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[Ndbaelor]

Speaking of fireworks next chapter, Dan and Sarah haven't talked to each other in a while and I'm thinking it's gonna be a pretty significant part of it. They have been pretty honest with each other when the story started. Now Sarah has a lot to hide (is Dan still in the dark about Lester being her boss?) and Dan might decide to hold some cards close to chest, it will be interesting to read their first dishonest talk.

Another interesting conversation could be about upcoming weekend within the story. With kids with her parents, Will she met Dan at Chicago (maybe with Lester) or stay in Middleton(maybe with lester)? It will be interesting to see going through all the options in her head. My favorite would be her deciding to ditch Lester, spend the weekend with Dan and promptly gets punished by Lester when she returns. Or halfway through the trip she changes her mind, dramatically take the exit back to Middleton to Lester's hotel like in a romcom!

 

[bluepixiegurl316]

Reminded me of this song.

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Thank you, you've forced me to reconsider things. I thought this story was playing out as a traditional three act structure. Now I'm leaning more towards it becoming a seasonal model (ala Seasonal TV Series). Your ring comments were the catalyst because it's the new focus for this season - it's narrative value is that it is the tool Lester will use to complete his domination of Sarah. Starting with reluctant wearing it to publicly wearing it; allowing Dan/others to know that it marks her as Lester's.

Season 1 Ch1-14 (Lester wants to fuck Sarah)
Season 2 Ch15-24 (Lester wants to corrupt Sarah)
Season 3 Ch25- (Lester wants total Dominance over Sarah and to Humiliate Dan)
Season 4 -- (Likely Breeding Sarah and total Dominance over the entire Family)
Season ? -- (There could be a season where Sarah has chosen Lester, but then Dan/Sarah fight for Redemption)
Season ? -- The Ending (Either Redemption for the couple or Darkness: Sarah choosing Lester)

 

[juscrap]

But like SmartMan said earlier the only way Saul is being contact now is through a psychic or Séance. I don’t under the dynamics of making Mark a super spy like James Bond after being clueless for so long. Will Don pull such a stunt with Dan becoming a murderous ,vindictive husband or will it be Jesse who murders Lester cold blood so he can release his beloved Sarah from the clutches of Lester. Overall a violent end for an erotic cheating wife story. Hope this doesn’t foreshadow how Toxic Attraction will end.

Yeah the ending was disappointing. TC was so good until chapter 3. 4 and 5 feels like a rushed ending and no way continues the steady pace the story was built up in the first 3 chapters.
The spy angle was so bad. I can understand Mark gaining his smartness once the drug stopped, but breaking into a phone (Saul surely would have had a password for someone who covered his tracks very well) and then into his home, and doing a super spy operation to retrieve the hdd, yeah thats a sucky writing.

I still enjoyed the sex scenes and the whole confessing to the halloween events with Mark in call, which as always Don is very good at. But I wish he had spent a little more time in writing a good ending to the story.

 

[adamblack144]

Here's an interesting idea: Sarah and Lester go back to Chicago together. Dan gets angry and they both lie to each other and Sarah stays with Lester while they're in Chicago.

 

[Digging_story]

Speaking of fireworks next chapter, Dan and Sarah haven't talked to each other in a while and I'm thinking it's gonna be a pretty significant part of it. They have been pretty honest with each other when the story started. Now Sarah has a lot to hide (is Dan still in the dark about Lester being her boss?) and Dan might decide to hold some cards close to chest, it will be interesting to read their first dishonest talk.

Another interesting conversation could be about upcoming weekend within the story. With kids with her parents, Will she met Dan at Chicago (maybe with Lester) or stay in Middleton(maybe with lester)? It will be interesting to see going through all the options in her head. My favorite would be her deciding to ditch Lester, spend the weekend with Dan and promptly gets punished by Lester when she returns. Or halfway through the trip she changes her mind, dramatically take the exit back to Middleton to Lester's hotel like in a romcom!

I agree on this - from what I can tell, Dan doesn't know Sarah works for Lester, has been with him since the hotel (including at his "off limits" house), or anything about Otis.

I have to imagine Dan would would want to return home to see his family; although, Lester has made it seem like he's longing to be back in Chicago. I think Dan's daughter asking why he didn't respond when he saw her outside his room will start the fireworks - do Dan and Lester switch places or does Sarah fall deeper into Lester's labyrinth?

 

[Digging_story]

Here's an interesting idea: Sarah and Lester go back to Chicago together. Dan gets angry and they both lie to each other and Sarah stays with Lester while they're in Chicago.

