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Ndbaelor

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Things I liked this alpha chapter:
  1. The info that Sarah is his first married conquest
  2. Dan making some progress with his mission on discord front
  3. Sarah getting thrilled by the idea of 'hurting' someone.
  4. Jesse finally shaping up to be an interesting wild card- his actions could either push Sarah towards Dan or more into Lester's clutches. Around chapter 10 I thought Jesse might turn into a stalker and perform some sort of home invasion thought it's a little farfetched. Now it seems like we might get some version of it.
BTW did he post any additional stories besides TA?! I did read he had a rough start for the year so I might've affected the story output.
 
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Wife is Hot

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I actually love this chapter. Particularly the office meeting scene. Lester defending Sarah made her see him differently. So far he’s only seen him as a great lover, this incident made her admire him and crave for him. Like she knew he was her alpha, a person she will submit to. Right now physically she belongs to him and eventually soon her heart.
 
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Verisimilinude said:
Guess it says a lot about this chapter - seeing as there isn't much chatter. Is everyone that underwhelmed?
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I did like that Sarah wore Lester's ring. I liked that he gave her a command and she obeyed. The fact that he just told her she's wet was also nice and telling her she belongs to him was good. It's a shame he didn't bring that up again during their sex. Make her admit she belongs to him.

Overall the plot was better than the sex in this chapter. That's usually not the case so good on DS. It was mostly a filler chapter. I really hope we get just Sarah and Lester in her home next chapter. No one interrupting. No other characters. Just the two of them
 
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justaperson456

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Verisimilinude said:
Guess it says a lot about this chapter - seeing as there isn't much chatter. Is everyone that underwhelmed?
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Like the previous commenters, it wasn't too bad. It's more of an interim chapter, setting up things to come. We had too many chapters that were just porn, this one does actual story building:
- Lester as the protector
- Lester setting his claim (with the ring)
- Lester using Otis to set a trap (instead of just sex)

Dan was underwhelming, and Sarah was a rather flat character, so a bit of good and a bit of bad
 
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Verisimilinude said:
Guess it says a lot about this chapter - seeing as there isn't much chatter. Is everyone that underwhelmed?
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Like many of us thought, this was more like a filler chapter with some setting up of the plot like the things said in the post above. Again, IMHO, DS is trying to stretching this out as long as possible.
 
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I was hoping for some information about Sarah and the daughter who thinks she saw her father, if the daughter had that information for herself. Regarding the ring, the development was good, it would be nice for Sarah to keep this lie that it was Dan who gave her the ring to her acquaintances, even her family. The hospital scene was great, I want to see if Lester will go back to Dan's house or not.
 
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justaperson456 said:
Like the previous commenters, it wasn't too bad. It's more of an interim chapter, setting up things to come. We had too many chapters that were just porn, this one does actual story building:
- Lester as the protector
- Lester setting his claim (with the ring)
- Lester using Otis to set a trap (instead of just sex)

Dan was underwhelming, and Sarah was a rather flat character, so a bit of good and a bit of bad
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Thank you, I think this is the word I've been looking for the overall chapter was just a little flat, let's hope the final has more oomph to it.
 
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Digging_story

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DarkStutzel said:
I was hoping for some information about Sarah and the daughter who thinks she saw her father, if the daughter had that information for herself. Regarding the ring, the development was good, it would be nice for Sarah to keep this lie that it was Dan who gave her the ring to her acquaintances, even her family. The hospital scene was great, I want to see if Lester will go back to Dan's house or not.
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Sarah hasn't told Dan about Lester coming to the house, DS is setting it up for the daughter to say something to her Dad....to this point Dan believe's he knows everything that has happened between Lester and Sarah. This will start to show him the true dangers of opening Pandora's box.
 
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For all you Tainted Conception fans Don just dropped a post on Patreon saying chapter 5 alpha is close to complete. Don put out a poll to see who fans want the father to be. Here are the options
Mark, her husband and true love is the father of her child?
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Saul, her husband’s scheming work rival is the one who knocked her up on Halloween?
OR
Ned (just kidding)

So sounds like this might be the last or close to last chapter of the series. Who is your pick?
 
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