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Sermex67

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Verisimilinude said:
Can't speak for anyone else, but I would lose respect for DS as a writer if he made Ned the father, just bc of a fan poll. It would signal that he actual is just writing what the fans want to read vs telling the stories he wants to tell.

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The shadowy figure loomed over Brooke's bed as she was awakened in the night. "Brooke, I...am the father of your child." rasped Ned. "That's not possible! I don't even know you!" said Brooke, scrambling backwards in disgust. "Search your feelings, Brooke. You know them to be true." countered Ned. "Nooooo!!!!! Not possible...not possible!" said Brooke shaking her head in denial before continuing "When did we fuck?"
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Why has Lester dropped the "I love you" bit? He was obsessed with making her say it, she did and then he never brings it up? In this chapter she says "I love fucking you", why didn't he play on that? Take that further. Ask her what else she loves. Make her describe his features and how she's grown to find them attractive. End it with her saying "I love you" as she cums. But no, "it's just sex talk"

No more I love you, no more daddy, they barely mocked Dan. DS has to stop introducing elements in their sex without serious development. He can't focus on that because he's pandering to subs who want Sarah fucking every single male character in the story. Wouldn't be surprised if they bring her father in for some incest so they can tick off their kink list
 
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adamblack144 said:
Why has Lester dropped the "I love you" but? He was obsessed with making her say it, she did and then he never brings it up? In this chapter she says "I love fucking you", why didn't he play on that? Take that further. Ask her what else she loves. Make her describe his features and how she's grown to find them attractive. End it with her saying "I love you" as she cums. But no, "it's just sex talk"

No more I love you, no more daddy, they barely mocked Dan. DS has to stop introducing elements in their sex without serious development. He can't focus on that because he's pandering to subs who want Sarah fucking every single male character in the story. Wouldn't be surprised if they bring her father in for some incest so they can tick off their kink list
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Do you like slow-burn stories? If you do then I'll say the reason why is because they build anticipation. If you crave chocolate and it keeps getting denied, you do get frustrated but it also builds a hope that you'll get chocolate next month. Same concept works for TA. Each month you build hope that what you want to happen, will happen. It took 7 chapters before Lester got to fuck Sarah. Nothing wrong with this, because it built desire and anticipation.

Having said that, I do agree with you, that DS has not been paying off his teases as quickly as in the past. Especially with some of the peripheral control stuff. The mocking Dan stuff I think is on pace, it's very new to Sarah and she still has to warm up to the idea of doing it. As for the "I love you's" it was always meant as a manipulation/control technique. Lester doesn't really need to invoke it that much bc she's already converted to doing most things he asks of her. Not to mention it's best value now is only in front of Dan, so I'm sure that when we see future scenes where Dan is watching you'll see it come up more often.
 
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