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[Verisimilinude]

Its great to see eve’s reaction to Don’s alpha chapter, but should reserve judgement calling a chapter filler or trash until the last edits and revisions are completed. We have seen in the past Don inserting or revising a paragraph to include a flashback scene or Don might add a new scene. Don considers the feedback he receives from his fanbase and editors.

I wish Lester held steadfast with his statement at the end of Ch.25 and started keeping Sarah for himself. I didn’t understand the whole Otis ending as did many in chat. Why declare this at the end of chapter 25 then have Sarah service Otis. Not making much sense. All this does is drag out the interest of certain segment of the population who want to see Sarah with someone else like Otis or Jesse. This story started the three main characters and I hope we see the fates of those same characters.

True it is an alpha, but isn't part of the point of an alpha - to float ideas, see if they stick or to see how the audience reacts to it. Granted one should reserve judgmental associations with the material as it could change, but this one seemed different. Not sure why and can't put it in words other than - empty.

Regarding Otis - personally I think it's obvious - he taped Jessie, but didn't show it to Dan or Sarah, he did it again in this chapter with Otis. I think Lester is going to use the recordings to use it on or against Dan. Either to break down his will and resistance to what Lester wants or threaten Dan with exposure via blackmail (ala same as Jessie tried) - as Lester has done on previous victims. Why does the landlord in Chicago give Lester free rent - likely bc Lester has something on him.

Note this passage:
Otis was the perfect pawn to push the next phase of Lester’s plan. Sarah had already let herself go with Jesse. Now with Otis in her workplace, his financial stranglehold on the couple could truly begin.

Once Lester discovers who Dan's side hustles are he can/likely will neuter Dan's ability to provide for his family and allow Lester to step in and take active control or subversively use it to show Sarah that Lester is a better provider. Take away the couples monetary options and it's going to create stress fractures in the marriage.

 

[Ndbaelor]

Things I liked this alpha chapter:

1. The info that Sarah is his first married conquest
2. Dan making some progress with his mission on discord front
3. Sarah getting thrilled by the idea of 'hurting' someone.
4. Jesse finally shaping up to be an interesting wild card- his actions could either push Sarah towards Dan or more into Lester's clutches. Around chapter 10 I thought Jesse might turn into a stalker and perform some sort of home invasion thought it's a little farfetched. Now it seems like we might get some version of it.

BTW did he post any additional stories besides TA?! I did read he had a rough start for the year so I might've affected the story output.

 

[Wife is Hot]

Something to pass the time, while you wait...

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You already know I love your story. Gave it 5 stars as well

 

[Wife is Hot]

I actually love this chapter. Particularly the office meeting scene. Lester defending Sarah made her see him differently. So far he’s only seen him as a great lover, this incident made her admire him and crave for him. Like she knew he was her alpha, a person she will submit to. Right now physically she belongs to him and eventually soon her heart.

 

[powerconti]

One of the best stories ever.
Read and enjoy ...

 

[Youssef302]

Does anyone have chap 14 of my neighbor by antartica77

 

[Verisimilinude]

Guess it says a lot about this chapter - seeing as there isn't much chatter. Is everyone that underwhelmed?

 

[DarkStutzel]

Does anyone have chap 14 of my neighbor by antartica77

Lisa's Co-Worker - Part 4. ?

 

[Ndbaelor]

Guess it says a lot about this chapter - seeing as there isn't much chatter. Is everyone that underwhelmed?

I'm waiting for the actual chapter to drop....with very lowered expectations of course.

 

[adamblack144]

Guess it says a lot about this chapter - seeing as there isn't much chatter. Is everyone that underwhelmed?

I did like that Sarah wore Lester's ring. I liked that he gave her a command and she obeyed. The fact that he just told her she's wet was also nice and telling her she belongs to him was good. It's a shame he didn't bring that up again during their sex. Make her admit she belongs to him.

Overall the plot was better than the sex in this chapter. That's usually not the case so good on DS. It was mostly a filler chapter. I really hope we get just Sarah and Lester in her home next chapter. No one interrupting. No other characters. Just the two of them

 

[justaperson456]

Guess it says a lot about this chapter - seeing as there isn't much chatter. Is everyone that underwhelmed?

Like the previous commenters, it wasn't too bad. It's more of an interim chapter, setting up things to come. We had too many chapters that were just porn, this one does actual story building:
- Lester as the protector
- Lester setting his claim (with the ring)
- Lester using Otis to set a trap (instead of just sex)

Dan was underwhelming, and Sarah was a rather flat character, so a bit of good and a bit of bad

 

[rsrain1976]

Guess it says a lot about this chapter - seeing as there isn't much chatter. Is everyone that underwhelmed?

Like many of us thought, this was more like a filler chapter with some setting up of the plot like the things said in the post above. Again, IMHO, DS is trying to stretching this out as long as possible.

 

[DarkStutzel]

I was hoping for some information about Sarah and the daughter who thinks she saw her father, if the daughter had that information for herself. Regarding the ring, the development was good, it would be nice for Sarah to keep this lie that it was Dan who gave her the ring to her acquaintances, even her family. The hospital scene was great, I want to see if Lester will go back to Dan's house or not.

 

[Wife is Hot]

Does anyone have chap 14 of my neighbor by antartica77

Yes please anyone? or update Kemono.su please. Thanks

 

[Ndbaelor]

Looks like the other story for the month is gonna be the final chapter of Tainted Conception.....

 

[Verisimilinude]

Like the previous commenters, it wasn't too bad. It's more of an interim chapter, setting up things to come. We had too many chapters that were just porn, this one does actual story building:
- Lester as the protector
- Lester setting his claim (with the ring)
- Lester using Otis to set a trap (instead of just sex)

Dan was underwhelming, and Sarah was a rather flat character, so a bit of good and a bit of bad

Thank you, I think this is the word I've been looking for the overall chapter was just a little flat, let's hope the final has more oomph to it.

 

[Digging_story]

I was hoping for some information about Sarah and the daughter who thinks she saw her father, if the daughter had that information for herself. Regarding the ring, the development was good, it would be nice for Sarah to keep this lie that it was Dan who gave her the ring to her acquaintances, even her family. The hospital scene was great, I want to see if Lester will go back to Dan's house or not.

Sarah hasn't told Dan about Lester coming to the house, DS is setting it up for the daughter to say something to her Dad....to this point Dan believe's he knows everything that has happened between Lester and Sarah. This will start to show him the true dangers of opening Pandora's box.

 

[idkmanerally]

Looks like the other story for the month is gonna be the final chapter of Tainted Conception.....

 

[Ndbaelor]

Woah what did I do?!

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Guess it says a lot about this chapter - seeing as there isn't much chatter. Is everyone that underwhelmed?

It’s one of Don‘s weaker alpha releases so far. I questioned when Don said he was going to write more in 2025, as quality is usually the first thing that goes into the wastebin. Hopefully this is a aberration.