There is only one thing about this game that is not entirely consistent. I hope that will be done a little bit better in the third game.
The male MC is written a little too softly and in good faith. In the whole game there is this cockfight between Madalyn and Sofia. And no matter what they tell the MC, he almost always believes it immediately. And if not, theiy go to his tail and everything is fine. A little more personal opinion, personality and self-confidence would have been important here. The women have it too easy with him. Most of the time, the MC looks more like a teenage boy in late puberty. Of course, at the beginning of the game, where he still has no idea what´s going on, that's also consistent. But in the course of the story there should have been a further development in his character, being more grown up.
Apart from that, the game is top notch