Toxic Attraction DonSilver #Cuckold 8muses forum

[Chillie_Willie]

I think we crossed over on topics. I meant that I thought it was a good idea to write and describe a character so that regardless of who the reader is - the reader would have room to imagine the specifics about said character.

It’s more like I’m seeing on chat the simps who influence Don want him to write a chapter covering a certain genre of erotica to satisfy their kinks. Then cover another genre with the next chapter. They don’t care about the story just satisfying their fetishes

 

[adamblack144]

Curious - how many people here would be okay with this series winding down to a final? Like if the next 10 chapters or less, focused on the three main characters and we got an ending. Would you want that, or would you be disappointed?

I want another 20 chapters. We're at the half way point IMO. There's still a lot to resolve and we don't have an ending in mind. Plus I really like reading it and still have hope it can get back to the early peaks or reached.

 

[Verisimilinude]

It’s more like I’m seeing on chat the simps who influence Don want him to write a chapter covering a certain genre of erotica to satisfy their kinks. Then cover another genre with the next chapter. They don’t care about the story just satisfying their fetishes

It would likely be a bitch to keep track of the continuity issues but something I was kicking around is DS might consider splitting the series into two tracks that could satisfy both fan bases. TA would keep going but focus on the main story of the 3 MC's, but then start a new series that focused on Sarah's side adventures that didn't involve Lester. Sort of a here's the story I intended to write, but here's this other alternate history version that could focus on the Fetish crowd's wants.

IDK now that I say it out loud maybe it wouldn't make anyone happy.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

I’m wonder if Don is hitting a wall, i.e. burn out. I’m saying this as tDon tries to publish one or more stories each month on Patreon, however lately he struggles to meet deadlines like TC5 and with the quality has suffered versus his earlier chapters. Verisimilinude and I had a private conversation earlier and agree with his observation that someone other than DS wrote the latest alpha chapter. Makes sense if you look how this chapter was written especially in regards to character development and the ending.

 

[GGCaesar]

It seems a lot the simps want Don to cover every genre of erotica with Toxic Attraction: erotic coupling, mind control, exhibitionist/voyeur, romance, BDSM, incest/taboo, gangbang/group, interracial, loving wife, fetish, and non-consent/reluctant. That is a bit too much trying to stretch the story in so many dif direction each chapter. Don has forgotten the essence that made Toxic Attraction so good and unique in the first place, it was about Sarah, Lester and Dan. Lester said it best: no one else matters

Chillie, that story -Lester, Sarah and Dan, ended around ch14 i.e. when the center of the illicit affair moved from the house in Chicago.

The moment DS has begun to play Lester outside that context, the story couldn’t be the same anymore and other actors need to be (imho correctly) involved to have a plausible scenario.

From that point on, the story has a trajectory that cannot be forecast, btw possible scenarios, Lester losing the control in an environment he doesn’t know - with another one taking the cherry - or Sarah completely liberated and willing vixen.

It’s the natural evolution of a story if the author wants to maintain a minimum of plausibility.

This is why lot of people are asking Otis-Sarah behind Lester, because it’s the most plausible outcome considering the description of ch26 alpha.

 

[superhoopdownunder]

I would like to see seperate adventures of Sarah’s sex life as she gets to experience other situations such as a lesbian session, a gangbang, maybe stripping at a club, giving blow jobs at a glory hole. This could be fun. I’d rather read about different sexual encounters rather than Dan being a wimp.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Chillie, that story -Lester, Sarah and Dan, ended around ch14 i.e. when the center of the illicit affair moved from the house in Chicago.

The moment DS has begun to play Lester outside that context, the story couldn’t be the same anymore and other actors need to be (imho correctly) involved to have a plausible scenario.

From that point on, the story has a trajectory that cannot be forecast, btw possible scenarios, Lester losing the control in an environment he doesn’t know - with another one taking the cherry - or Sarah completely liberated and willing vixen.

It’s the natural evolution of a story if the author wants to maintain a minimum of plausibility.

This is why lot of people are asking Otis-Sarah behind Lester, because it’s the most plausible outcome considering the description of ch26 alpha.