Or maybe, like they were about to after the hotel, Sarah returns to the apartment from night with Lester, to start servicing Lester, Dan walks in and she doesn't notice, continues to express "love" for Lester/ his cock. Lester begins taunting her about about how she will do "anything" for him - including fucking him in their house, his office, her encounters with Otis, etc...she needs to keep doing this to keep her "boss" happy. This being the first time Dan learns how much he doesn't know.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Here's an interesting idea: Sarah and Lester go back to Chicago together. Dan gets angry and they both lie to each other and Sarah stays with Lester while they're in Chicago.

I see a scenario like that eventually happening. It would be interesting in the context of how much Dan and Sarah changed from when they last met. Remember when Lester proclaimed Dan will not recognize his wife. It’s obvious Dan doesn’t care about work anymore. He ignores emails and assignments as his main focus is to pursue Lester, tamp down his sexual urges, and log into Discord. Dan did state he hasn’t cleaned up Lester’s mess at the apartment so I‘m wondering about Dan’s personal appearance and hygiene. Is Dan slowly morphing into Lester, but unlike the original Lester who Sarah sees past his fault and now attracted will she be turned off by the new Dan. Im sure an argument will happen between Dan and Sarah and she will end up in Lester’s locked room for the evening. As Dan looks through the peephole when Lester and Sarah begin to get intimate it’s Sarah who blocks the view so Dan only hears their moans and orgasms throughout the night.

 

[Ndbaelor]

I have to imagine Dan would would want to return home to see his family; although, Lester has made it seem like he's longing to be back in Chicago. I think Dan's daughter asking why he didn't respond when he saw her outside his room will start the fireworks - do Dan and Lester switch places or does Sarah fall deeper into Lester's labyrinth?

This puts a thought in my head - Dan wants to surprise Sarah at Middleton while Sarah planning to do the same for him at Chicago. Dan returns to the empty house while Lester and Sarah back in Chicago on that custom made sex chair he ordered.

 

[GGCaesar]

Final TA26 is much better than its alpha which was very “weak” apart from Otis-Sarah interaction.

DS has done a very good job in using the ring without being groundless, and the Lester-Sarah interaction is much better.

Sarah questions about Lester work give a better character description and raise questions about her real thinking. Has what Dan said her put some doubt in her mind she wants to verify? Is the “I love you” real or part of some “plan” of her? Anyway interesting potential evolution of the story.

Maybe we’ll discover that the brain in the family was Sarah(which wouldn’t be a real surprise )

I do think Lester has made a big mistake with Otis. We’ll see…

 

[WillBillNill]

This puts a thought in my head - Dan wants to surprise Sarah at Middleton while Sarah planning to do the same for him at Chicago. Dan returns to the empty house while Lester and Sarah back in Chicago on that custom made sex chair he ordered.

Them on that custom made tantric sex chair while performing to his D&S crowd?

 

[adamblack144]

I don't get the Otis angle. Why does Lester include this guy? Of what benefit is he to him? Sarah should be seducing Lester, not background characters

 

[Chillie_Willie]

I don't get the Otis angle. Why does Lester include this guy? Of what benefit is he to him? Sarah should be seducing Lester, not background characters

For now, I can see Otis as Lester’s eyes and ears for any potential trouble from Richard and/or Mary. It’s especially true now as Mary was humiliated by Lester in front of their peers. She may go to Richard for assistance. Otis also has access to all the offices in case Lester needs to sabotage a device like he suggested to Sarah about Mary.

I don’t see Sarah and Otis stepping out on Lester to form their own sexual alliance. Sarah clearly affirmed her commitment to Lester when she nodded to him after he got caught. Sarah has her eyes and heart for Lester not Otis.

Otis is Lester ‘s version of Middleton “Ned” especially after under estimating Vernon. He learned a valuable lesson to chose someone faithful to a point but can act as a fall guy if necessary.

 

[adamblack144]

Would have been nice if Sarah went up to him and kissed him after she caught him recording. That's a better ending to the chapter

 

[Verisimilinude]

For now, I can see Otis as Lester’s eyes and ears for any potential trouble from Richard and/or Mary. It’s especially true now as Mary was humiliated by Lester in front of their peers. She may go to Richard for assistance. Otis also has access to all the offices in case Lester needs to sabotage a device like he suggested to Sarah about Mary.

