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I hope chapter 25 comes out on Christmas so I can read it to my extended family. Perhaps Don is working on a side story where Santa and his elves cuck some guy on Christmas eve
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the chat saying it might get released sometime Saturday or Sunday. I’ll keep an eye
Why so secretly, behind closed doors, with hidden cameras?
Why not turn Sarah into a porn-whore and send her into the porn-industry?
So that this inferior, characterless, criminal bastard Lester and his ilk can watch her films.
What a blooming fantasy ... really hats up!
By the way, what kind of dubious and dark machinations does Lester do for a living?
He spies on companies, sabotages their software, manipulates their business and so on.
And who does he work for?
On whose behalf is he spying, for which organisations, individuals or cartels?
He is a criminal and nothing else and should be taken out of circulation and punished!
Will the author D.S. simply let this criminal scoundrel Lester go in the end?
Or will we see (I hope so!) that Dan, with the help of his new work colleagues from New York, tracks him (Lester) down and then puts him where he belongs, namely in prison.
Another point is that we are talking about children here, children who have a biological father and mother.
We are not talking about goods whose ‘expiry date’ has passed and which can be thrown away or taken to another place.
Neither Lester nor anyone else is authorised to come near these children!
What kind of logic is that?
... And when Sarah decides in the end in favour of the inferior and criminal Lester, she's nothing more than a ‘cock-driven!’ bitch.
She seems to forget that her husband (Dan) left his family, his home and his town to give her a better life and not for the sake of his ego!
Why not turn Sarah into a porn-whore and send her into the porn-industry?
So that this inferior, characterless, criminal bastard Lester and his ilk can watch her films.
What a blooming fantasy ... really hats up!
By the way, what kind of dubious and dark machinations does Lester do for a living?
He spies on companies, sabotages their software, manipulates their business and so on.
And who does he work for?
On whose behalf is he spying, for which organisations, individuals or cartels?
He is a criminal and nothing else and should be taken out of circulation and punished!
Will the author D.S. simply let this criminal scoundrel Lester go in the end?
Or will we see (I hope so!) that Dan, with the help of his new work colleagues from New York, tracks him (Lester) down and then puts him where he belongs, namely in prison.
Another point is that we are talking about children here, children who have a biological father and mother.
We are not talking about goods whose ‘expiry date’ has passed and which can be thrown away or taken to another place.
Neither Lester nor anyone else is authorised to come near these children!
What kind of logic is that?
... And when Sarah decides in the end in favour of the inferior and criminal Lester, she's nothing more than a ‘cock-driven!’ bitch.
She seems to forget that her husband (Dan) left his family, his home and his town to give her a better life and not for the sake of his ego!
I'll be the first one to defend your right to have an opinion on the topic, but I've got to ask. If you find the subject matter so revolting, your comments indicate you despise everything about it, why are you reading it? This isn't a romance story, it's a story about forbidden desires and the characters that engage in said dark fantasies.
Yeah criticism of plot points is fine but I don't see the point in hating on the fundamental concept of the story and still reading.
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In the early developpement of the story DS said on his discord that it was a dark story but with an happy ending for the couple, guess he change is mind with all the pressure of hard cuck fan paying patreon
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Sarah didn’t say the word contraception but at end of chapter 20 when Sarah and Dan were conversing about the aftermath of Lester entering the home and his wife. They talked about Lester’s breeding kink
“It’s just some dumb thing Lester wanted. Something about him not being able to do it now and wanting to live out the experience. It’s just sex talk, Dan. It’s not real, you know that. He’s fixed, and besides, I’m not an idiot, okay? I’m not just going to have sex with someone and not take precautions.” Sarah added.
“I hope it was good,” Dan said. He wanted to dig more into the precautions she mentioned but wanted to jab at her first, “Did you enjoy yourself?”
Also we assume she was picking up birth control prescription in pharmacy section of Costco when she went to pick up dinner for Dan
Oh yeah, that's a good one, although jack black has some warmth to him. Also, I always imagined Sarah being a bit taller than Lester. Off topic, I was watching "The Firm" recently and the whole gene hackman-cruise-tripplehorn dynamic reminded me of Tainted Conception.
I also wanna say I really loved reading all the discussions/suggestions/rants. I was disappointed with chapter 24 so was planning to tapout. This thread and the ideas shared here rekindled my interest in this world.I particularly loved the idea of Sarah turning into Lester's co conspirator and Both of them moving to a new target.
