VN Ren'Py Abandoned To Lie Upon [v0.1.4] [Xavis]

[Canto Forte]

ACK!!..first female face appears and scares me shitless..thats..not cute...but it improves in other shots..lol
kinetic novel...oh well.delete

We soldier on ... kind rob! We soldier On...we are the fore front of Humanity!
Game balls to the wall ... deep and thorough ... in the midst of all the Gamers' glory!!

 

[Mormont]

Not sure what's going on with the light in some scenes it keeps changing from light to dark nice to get a bit more content with the Mom I'm glad the MC put that store manager in her place.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Hmm suck you bust. Almost as good as vampires.

 

[Abhai]

To Lie Upon [v0.1.4] [Xavis] (827 mb rar pc source)
67 mb rar unofficial pc compressed (slightly reduced image/video/audio quality):

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done by Cruncher v0.4b (BAS@f95zone)

 

[botc76]

Not. Rather, the protagonist has a hormonal disorder if he is aging so quickly . For eight years I was professionally engaged in swimming, before the 18th anniversary and I know how an athlete should look. Believe me, it is very difficult to build muscle mass at a young age, because the body goes mainly to growth.

Lol. It's not that I doubt that it is bullshit, but if that is all the bullshit you've seen, you must have lived a very sheltered life.
In the last month alone I've seen several things in games here that were at least as bad.

 

[botc76]

What's the point to add that tag?
A lot of VN's have no sexual content in their early stages and the tags which are there are not implying otherwise.

There are a few people here, (not many I think from what I see) who will start to piss and moan the moment they realize a game has no sexual content (and with that they mean actual fucking usually), even if is the first version, hell, even if it is just a demo.

Now, not saying having sex in a first version is bad, but it's also in no way necessary for a good game.
If all I wanted was to fap, I could just use xhamster or whatever other pornsite that is in fashion right now.

 

[HorizonD]

There are a few people here, (not many I think from what I see) who will start to piss and moan the moment they realize a game has no sexual content (and with that they mean actual fucking usually), even if is the first version, hell, even if it is just a demo.

Now, not saying having sex in a first version is bad, but it's also in no way necessary for a good game.
If all I wanted was to fap, I could just use xhamster or whatever other pornsite that is in fashion right now.

Yes, I get that but I think I read somewhere that tags should be showing what is in the game now and not what is in the future there.
I guess you could go around this when you write something like "future tags".

 

[Valmora]

I just finished reading this, you have a great start, great story going... please keep up the good work...
I saw very few wrong word usage or improper past-tense, post-tense, or just improper grammar... work on that will ya... IIt just makes the novel that much better when it reads smoothly...

 

[richarddlopatin]

EVERYTHING about the game just SCREAMS female domination. I don't see how (or why) you could escape it. Having said that, I wish you all the best.

 

[UserNed]

Not sure what's going on with the light in some scenes it keeps changing from light to dark nice to get a bit more content with the Mom I'm glad the MC put that store manager in her place.

Agreed. That light adjustment seemed to be an issue (the snooty store manager was an easy foil to bring them together). An example would be the 'changing room' scene.

 

[UserNed]

Please keep developing. I think this is a good start and a great first attempt.

A common complaint, at least in my head, is that the breast sizes are ridiculous. Some are Way too Big! No wonder Amy is always drinking - her back must be killing her. That said, sexy is subjective. I just don't get much out of cartoon-ish women. There are cartoonesque games one can play and that would be fine. But, the RenPy allows for more realistic appearances so I would think a more realistic anatomy would be good as well.

 

[patrickB]

So, no news since end of August on Patreon, anybody has some more info pls ?

 

[Mormont]

So, no news since end of August on Patreon, anybody has some more info pls ?

Well the dev is still active on here so maybe we'll get some word on the current development.