Caesar - I get that what you've laid out is the story you want to happen, but sometimes I wonder if we are reading the same story. Sarah isn't a vixen in the traditional sense, that's what Dan wanted originally, but he ceded that power to Lester. Name one character that Sarah has had sex with, that wasn't planned or orchestrated by Lester? Byron is the only one and she hadn't even planned on doing that and she told you in her own words the whole time she was thinking of Lester. Those aren't my hopes or desires it's what's written on the page.

Regarding the Otis/Sarah scene in ch26 - you say that it's the plausible outcome for Sarah to do this behind Lester's back and why people want it. If it had been written that Sarah decided to find/give Otis a blowjob, I would agree with you. But that's not what was written, she did it because Lester told her to, and then Lester filmed it (I'm sure we will find out why in a later chapter).

The basic premise of this story from Ch1 all thru Ch26 is that Lester is corrupting Sarah and gradually taking Dan's place.
* Lester takes her on dates and buys her things that Dan can't afford
* Lester fucks her better than Dan can
* Lester gives her a better wedding night than Dan did
* Lester shares her with others but doesn't lose control like Dan does (obvious exception being Vernon)
* Lester shows her he can earn more than Dan
* Lester shows her he can get shit done, while Dan can't find his ass if it was handed to him
* Lester buys her a better wedding ring than Dan
* Lester saves her job, which Dan couldn't do (even if Dan knew she'd lost it)
* Lester stood up for her and put Mary in her place, which Dan couldn't do
* Speculation but I assume if/when Sarah gets pregnant by Lester he will give her the son that Dan couldn't
* Again speculation but the ending of this story will be about Sarah having to decide which life she wants to lead.

With all of that setup over 26 chapters, mind you written by DS (not what fans hope or want to happen), why would anyone think the story would suddenly turn into Sarah ditching Lester and fucking every tom, dick and harry? Why any author would spend that much time and effort writing a detailed plot to suddenly just chunk it and start writing a whole new plot on chapter 27, without tying up the previous one - now that - that would be an implausible outcome.

 

[Dougy60]

Does anyone have neighbor chronicles redux chapter 3 and 4 by Envoyeur?

There's a 4th???

 

[GGCaesar]

Caesar - I get that what you've laid out is the story you want to happen, but sometimes I wonder if we are reading the same story. Sarah isn't a vixen in the traditional sense, that's what Dan wanted originally, but he ceded that power to Lester. Name one character that Sarah has had sex with, that wasn't planned or orchestrated by Lester? Byron is the only one and she hadn't even planned on doing that and she told you in her own words the whole time she was thinking of Lester. Those aren't my hopes or desires it's what's written on the page.

Regarding the Otis/Sarah scene in ch26 - you say that it's the plausible outcome for Sarah to do this behind Lester's back and why people want it. If it had been written that Sarah decided to find/give Otis a blowjob, I would agree with you. But that's not what was written, she did it because Lester told her to, and then Lester filmed it (I'm sure we will find out why in a later chapter).

The basic premise of this story from Ch1 all thru Ch26 is that Lester is corrupting Sarah and gradually taking Dan's place.
* Lester takes her on dates and buys her things that Dan can't afford
* Lester fucks her better than Dan can
* Lester gives her a better wedding night than Dan did
* Lester shares her with others but doesn't lose control like Dan does (obvious exception being Vernon)
* Lester shows her he can earn more than Dan
* Lester shows her he can get shit done, while Dan can't find his ass if it was handed to him
* Lester buys her a better wedding ring than Dan
* Lester saves her job, which Dan couldn't do (even if Dan knew she'd lost it)
* Lester stood up for her and put Mary in her place, which Dan couldn't do
* Speculation but I assume if/when Sarah gets pregnant by Lester he will give her the son that Dan couldn't
* Again speculation but the ending of this story will be about Sarah having to decide which life she wants to lead.

With all of that setup over 26 chapters, mind you written by DS (not what fans hope or want to happen), why would anyone think the story would suddenly turn into Sarah ditching Lester and fucking every tom, dick and harry? Why any author would spend that much time and effort writing a detailed plot to suddenly just chunk it and start writing a whole new plot on chapter 27, without tying up the previous one - now that - that would be an implausible outcome.

