling, leaving it unfinished, despite the shitload of money it had earned him, while others changed their games, provided patches or even continue to work on them outside patreon. Why would anybody go and bat for DarkSilver?
 
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macadam

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the description and the pics doesnt help at all.... sooo i m gonna give a try to it.

for science ( and mostly for know wtf is this allabout lol )
 

macadam

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what in the earth did i just played ??

this is by far the most fucked up stuff i have ever played.. i mean in good way... but... what the fuck ?

good job on breaking my already broken brain... that's even more wtf than what i can see in my entire life.

its.... sure is something.

( what the fuck did i just played ? )
 

macadam

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dont take my comment bad.
the game is very fun. but its extremly wtf too. its obviously the way of the game, and i like it.
i didnt expected that honestly, this game is really something...
 

botc76

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I loved it. The art is not exactly my thing, but I loved the writing, the humour, the easter eggs.

I can only repeat my post above, stop ripping into the guy because he used a character from summertime saga, for his proof of concept shit and instead check out what he's actually doing, which is while not that "porn-y" for now is a great way to waste your time. ;)
 

Omniwang

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Hey, everyone. Thanks for the feedback. I actually have Dark Silver's permission to use Eric in the upcoming content, so when he makes his proper introduction it'll be 100% kosher. The porny stuff is coming, and I hope everyone likes it. It won't all be totally insane, I'll play some stuff straight. Especially when the tops come down.

what's the patch for?
Without the patch, the game is about a guy and his landlord and roommate. If you add the patch everyone says mom as they're supposed to. I kind of like both versions, but the patched version is how it's really meant to go.

Once again, sorry about the placeholders. Maybe next update we'll have enough to replace those terrible screenshots in the OP.
 

Stakos

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You have a great idea and this is what you do with it? Ok, I know it's too early but maybe you shouldn't release it just yet. The game left me puzzled, should I wait for a future release that will be interesting or just ignore it? If someone tells me that this will be developed into a game with an actual story I'll be back if not I wish you the best, people actually like that thing you did...
 

Johnny28

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The mom looks like a mix between belle and the main guy from the disney atlantis movie
 

Hakkira

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The problem pointed out here is that the developer is outright stealing from other game developers, which is not cool, even on a pirate forum. There is a line, and you don't step over that line. One thing is paying an homage to someone or making a fanmade spinoff, using art which you made yourself, to match the original as best as possible, but just stealing art from someone is just not cool in my book.
Just had to say irrespective of this thread that your profile pic is pretty damn cool! Though I also agree that outright stealing assets from other Patreons is not cool! Also I think a lot of Pirates here are like me in that If I like a game on this site enough I tend to Patron it so I treat Pirating as just having better demos :) I only discovered the games I am Patroning from Pirate sites anyway :)
 
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Hmmm, okay, well...that was certainly interesting. :) I'm not entirely sure what just happened. This game has promise- it's almost an anti-game that parodies itself. It's very meta, obtuse, bizarre, 4th wall-breaking, pop-culture reference-y, wibbley-wobbley, timey-wimey, cringe-y, and a whole lot of fun. This game had a little bit of everything in it. I'm honestly surprised that there wasn't a Doctor Who T.A.R.D.I.S. sound effect thrown in for good measure. Lol It's actually pretty funny when
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There wasn't a great deal of meat in this update/demo, but it's seems to be all more less an extended tutorial. Which isn't a bad thing... As others have said, there are a great deal reference to movies, TV, other games, and easter eggs that only the trained eye will catch. Hopefully, there's going to be many more in "back to the future" updates.

I do have a suggestion for future updates- if you could label the locations when they're highlighted (on the main map and the arrows inside of the buildings)- that would be muy helpful. :)

I'm also curious- what "Episode" was this exactly? I was just doodling around (okay, I got lost) and found the "Landlady's" female, pet human in one of the rooms- where you play a game with her. It said that I won 1 RP and that there were more in Episode 1, but I never encountered her again in my wanderings... Were there more and I just missed them somehow? Is this a partial Episode 1 or something? Was the scene with BB Eric supposed to be somewhere (from the pics in the OP)?

Note to the Dev: I don't know if you noticed it or not, but it looks like the Pioneer/Godfather of WTF?! games has given your game his seal of approval. You should feel honoured. Lol
 
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Omniwang

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...maybe you shouldn't release it just yet.
Actually perfect advice. I didn't mean for anything to release before I had everything made up to the Past Timeline. I really wish I could have followed this, because I didn't like the placeholder version and the 0.91 version is just a release to overwrite that one. The next one should have more girls, make it past the extended tutorial and actually have the scenes we all really want. Safetydummy calling it an extended tutorial is right. It's the mechanics and a bit of stupid jokes before the inciting incident rolls around. I'm catching up on the assets for the next release and it should carry through the first act close of the episode. That one should feel like a proper release.

The mom looks like a mix between belle and the main guy from the disney atlantis movie
Ugh. Yeah. It's true. Now I wish the character was a bit more on model for Belle.

It's very meta, obtuse, bizarre, 4th wall-breaking, pop-culture reference-y, wibbley-wobbley, timey-wimey, cringe-y, and a whole lot of fun. This game had a little bit of everything in it. I'm honestly surprised that there wasn't a Doctor Who T.A.R.D.I.S. sound effect thrown in for good measure...
I'll get to Doctor Who references later! About the time button, it's a special function like a DVD back button. But it's got some special context uses - like jumping back with future knowledge to cheat in the past. Well, like Bill and Ted.

I do have a suggestion for future updates- if you could label the locations when they're highlighted (on the main map and the arrows inside of the buildings)- that would be muy helpful. :)
Good advice.

I'm also curious- what "Episode" was this exactly?
There's three episodes, one in the past, one in the future, and one somewhere else. For a screenwriting parallel, this is the inciting incident, which is like the first 5 minutes of a movie. The stuff with Eric is Episode 1, Act 2. The stuff with "Not Azula" is Episode 2.

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PS : "careful with that extremly small and young girl in MC house... she is definitly not adult.
The Azula ripoff is not an adult and you can't do anything with her in the present or past timelines. However, like SafetyDummy discovered, you can build rep with her in this release. Visit her room before you leave the Present and beat her at Mizuki's Kingdom to gain 1 RP. I'll make an actual walkthrough when there's actually something to walk through.
 
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