RPGM [Translation Request] Banished Empress and the Penal Colony [Heisendou]

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+1

 

[robgor95]

I try to translate this, but i can't promise anything because is my first game translation :/

 

[miloss]

+1

 

[zerg]

+1 omg please

 

[robgor95]

Hi, I don't know if i can post here or not, if not I ask sorry to moderator :/ (if i posted this wrong please tell me where i can post the news about the translation)
I'm trying to translate the game, untill now I only translate the menu and some dialogues, here are 3 photo of the part of game translated, what do you think, i'm doing a goodjob or i messed all?

 

[Overt Ninja]

Hi, I don't know if i can post here or not, if not I ask sorry to moderator :/ (if i posted this wrong please tell me where i can post the news about the translation)
I'm trying to translate the game, untill now I only translate the menu and some dialogues, here are 3 photo of the part of game translated, what do you think, i'm doing a goodjob or i messed all?

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For the menus there seems to be a few errors. "Wombfall" doesn't really make any sense, is it supposed to be "Corruption" or something along those lines? "Sex times" and "No. of time sex" seem to overlap in definition. "Number creampies" is missing an "of". "Number of man cum" sounds like broken english, could be changed to something like "Number of men made cum"
Other than that it seems okay.

 

[robgor95]

yeah i know, but if i add some letter/words then the text goes too far and part is invisible.
Fort Womball the variable in game is "Uterine fall" :/
For he "Sex Times" and "No. of time sex" in game are two variable with this names :/

 

[el pistolero brazuka]

+1

 

[Overt Ninja]

yeah i know, but if i add some letter/words then the text goes too far and part is invisible.
Fort Womball the variable in game is "Uterine fall" :/
For he "Sex Times" and "No. of time sex" in game are two variable with this names :/

Can you post a pic of the original japanese version?

 

[To fap or not to fap]

+1

 

[Deleted member 916016]

+1

 

[AfroBoy69]

+111111

 

[arlekin86]

+1

 

[kulkun890]

+11

 

[gonnakms]

Hi, I don't know if i can post here or not, if not I ask sorry to moderator :/ (if i posted this wrong please tell me where i can post the news about the translation)
I'm trying to translate the game, untill now I only translate the menu and some dialogues, here are 3 photo of the part of game translated, what do you think, i'm doing a goodjob or i messed all?

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dude could u tell me what program are u using and how you are using it, and we cant wait for the translation thanks bro

 

[robgor95]

gonnakms I'm using directly the rpg maker, because other programs don't work, how i wuold like it, for the translations i slown down because this weeks here in italy it's chaos, so i've got less time to translate it, but i think today or tomorrow i resume the translation

 

[Del.Mar]

i think today or tomorrow i resume the translation

What is the progress of translation? How many % did you done?

 

[robgor95]

i think i've done about 10/15% of the translation

 

[Ohanamanda]

i think i've done about 10/15% of the translation

We are all rooting for you. Take your time and don't stress yourself, translating a whole hentai game, regardless of how short it might be, isn't easy.

 

[rgnar62]

+1