Really in this case you have misunderstood me I think.

I have given some examples of possibile scenarios, I’m not saying they are what DS must write otherwise the story becomes bad. The story unfolding is up to DS.

What I state is that - Lester, Sarah,Dan - ended when the center of action moved from the house in Chicago. So other actors becoming relevant is to be expected.

About Otis-Sarah, really from reading it seems to me it has gone far far away from Sarah was expecting to do. And imho due to Otis attitude vs her. This is the first scene partially outside Lester control, clearly, and Otis will fuck her if she will be isolated. It is a consequence of the scene, you might not like it but that it was.

Edit: when I say partially outside Lester control I mean that Sarah is not thinking of him in doing so. Sarah has serviced Otis, in the described way, because she was clearly excited by how Otis was dealing with her, and this was outside Lester request(which was the starting point for sure).

 

[justaperson456]

Curious - how many people here would be okay with this series winding down to a final? Like if the next 10 chapters or less, focused on the three main characters and we got an ending. Would you want that, or would you be disappointed?

Yeah, the current alpha would be a nice start to the end: Lester taking over, lester protecting Sarah, Lester getting her pregnant. The janitor is the blackmail card, it can be used to control Dan. If the video is leaked Sarah will be fired. If Sarah is fired the children loose their home. All this should fit in ten chapters. It's time to wrap things up.

 

[Wife is Hot]

Hi Chillie, do you happen to know who won on the poll for TC?

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Hi Chillie, do you happen to know who won on the poll for TC?

I was just on his Patreon account and it’s still up and running. No indication on who’s leading the poll. I will keep everyone posted once Don sends out the final numbers. Would be hilarious if Ned wins.

Also no updates in chat regadding when TC5 alpha will be released. Actually It’s real quiet in the chat which is unusual

 

[Chillie_Willie]

To verify I looked at Discord and edits are not completed. So we are still in a holding pattern.

 

[Verisimilinude]

What I state is that - Lester, Sarah,Dan - ended when the center of action moved from the house in Chicago. So other actors becoming relevant is to be expected.

About Otis-Sarah, really from reading it seems to me it has gone far far away from Sarah was expecting to do. And imho due to Otis attitude vs her. This is the first scene partially outside Lester control, clearly, and Otis will fuck her if she will be isolated. It is a consequence of the scene, you might not like it but that it was.

Edit: when I say partially outside Lester control I mean that Sarah is not thinking of him in doing so. Sarah has serviced Otis, in the described way, because she was clearly excited by how Otis was dealing with her, and this was outside Lester request(which was the starting point for sure).

I'm pointing out that, based on your comments, you seem to be reading a different story than what is written, or you are interpreting it differently than the rest of us. If that's the case no harm, no foul, you read it however you want. I guess I'm saying I just find it hard to understand how you come to the conclusions you do, which is the reason that I ask questions.

The plot didn't change bc the scenes are now in Middleton, it's still the same plot. Is it necessary for a story to have minor characters in it that come and go? Yes, it adds some interest for the reader to be curious about. Sometimes the author will add red herrings to throw off the readers expectations. However this story has been pretty consistent in detailing the plot and nothing in it suggests, that DS will throw out the plot to have Sarah start having sexual encounters with random characters, unless it ties back to the central plot - i.e, Otis who is a means to an end for Lester - a pawn.

Yes Sarah enjoyed the sex, she's done that before when Lester has organized her being shared with other men - but the part you are leaving out is that she keeps coming back to Lester. Because that's the plot of this story. As I said previously when it's written that Sarah decides to fuck someone without Lester's approval or knowledge, then I will agree with you. My comments have nothing to do with what I or any other reader wants or likes, I focus on the facts of the story as they are written.

 

[Verisimilinude]

I was just on his Patreon account and it’s still up and running. No indication on who’s leading the poll. I will keep everyone posted once Don sends out the final numbers. Would be hilarious if Ned wins.

