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Why has Lester dropped the "I love you" bit? He was obsessed with making her say it, she did and then he never brings it up? In this chapter she says "I love fucking you", why didn't he play on that? Take that further. Ask her what else she loves. Make her describe his features and how she's grown to find them attractive. End it with her saying "I love you" as she cums. But no, "it's just sex talk"
No more I love you, no more daddy, they barely mocked Dan. DS has to stop introducing elements in their sex without serious development. He can't focus on that because he's pandering to subs who want Sarah fucking every single male character in the story. Wouldn't be surprised if they bring her father in for some incest so they can tick off their kink list
No more I love you, no more daddy, they barely mocked Dan. DS has to stop introducing elements in their sex without serious development. He can't focus on that because he's pandering to subs who want Sarah fucking every single male character in the story. Wouldn't be surprised if they bring her father in for some incest so they can tick off their kink list
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Do you like slow-burn stories? If you do then I'll say the reason why is because they build anticipation. If you crave chocolate and it keeps getting denied, you do get frustrated but it also builds a hope that you'll get chocolate next month. Same concept works for TA. Each month you build hope that what you want to happen, will happen. It took 7 chapters before Lester got to fuck Sarah. Nothing wrong with this, because it built desire and anticipation.
Having said that, I do agree with you, that DS has not been paying off his teases as quickly as in the past. Especially with some of the peripheral control stuff. The mocking Dan stuff I think is on pace, it's very new to Sarah and she still has to warm up to the idea of doing it. As for the "I love you's" it was always meant as a manipulation/control technique. Lester doesn't really need to invoke it that much bc she's already converted to doing most things he asks of her. Not to mention it's best value now is only in front of Dan, so I'm sure that when we see future scenes where Dan is watching you'll see it come up more often.
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FYI No updates or new story from Don.
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Here is Tainted conception 5. Hope you enjoy
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I wonder if Saul will suffer the same fate as Lester by Dan’s hands
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I Have it but you can find old Don Silver uploads like chapter 4 here.
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Well I’ll go ahead and say it maybe Don should not end Toxic Attraction anytime soon based on the ending of Tainted Conception. The current ending is a mixed bag and hopefully will get polished by the final. Don indicates he might add a scene or two so he sees it too.
Don has yet to reveal polls numbers about who was the daddy but guessing from the alpha draft we get a strong preview. So sorry to all the Ned well wishers. Anyways looks like Saul is daddy, Brooke is corrupted for life, Mark‘s revelation was quick but in the end he’s a murderer and soon to be alcoholic and sadly for some Saul never gets to see his kid. As with Detestable Liasisons Don can’t seem to let go of his characters as he wants to reuse these characters at a later date.
Don has yet to reveal polls numbers about who was the daddy but guessing from the alpha draft we get a strong preview. So sorry to all the Ned well wishers. Anyways looks like Saul is daddy, Brooke is corrupted for life, Mark‘s revelation was quick but in the end he’s a murderer and soon to be alcoholic and sadly for some Saul never gets to see his kid. As with Detestable Liasisons Don can’t seem to let go of his characters as he wants to reuse these characters at a later date.
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Epilogue: Brooke secretly had a DNA test for the baby and confirmed that it was Saul’s. She reached out to him to let him know. He was curious and wanted to see the baby. She visited him while Mark is at work and ended up having sex with him again. Saul requested to work from home 3 times a week and Brooke visits him on these days. Brooke is now pregnant with the second baby. Saul decided to work from home full time and 3 more pregnancies happened after that. Brooke loves both men and they all live happily ever after. Mark is still clueless.
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I don't think it's a perfect ending and I wish the birth would've happened in chapter 2 or 3, but I did laugh at this.
It's nice to have a relatively quick story. Guess Don will have to create a new one unless he plans to expand on the hobo one (yuck). NE seems like another very long form story.
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That would've been interesting. I think they'll need a necromancer to pull that off now though
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Toxic Attraction final chapter 26
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Wouldn't have been the way I would have ended it, bit on the violent side. But since he went there I think he should shuffle around the scenes. Have them reconcile, then he finds Brooke getting off to the video, and then go mental and kill Saul. Seemed random to go from an angry husband to homicidal maniacal super spy, the way it's currently written. If it happened the way I suggest it would make sense why Mark goes off the deep end, bc he would understand that as long as Saul was alive, he couldn't trust Brooke.
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Or he could use the extra time to focus on the stories he needs to wrap up. But doesn't he have the undercover wife one brewing?