Hopefully our conversations reaches Don and he considers incorporating them. Hopefully. Something tells me he's at least aware of some of it. The stuff like Dan trying to snoop on Lester, Sarah thinking about Lester and Dan competing for her, welcome kiss between them were all been discussed before in this forum. Don, if you are reading this, MORE PILLOW TALKS !!!!
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Might be an unpopular opinion, I actually don't mind if Don takes a month off of TA. The story has lots of skips between incidents and it seems like he has George rr Martin's meeraneese knot issue: opening up lots of plot points with no plan, which accumulate overtime, now untangling them requires more effort than the main story. You can add more ingredients, but once you add you can't take them out. Like Dan and Sarah's kids. It would be better if he takes a break, finish other stories, and come back to TA. Just my personal opinion
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When I went looking through the old chapters regarding Sarah and contraception for swewxxx. I reread chapter 20 and missed seeing Sarah and Dan arguing and saying hateful comments towards each other, especially after she went against Dan’s wish and fucked Lester in their house for the second time. I wished Don would have explored the friction between Dan and Sarah, but Don didn’t do anything with it. I hope Don re-explores this wedge or friction between Sarah and Dan after Dan was unable to get out of jail. I’m sure Dan will place blame squarely on Lester, but Sarah as well for not helping him. He will probably demand their sexual escapades end. Will this trigger Sarah to defend Lester and say petty and dismissive comments towards Dan?
Because I still have hope that things will change for the better.
I'm not criticizing the dark fantasies, the eroticism, but the degradation of the character Dan.
But on the other hand, giving Lester all the freedom to portray him as a genius and a supernatural superman so that he can pursue his “criminal” machinations and put them into action.
This goes beyond my imagination and is an annoyance to me because “illegality and criminality” are portrayed as something normal and commonplace...
ooh I'm a hugh sucker for 'trapped in an island' genre. You might know this already, there are two comics very similar to the bully island theme (uninhabited island by sanbun kyoden and it's remake by mr.sweetcuckold). Both are pretty meh tbh but there is a lot of room to improve, like son being trapped with them and there's a competition between the son and bully. check them out if you haven't.
I haven't read your stories yet, but I can assure you, I've added them to my list. I have always had a wild imagination, but never had the patience to sit down and write something. I appreciate that you are going for it. Keep writing!!!
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Ironically I was musing about this the other day. I want to see TA as a streamed film series - a lot of clean up would be needed in certain areas, especially character development/dialogue. Sadly it would never see the light of day if the sex component was filmed as written.
I appreciate you clarifying things for me. What happy ending are you hoping for, when you say change for the better? Honest question, no judgement intended.
Regarding Dan - but that's the whole point of Dan's character in this genre - he's the mill that Lester and Sarah grind against. (Shamefully admit pun absolutely intended.)
I will give you credit on Lester - DS could do a better job of giving some context for Lester's abilities, grounding him in reality more. At this stage, I just assume Lester has learned over his early years of being shit on to hone his cleverness and hacking/blackmail skills.
Actually you can take them back out but you have to resolve them logically. Jesse is a perfect example. He was introduced, served his purpose initially and then DS had a perfect opportunity to let him leave the story forever, once he was fired. But inexplicably, DS brought him back, for reasons I can't fathom.
It is very difficult to see a good ending in this story, I am not talking about a happy one.
A wife who openly despises and humiliates the father of her children.
I don't even know how to turn the plot so as not to harm this story, to give up the fascination with Lester and return to the worthless husband.
I have a question about the least significant character in this story: Ned. How come he didn't recognize Dan in hotel as Lester's roommate ?! What did Lester told him about Dan and Sarah?! Does he still think Sarah is Lester's gf? Even if Lester bullied him to do his bidding without revealing much, with some basic SM stalking he could've figured out Dan and Sarah are the couple. Just curious.
Replace him with some random hotel employee under Lester's payroll and the story remains the same. Unless Don is planning something major for him in ch 25.
Replace him with some random hotel employee under Lester's payroll and the story remains the same. Unless Don is planning something major for him in ch 25.
I could totally see this happening. It reminds me of the phone call between Dan and Sarah after she finds out that he let one if Lesters's friend to peep. Back when Don dropped lot of subtle info about Sarah's Ego. You could tell that Sarah is someone who wants to have Last word in any interaction. Even when her husband is sharing his darkest secret, even when she is truly moved by his honesty, she still had to place the blame on him as she couldn't bring herself to be vulnerable and didn't wanna appear as easy.
I thought that piece of writing was pretty accurate as I've met people like that in real life. If you made a mistake, 1000 apologies will not be enough for them and if it's their mistake , somehow you are still the ungrateful one as you didn't consider their perspective. *sigh* I wish Don gets back his mojo.