Remember around Christmas time we were talking about hitting 100 pages before the end of next year..... It's not even a month yet and we are at 75 already!!!
Yes. His venomous heart will become an aphrodisiac for her. One could call this a *puts sunglasses on* Toxic Attraction!!I
Love that idea. Although Lester would have to trust Sarah to let her in on his whole set up. She'd need to show more submission and connection to not just immediately tell Dan. But this is the direction I hope we're headed for. Where Sarah gets off not just to Lester's dick but to his twisted mind. She needs to find pleasure in helping Lester and boosting his ego. Ultimately she needs to choose Lester over her husband
Don't forget his strong cock, that Lester throws into their sex talk as well. I still am not sure what I think about that term, strong cock. I get images of his penis holding barbells and doing a Jack Lelane workout. But can his dick pull a boat on its birthday like Jack Lelane did every year?
And I said that statement in the first sentence as well as plenty times in the pastDan is a fictional character created by Don he cant impact or act on anything unless Don writes it that way.
Well I definitely won’t be complaining if we dust that milestone. I know for a lot of old timers who lurk on this thread, it’s been awesome seeing the increased traffic and the great comments posted. Maybe I should have said 150 or 200 pagesRemember around Christmas time we were talking about hitting 100 pages before the end of next year..... It's not even a month yet and we are at 75 already!!!
Well that would track if we get a Dan fights back chapter - still think he's going to go to TLG to fight Lester.We are coming upon the weekend and I’ve decided to check but Don has not posted anything new. I did read on chat someone (don’t know if credible but he posts a lot) commented Byron will be making a guest appearance in Ch.26. Take it how you will, but let the speculation begin. I will keep everyone posted.
As long as he guest appears in side plots, not around Sarah, I'm fine with that.We are coming upon the weekend and I’ve decided to check but Don has not posted anything new. I did read on chat someone (don’t know if credible but he posts a lot) commented Byron will be making a guest appearance in Ch.26. Take it how you will, but let the speculation begin. I will keep everyone posted.
BrasilHAHAHAHAHA
Only in fiction, I am afraid.
There is a saying in my country. It is something like this:
"Only gays like dicks. Women are in love with money."
Sure, cock is good, but not THAT good.
All this possible cat and mouse scenarios make me think of the movie Now You See Me. Dan, Byron and possibly Jesse are so focused on taking down on Lester so they can have Sarah for themselves they don’t see the slight of hand performed by Lester and Sarah where the gentleman get exposed and humiliated.Well that would track if we get a Dan fights back chapter - still think he's going to go to TLG to fight Lester.
I do as well, but we are past due for Don’s famous one step forward, three step back moment. If Don adds significant paper space for these hanger ons or Dan pours ice water on their love life for this upcoming chapter, it muddies up the progress we are starting to see with Sarah and Lester.I really hope DS isn't having Sarah fuck anyone but Lester for the upcoming chapters. Bringing Byron/Otis/Jesse back would ruin the story.
Most probably scenes with Byron will be used as fillers to get to the usual page numbers that DS does in a chapter.I do as well, but we are past due for Don’s famous one step forward, three step back moment. If Don adds significant paper space for these hanger ons or Dan pours ice water on their love life for this upcoming chapter, it muddies up the progress we are starting to see with Sarah and Lester.
I've been giving this a lot of thought. DS isn't stupid. He has a hit on his hands and I'm sure regardless of what he may have intended for the story, the money that's rolling in is a factor. He now has to walk a tight rope of creating enough content to satisfy as many people as he can and extend the story for as long as it's making him money. I mean I realistically believe that he could draw this out for at least 20-30 chapters, but to do so he will have to have a few B stories working in the background, i.e., TLG, Sentinel, Dan's Fight, The Hospital takeover, etc.Most probably scenes with Byron will be used as fillers to get to the usual page numbers that DS does in a chapter.
I couldn't agree more. Id love to hear about Lester's past, how he became the man he is today. The hospital drama/Lincoln group shit is so boring. I skip them on every first read and have to reread it to check if I missed anything important.I've been giving this a lot of thought. DS isn't stupid. He has a hit on his hands and I'm sure regardless of what he may have intended for the story, the money that's rolling in is a factor. He now has to walk a tight rope of creating enough content to satisfy as many people as he can and extend the story for as long as it's making him money. I mean I realistically believe that he could draw this out for at least 20-30 chapters, but to do so he will have to have a few B stories working in the background, i.e., TLG, Sentinel, Dan's Fight, The Hospital takeover, etc.
My only wish is that the B stories were as captivating as the main story. Do some flashbacks of Lester/Lizzie, or other women Lester has preyed on in the past, have Dan grow a pair and tell Sarah he's going to walk on the wild side and find him a side piece, or maybe give us some history of Sarah and Dan, entertaining the idea of sharing prior to meeting Lester, etc.
Yes Don could theoretically keep Toxic Attraction going for as long as time, but at what cost. I would hope Don is battling internally in regards to the future of Toxic. His other works have not hit the right combination of characters or sequence. But if he relies only on Toxic and suddenly has a jump the shark moment Don could lose his subscriber base. Don is capable of writing high quality work. Have Toxic Attraction end on a high note. If Don is unsure of his abilities to recreate the magic create spin offs or prequels to Toxic. Examples I thought of: who was Lester Marshall first victim, what happened to Lizzie and Issac when she returned home, Dan trying to pick up his life, but the urge hits with his new girlfriend, Lester and Sarah corrupting other couples or Dan’s new religious wife, or the Marshall legacy where the next generation (daughters or son) continue the corruption of others.I've been giving this a lot of thought. DS isn't stupid. He has a hit on his hands and I'm sure regardless of what he may have intended for the story, the money that's rolling in is a factor. He now has to walk a tight rope of creating enough content to satisfy as many people as he can and extend the story for as long as it's making him money. I mean I realistically believe that he could draw this out for at least 20-30 chapters, but to do so he will have to have a few B stories working in the background, i.e., TLG, Sentinel, Dan's Fight, The Hospital takeover, etc.
My only wish is that the B stories were as captivating as the main story. Do some flashbacks of Lester/Lizzie, or other women Lester has preyed on in the past, have Dan grow a pair and tell Sarah he's going to walk on the wild side and find him a side piece, or maybe give us some history of Sarah and Dan, entertaining the idea of sharing prior to meeting Lester, etc.
A Lester prequel and a Sarah sequel sounds more interesting to me. Maybe Don could go Godfather part II and try to tell them simultaneously (jk)What do you think of a Toxic Attraction part 2 or do you have a good spin off or prequel idea for Don?