I don’t see Sarah and Otis stepping out on Lester to form their own sexual alliance. Sarah clearly affirmed her commitment to Lester when she nodded to him after he got caught. Sarah has her eyes and heart for Lester not Otis.

Otis is Lester ‘s version of Middleton “Ned” especially after under estimating Vernon. He learned a valuable lesson to chose someone faithful to a point but can act as a fall guy if necessary.

It's a weak theory on my part, but the video of Otis could be an insurance policy for Lester. Using it to threaten Otis's job, if he doesn't stay in line as Lester's pawn. The one interesting thing I noted is there was an earlier passage that had Lester meeting with Otis (gloves left in Lester's office) but we didn't get any details of what they talked about. And then in the Sarah/Otis scene - it seemed like Otis wasn't aware that she would be there - suggesting that wasn't what Lester/Otis talked about earlier.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

And then in the Sarah/Otis scene - it seemed like Otis wasn't aware that she would be there - suggesting that wasn't what Lester/Otis talked about earlier.

Maybe Lester did dangle Sarah as a sexual favor (i.e, carrot) if Otis agreed to Lester’s offer. Lester could have instructed Otis to act surprised when Sarah appears so she remains unaware the ”punishment” was planned without her knowledge, especially after she questioned Lester’s expertise in the IT field. Sarah thinks she is in control, but the whole time Lester remains the puppet master. He did state he would change tactics after Sarah’s questioning as Lester is a master manipulator and planner.

 

[GGCaesar]

It's a weak theory on my part, but the video of Otis could be an insurance policy for Lester. Using it to threaten Otis's job, if he doesn't stay in line as Lester's pawn. The one interesting thing I noted is there was an earlier passage that had Lester meeting with Otis (gloves left in Lester's office) but we didn't get any details of what they talked about. And then in the Sarah/Otis scene - it seemed like Otis wasn't aware that she would be there - suggesting that wasn't what Lester/Otis talked about earlier.

Imho the theory of Lester using the video for Otis is a bit stretched. At least for the motivation of recording the scene, where himself states “his financial stranglehold on the couple could truly begin”. He is thinking about the couple.

Moreover, agreed, Otis doesn’t seem aware of the gift he was receiving. I think for the moment Otis has any relevance for Lester, was only in the right place at the right moment. At least for now.

Otis instead(and it can clearly inferred from a lot of passages) has understood the play is going on and wants to exploit it. This is the reason I’m saying this is the first real Lester mistake.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Imho the theory of Lester using the video for Otis is a bit stretched. At least for the motivation of recording the scene, where himself states “his financial stranglehold on the couple could truly begin”. He is thinking about the couple.

Moreover, agreed, Otis doesn’t seem aware of the gift he was receiving. I think for the moment Otis has any relevance for Lester, was only in the right place at the right moment. At least for now.

Otis instead(and it can clearly inferred from a lot of passages) has understood the play is going on and wants to exploit it. This is the reason I’m saying this is the first real Lester mistake.

I agree with you Caesar, the primary purpose is leveraging Sarah/Dan, but it also could be used to leverage Otis and keep him in his place. Sure who wouldn't want to exploit the free use of Sarah, but even without the video, Lester could suggest to Richard that the Janitor service could shed some weight (OTIS) if he wanted to - to cut down on costs. Lester has the upper hand at the moment, but the key factor here is Sarah and her loss of control fetish. We've seen her take back control even when her hormones were raging. Guess we will have to wait and see how it plays out.

 

[GGCaesar]

I agree with you Caesar, the primary purpose is leveraging Sarah/Dan, but it also could be used to leverage Otis and keep him in his place. Sure who wouldn't want to exploit the free use of Sarah, but even without the video, Lester could suggest to Richard that the Janitor service could shed some weight (OTIS) if he wanted to - to cut down on costs. Lester has the upper hand at the moment, but the key factor here is Sarah and her loss of control fetish. We've seen her take back control even when her hormones were raging. Guess we will have to wait and see how it plays out.

Agreed, current Lester position can allow him kicking Otis out in any moment. I have to say a couple of thinks though:

1-with Sarah catching Lester recording the scene, the potential of the video has dropped. Sarah would know who is the one to accuse. This is valid to Otis too, bc it’s not possible Sarah couldn't be involved if a leak happened.

2- Otis MUST go under the radar if he wants to exploit the situation. I don’t think Sarah would report Lester if he made a move. And if he made a move he would fuck Sarah for sure(imho, seeing the scene). On the other end I think Otis wouldn’t make any move until Lester is around, bc he seems clever enough to know what is his real position

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Imho the theory of Lester using the video for Otis is a bit stretched. At least for the motivation of recording the scene, where himself states “his financial stranglehold on the couple could truly begin”. He is thinking about the couple.