Also no updates in chat regadding when TC5 alpha will be released. Actually It’s real quiet in the chat which is unusual

Wait Ned was a choice for who got Brooke pregnant in TC5?

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Wait Ned was a choice for who got Brooke pregnant in TC5?

Yes. Don meant it as a joke but Ned was one of the choices. Everyone was hoping Saul

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Again as we wait lets discuss the tiny potential Ned might win as the poll has unlimited votes.

What are your thoughts if the unlikely scenario happens and Ned wins the poll, would you think less of Don Silver if he suddenly involved Ned as a potential baby daddy just to satisfy the kinks of his fans?

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

TA26A

I really hate where that Sarah is reluctant and regrets her every action afterwards especially at this stage of the game. There is never just one side enthusiastic about the affair. These are consenting adults not they both knowing what they are getting into but Don treats every chapter like it’s her first or second time or Sarah is a minor. every glimmer of hope we get that Sarah maybe edging closer to Lester Don has to throw an obstacle or a conundrum into the story. Also Dan is so clueless and ineffective he deserves to lose his wife. He is making the conscious effort not to talk or engage his wife. It’s like he is in some kind of trance or undergoing a schoolboy crush like Jesse. Finally Otis was unnecessary at this stage of the game unless he is Cronos or to quell him from sticking his dick in Sarah

I have not been able to respond to this chapter in a timely way, so I am doing so as a reply to your post Chillie, hope you don't mind a hitchhiker.
My biggest problem beside what you have mentioned here (she should be enthusiastic by now, considering she has frequently called Lester's her favorite cock and has admitted, at least to herself that no one fucks/makes love to her better than Lester) is that this chapter's sex scene is almost a direct copy of them fucking in her office before. No, there is not a window looking over the parking lot, there is a window looking straight into other employees (which didn't Don write that they got rid of everyone else???). AAAAUUUUUGGGGGHHHHH!!!!! to quote the late, great, Charlie Brown.
I kind of picture lester asking hert one more time of she is going to do anything that he asks and she says yes. He says take me to your house and then to your room and give me Dan's side of the bed. "Tell me it isn't his anymore." He tells her this is not sex talk, this not something to take back because you were out of your mind in orgasms. He tells Sarah he wants her to take it from Dan and give it to him. Sarah hesitatesm so Lester tells her that he thought she said she did lie. She tells him she doesn't. He tells her then do what I am telling you to, like you swore you would. She ends up saying she would bring him over tonight. Lester tells her he was really upset to find out that the keys he made don't work anymore, after he paid to have them made. Sarah says, "Dan..." Lester tells her that he knows Dan did it, fucking with his time alone with Sarah. He tells her to take the rest of the day off and get a locksmith out there to change all the locks with a pair for herself, the kids, and him; none for Dan, period. Sarah says ok, lester and leaves.
Something like this would point clearly to Sarah finally giving in to Lester and casting Dan aside. It would show the level of control he has over her. It would force her to face the hypocrisy of saying she doesn't lie, but always shrinking back to the beginning again, by saying "it was just sex talk." I have gotten to the point of HATING that fucking line.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Again as we wait lets discuss the tiny potential Ned might win as the poll has unlimited votes.

What are your thoughts if the unlikely scenario happens and Ned wins the poll, would you think less of Don Silver if he suddenly involved Ned as a potential baby daddy just to satisfy the kinks of his fans?

Can't speak for anyone else, but I would lose respect for DS as a writer if he made Ned the father, just bc of a fan poll. It would signal that he actual is just writing what the fans want to read vs telling the stories he wants to tell.

Psiber@mauvais (you'll have to imagine this in Darth Vader's voice)

The shadowy figure loomed over Brooke's bed as she was awakened in the night. "Brooke, I...am the father of your child." rasped Ned. "That's not possible! I don't even know you!" said Brooke, scrambling backwards in disgust. "Search your feelings, Brooke. You know them to be true." countered Ned. "Nooooo!!!!! Not possible...not possible!" said Brooke shaking her head in denial before continuing "When did we fuck?"

 

[DarkStutzel]

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