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Watcher X

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No, you're being unfair.

There has been many posts complaining about some kind of English problem since the game was first released on August, last year.

Proof-readers has been mentioned many, many times... have you even read the thread?

Then the Dev have said that corrections are coming when he/she release the game for everyone, what you're seeing here is an early access version that some "supporter" leaked.

Repeating the same thing over and over is just trolling, and annoying for someone who is already working on it.

The intention is just to be a dick about it, a jerk, a beggar with a club.
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9thCrux has said he intends to fix and improve the English in the game, you even quoted him saying that. He wouldn't be doing that unless he agreed the writing could be better. Or are you telling me that he would have re-written his game even if nobody mentioned his writing?

It seems he can take feedback and criticism better than you, and it's not even your game.
 

Phooploid

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This have to be the worst attempt to review I have seen so far...

This will be a surprise to you, but in reality people attempt to review something after having an idea of what they're talking about.

To review a book... you have to read it first.
To review a movie... you have to watch it first.
To review a game... you guess it! You have to play it first.

All that you're doing is blurting out assumptions and pulling thins out of your butt.
A very superficial review, didn't even bother to check for basic information about the game and what the developer already said.

Next time try to get a basic idea of what you try to review or describe, it may help with your credibility.

Cheers.
I'm getting some real weird reaction in this thread...

If I wanted to write a review, I'd have witten a review. You know, in the section meant for that: the review section. Because in case you were unaware, you can write an actual review, with an actual score.

All I did was give my opinion, and the reason why I didn't get very far in the game. Because hey, who knows, maybe the author wants to know things like that. Maybe he'll want to change it? Who knows...

This thread is honestly real toxic. And it's not due to the feedback and criticism on the game and the author, it's due to the people (including the author), trying to defend themselves and the game from every little thing someone criticizes about the game or disagrees on.

Sometimes you just have to accept people don't like something my dude. It's not some personal slight or insult, it's just an opinion.
 
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fotogaik

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Toxic? Jeez, dude, lighten up!
It's just that a lot of people have pointed out language and grammar, but it's only the third release, and the game is already improving in that area. Sure it makes sense to point out grammar and spelling but right now it's not very productive.
It would only make sense if everyone was praising the writing and just a few people were around to point to obvious errors, but as far as it is, the developer is aware of the issue and is working on it. If the next release still has glaring errors and no improvement to the language at all, sure it makes sense to point errors out.
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And I think there were a few negative comments here that expressed dismay at the direction the game is taking (no harem, no NTR, etc.). There aren't many games that avoid these kinks and focus instead on a meaningful relationship. This is clearly stated in the first post and 9thCrux emphasized that right from the beginning. You want harem and/or NTR? Go on, there are hundreds of games to choose from. Not every game needs it, no need to ruin this one.
 

rev2020

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models looks pasted into the enviroments.
you need to lower transucincy weight for the skin
back to the drawing table ;)

or do you render the enviroments first then put the models in?
 

botc76

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Just a few words of advice to the new members running amok in this thread and attacking everybody critical of the game. You are not doing 9thcrux or his game any favour.

If anything you are casting doubts on him, his game and your accounts, about whether this is a concerted actions by his friends or even his own alt accounts.
There have been enough attempts by shady devs to pull shit like this, so there is a degree of wariness toward new members defending a dev or a game so vehemently.

I'm not saying this is happening here, just that you should avoid creating the impression of it.

We all have games we are defensive about, because we think they are god's gift to porn game players, but it makes no sense to aggressively lash out about it, it will only poison the thread and might even hurt the reputation of both game and dev.

You can't expect everyone who tries this game to read all 17-18 pages of comments, so of course criticism will be repeated and whether the English here is better or worse than in other games is completely besides the point.
It is bad enough that people have a problem with it while playing the game.
Being pissed over this and attacking the people who criticize it helps nobody, the least of all the game.
It is great to read that the dev has already taken steps to fix the problem, which means he acknowledges it and we can hope it will be resolved soon, which in turn will lead to people enjoying the game more and to the game and dev getting a better reputation and hopefully getting good reviews based on more than nice renders and what you guys think it will become at one point.

Feel free to react negatively to this as well, doesn't make it less true.
 

botc76

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Some people just seem to feel the need to act like... they are not very smart, to put it diplomatically. You do you, dude.
 

EvilChef

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Nah, there are no shadow accounts of 9thCrux, it would be trivial to tell from the grammar and vocabulary. I also don't think he needs any friendly shills, he's already got us groupies ;-)
Very much true.
 

Snomiser

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Ok here's a Question I've not seen asked, I've played through multiple paths and I've not seem to be able to get to the one where she grabbs her boobs with his hands nor where she is sitting on his lap in the tub.
I found them in the image folder.
And the game has been good ( obviously since I tried so many paths) I've not really had a problem with spelling errors or properly constructed sentences (I'm no English major) I was able to where the dev was leading me. Good job, good luck and I how to see more.
 

alominus

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No one needs your approval to react in anyway they want to your post...

It seems more like trolls are getting on their alt accounts to defend their own negative posts, maybe even you.

Blocking you now, bye.

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botc76
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:unsure: funny that you mention being a troll on an alt account to someone with an account that is almost 4 years old and has thousands of posts whereas yours isn't even two weeks.
 

fotogaik

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Ok here's a Question I've not seen asked, I've played through multiple paths and I've not seem to be able to get to the one where she grabbs her boobs with his hands nor where she is sitting on his lap in the tub.
I found them in the image folder.
And the game has been good ( obviously since I tried so many paths) I've not really had a problem with spelling errors or properly constructed sentences (I'm no English major) I was able to where the dev was leading me. Good job, good luck and I how to see more.
Three conditions: Don't wait until Tiffany is done changing, when meeting Miss Smith the first time, choose "She's my boss" and when meeting Joan, don't say Tiffany is your daughter.
 

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The dev of this game was temp banned from the forum for repeated personal attacks, and in the first few days of this temp ban, a few new accounts mysteriously appear making the same arguments as the dev was... Hmm....

On a completely unrelated note, I'd just hope that the dev realizes that creating alts to get around a temp ban is a great way to get the ban made permanent. It's in the rules and everything.
 
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fotogaik

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Ouch, that was unexpected. And unnecessary on the part of 9thCrux. Is the ban lifted now or is it still in force?
 

Snomiser

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Three conditions: Don't wait until Tiffany is done changing, when meeting Miss Smith the first time, choose "She's my boss" and when meeting Joan, don't say Tiffany is your daughter.
I thought I had covered that, but I'll give it another go. Thank you
 

Snomiser

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Three conditions: Don't wait until Tiffany is done changing, when meeting Miss Smith the first time, choose "She's my boss" and when meeting Joan, don't say Tiffany is your daughter.
Thanks that did the trick. Not sure where I went astray obviously I did.
 
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