VN Ren'Py Abandoned To Lie Upon [v0.1.4] [Xavis]

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Overview:
A young man hated by men all his life is struggling to find work. He gets a job at a restaurant that has an all female staff. While working he meets a strange woman that could give him some answers to why he is the way he is. Fun ensues.​

Thread Updated: 2019-08-30
Release Date: 2019-08-30
Developer: Xavis/jAsske

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Censored: No
Version: 0.1.4
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Others: COMPRESSED

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[Papa Ernie]

Editing thread. Will move it soon.

Done. Good luck with your game!

 

[gtz-god]

thank i going like this game but it size a bit low so i guest 30 min play time based on size

 

[jAsske]

Editing thread. Will move it soon.

Done. Good luck with your game!

Thank you!

 

[Mondoblasto]

First thought on screenshot 4: "That's not very sanitary."

 

[gtz-god]

what is that women eye is she a vampire or something

if so i help her power only work on men and because the mp power or brain wave i thinking why men dislike him stop her power because the wave of energy can't connect unlike weak mind people

 

[dacris69]

Short but interesting. Amy looks hot

 

[ThunderRob]

ACK!!..first female face appears and scares me shitless..thats..not cute...but it improves in other shots..lol
kinetic novel...oh well.delete

 

[botc76]

The girl with the frogface looks like someone out of a Lovecraft story, too much fucking with deep ones in her family.

 

[HorizonD]

Interesting start. Now I'm curious where this will go. ^^

 

[talibos]

First pic of Sarah seems a boy with a wig

 

[voyeurkind]

* I don't find Sarah appealing, looks-wise. I'm sure others will.

* Not sure you need a narrator, especially one describing what we can see on the screen.

* Thinking about it, the issue with Sarah may be the camera angle we see first, as she looks okay from other angles.

* There's probably a better way to show the MC's thoughts as well.

* The waitresses dress like school girls? Nice.

* The default MC's name shows up in the scene where he discovers the vibrator.

* You might want to change Bianca's line to "train you to be a server".

* I appreciate the view, but wet shirts really don't look like that.

* So happy to avoid the femdom.

It's not a bad first attempt. I'd like to have more control over the direction of the game, and it's not perfect, but the idea is more or less sound. I'm curious to see where it goes.

 

[fanboi]

Aw, just when I thought it was going to get good I'm not hypnotized or something into letting the lady in the back dominate me...

 

[VNON]

look good
keep going

 

[Chris Greenway]

is incest going to be a tag later on cause i hope it is so he can have sex with his mom

 

[Jeepster]

So loaded up old save, clicked twice and end. --> "my fault" i should have looked at Change log lol 14 new images etc. Well keep up the good work. Fix it if it needs fixin

 

[NanasBananas]

Dammit, stupid protagonist had the opportunity to kneel before a beautiful lady and be called a slave! And he blew it!

I suddenly know how all those people who complain about a protagonist that could have made a move on a girl who likes him but ran away instead feel... So close to glory, yet so far away...

 

[Alexis_1]

Funny. The main character has the face of a teenager, but the body of a 25 year old muscular man. I haven't seen more bullshit yet.

 

[Mormont]

Not bad although not so keen on the being told to kneel part I'd rather it was the other way around Megan and Sagira are nice though Sagira has a lot of booty going on back there

 

[ogr blanc]

ok, i need to ask, the dick hair chick, was she so thirsty that she got that hair cut so she could look at a dick in the mirror?