Yeah the whole "English is not my first language" is VERY clear here with phrases like "Tomorrow we will talk about why and WHY"
I get that Russian is clearly the language of choice, but a simple google translate would be mighty helpful with the dialog since the characters are talking like they are in a constant state of inebriation.
SPEAKING of which, HOW many people do you know that get completely SMASHED the day before you start THE college (ANOTHER part that will no doubt be irritating) I can WAIT to hear about THE college, THE classroom, THE business, and of course THE company in the near future.
Post an ad for an editor, and you can work out a deal for a share of the Patreon donations, but seriously the dialog is painful to wander through.
Edit: "either I fucked up my sweatshirt in the bar yesterday or I put it away in my BRIEFCASE"???
"Stories about which he blew my BRAINS out at BOOZE parties"???
"Why do we keep quiet like we have water in our mouths"???
"Damn fool, he thinks he is the smartest but can't even cook his own EGGS"??
"Do you gods have nowhere to put your WINE??
Do YOU even know what the fuck THAT means??