I feel like there could have been certain plot developments or relationships that could have been written differently. And I know that this will be a very unpopular opinion, but I could have done without the whole gearing up to Janet being the grand finale in the MC's sexual conquests, which I think is almost imminent. The way in which Naomi and, as the story has progressed, Kaley encourage the MC's pursuit of Janet is something that doesn't really interest me. I love a maternal character who has been written with interesting character traits, perks, idiosyncrasies; someone with passion, a worldview, some level of knowledge or proficiency in anything (relationships, even). Janet is a bit too conventional and dull, in my view.
Besides that, I don't have major issues with the game. It has plenty of content and is updated frequently.