Ok, time to join the fray.... Its surprisingly dangerous in here LOL.
LONG STORY SHORT: I liked it.
LONG STORY LONG:
1.) The "turn back the clock" theme has been done before, but considering how short it has any relevance on the plot it posses no problem. My only issue is that its not explained why the MC couldn't go back further, but based on the writing it seems like we'll find out why later, I don't know or care, as long as we get some closure. Don't leave me hanging like Maz in "The Force Awakens" with " A good question, for another time" to explain how she got the lightsaber.
2.) Lily is perfect and well done. That's it.
3.) Rei is a great concept, and in the hypnosis route she's perfect, but the non-hypnosis route I think she moves a bit too fast. I don't think she's tainted by the knowledge of the cheating, she with or without hypnosis provides the MC with what he needs to confront his Cheating GF.
4.) Hana is an interesting concept, but she can be done better to offend less people while still contributing to the story. Multiple options exist:
a) We get to see the clip of them "cheating" and its straight up she's crying, protesting, trying to get out of it (because she knows its wrong)
b) we get to see the clip of the "cheating" and its like a kiss
c) we get to see the clip of them "cheating" and she's sitting on his lap nothing else
d) we get to see the clip of them "cheating" and she's in some kind of BDSM situation but no sex
e) Soft re-write players can choose no-cheating as an option, but because she was unfaithful in the previous timeline, mc still hypnotizes her to prevent cheating this time.
5.) The "goddess" is an interesting character, looking for more development there.
6.) Mrs. Stones and Astrid look like a fine pair of acquisitions on the road to revenge.
7.) Tessa..... Verry interesting character.... I wonder why she could break the hypnosis.
