While I was installing Drainer002's incest patch, I noticed a bunch of spelling and grammar errors present in both the patch and the main game. So I spent a few days fixing as many as I could find, which was a lot. Also, the patch introduced the characters' familial relationship too abruptly, so I edited and added more dialog to that scene to make it a little more believable. There are a few other extra patches of dialog I added here and there to highlight the suspension of disbelief.
In addition, I enabled the x-ray version of the Amelia and Lacey scene, which is supposed to only be available in the Patreon version of the game, though the x-rayed renders will still be missing from it if you don't have the Patreon version. I also enabled the Ren'Py developer console and added the Transparent Text Box mod, too.
I guess I should have fixed the base game's errors too, but I didn't, I just fixed the incest patch's. If the game's creators specifically ask me to make a version for the base game so they could incorporate my fixes into it, I guess I could do that. But for now, here is the updated incest patch:
EDIT: I posted an updated version of this patch, and also an alternate version without all of Drainer002's added references to incest, several months after I made this one. I'd recommend you scroll down and use one of the patches attached there instead of the old, outdated one I previously attached here. It's towards the bottom of this page, at
https://f95zone.to/threads/trapped-...mastered-v0-5-8-cheezygirl.67285/post-8118825