Moreover, agreed, Otis doesn’t seem aware of the gift he was receiving. I think for the moment Otis has any relevance for Lester, was only in the right place at the right moment. At least for now.

Otis instead(and it can clearly inferred from a lot of passages) has understood the play is going on and wants to exploit it. This is the reason I’m saying this is the first real Lester mistake.

I tend to think that the Otis set-up was done so, more for Otis's loyalty than anything that gives the janitor some sort of semi-permanent sexual relationship with Sarah. I am getting tired of the back and forth that Don is giving Lester, in that she belongs to him and he does not like to share, but then he keeps on sharing. I get his want and need to control Sarah, but I am still flummoxed at the notion of her being his whore, while he takes on the role of pimp. Either he wants her to love him and not Dan (which she finally said on her own this chapter, not to mention her obvious turn-on at the idea of taking her from Dan and humiliating him, even more-so when the actions to hurt Dan involve her helping in some way) or he wants her to be his prostitute while he is her pimp. The only thing I can possibly guess at is that Sarah asks Lester about the recordings and he tells her about all the recordings of her and it ends up turning her on, even more (maybe due to Lester wanting to record and remember her during all of this and then comparing to Dan, whose only taken video of her might be from or during child-birth. Lester wants to remember her at her sexiest, while Dan wants to remember her as the "wreck" after she had his babies. That is just me guessing though.
Any way, Otis's loyalty might be for any number of reasons, including through blackmail -- is Otis married, for instance; then the video Lester made takes on a whole other value. Just my humble opinion.

 

[Verisimilinude]

I tend to think that the Otis set-up was done so, more for Otis's loyalty than anything that gives the janitor some sort of semi-permanent sexual relationship with Sarah. I am getting tired of the back and forth that Don is giving Lester, in that she belongs to him and he does not like to share, but then he keeps on sharing. I get his want and need to control Sarah, but I am still flummoxed at the notion of her being his whore, while he takes on the role of pimp. Either he wants her to love him and not Dan (which she finally said on her own this chapter, not to mention her obvious turn-on at the idea of taking her from Dan and humiliating him, even more-so when the actions to hurt Dan involve her helping in some way) or he wants her to be his prostitute while he is her pimp. The only thing I can possibly guess at is that Sarah asks Lester about the recordings and he tells her about all the recordings of her and it ends up turning her on, even more (maybe due to Lester wanting to record and remember her during all of this and then comparing to Dan, whose only taken video of her might be from or during child-birth. Lester wants to remember her at her sexiest, while Dan wants to remember her as the "wreck" after she had his babies. That is just me guessing though.
Any way, Otis's loyalty might be for any number of reasons, including through blackmail -- is Otis married, for instance; then the video Lester made takes on a whole other value. Just my humble opinion.

Agreed Psiber, there is so much we don't know that it's hard to make heads or tails of what is really going on - too many branches to that tree of thought. Example: Jessie, in the beginning I thought he was just a narrative tool to give a plausible premise as to why Lester/Sarah finally have sex. I'm thinking he's served his purpose to the story and should go away, but he doesn't he comes back in Ch15 and 24, but now his purpose is to punish Dan. Okay, now he can go away, but once again he comes back in 26, and his new purpose seems to be building towards a stalker/lovesick psychopath which DS can now use to either create more conflict or (hopefully he doesn't repeat himself) do harm to one or all three of the main characters.

Otis is shaping up to be a new Jessie, he could be a narrative tool for reasons we don't understand yet, or it could be as some say, DS throwing the paying fans a bone, or letting them guide the story (which I hope isn't true).

I'm right there with you on your point about Lester's attitude about Sarah - from ch1-25 Lester's character has been developed as one who obsessed over having Sarah for himself. Yes he has "shared" Sarah on a few occasions, but they served the purpose of humiliating Dan or showing Dan that Lester was a better Stag. Ch26 has thrown those previous character traits out the window - with hints and innuendos about pimping Sarah out - which leaves us shaking our heads at the departure from the character that Lester was built from.

I shared this with Chillie privately but I'm leaning towards DS doesn't want to part with his beloved characters, understandable that he's put this much time and energy into a story, that it's hard to let go of them. Which means (should have said which leads me to believe) he's now manufacturing different avenues and side plots to help the story stay alive.