Update from original review. 3/1/2024
There is a ton of content so far.
The humor is solid, and keeps this VN from dropping in ratings.
The MC is wishy-washy with pretty much everyone.
The plot has good points, but then it's squashed after a while.
The writing is ok, but could be better.
The characters are a hodgepodge of crazy people
The humor is dark and crude. It keeps things flowing during the boring points of the story.
The MC is both a simp and not a simp at the same time. At points he's lead around by his cock, and other times he's raging out on everyone. Pick a lane already with him.
The plot started off as hunting for your daughter and ex-wife. Then slips into revenge. Then in the blink of an eye, it's thrust into forgiving the family, but still slightly holding on to a small amount of revenge.
The writing is off. Misuse of words cause a double take when reading. Stood is being used throughout the entire novel in the wrong context. It's one of those overused words. Toss in standing every now and again to spice things up.
I've never come across so many mentally unstable characters like this VN. I'm thinking that at least the majority of them have multiple personalities and you never know which ones are showing up.
The MC is angry, confused, sexually aroused, and then sad and happy all within 3 scenes.
Deb is a constant pot stirrer. Then gets scolded, only to go right back to doing it all over again. Constant wishy-washy mental gymnastics with her.
Milly is passive-aggressive. Then for some reason she turns bi curious, and then jumps into be a dom.
And every one of the women are madly in love with the MC.
At this point I'm just stuck in the story. Not because it's outstanding, but because I've invested so much time with it. It's like you're hoping for another tragic event to happen.
Saying all of that, I do recommend this VN. It does have some interesting aspects, and the humor is petty good. Good luck to Azrayal.
There is a ton of content so far.
The humor is solid, and keeps this VN from dropping in ratings.
The MC is wishy-washy with pretty much everyone.
The plot has good points, but then it's squashed after a while.
The writing is ok, but could be better.
The characters are a hodgepodge of crazy people
The humor is dark and crude. It keeps things flowing during the boring points of the story.
The MC is both a simp and not a simp at the same time. At points he's lead around by his cock, and other times he's raging out on everyone. Pick a lane already with him.
The plot started off as hunting for your daughter and ex-wife. Then slips into revenge. Then in the blink of an eye, it's thrust into forgiving the family, but still slightly holding on to a small amount of revenge.
The writing is off. Misuse of words cause a double take when reading. Stood is being used throughout the entire novel in the wrong context. It's one of those overused words. Toss in standing every now and again to spice things up.
I've never come across so many mentally unstable characters like this VN. I'm thinking that at least the majority of them have multiple personalities and you never know which ones are showing up.
The MC is angry, confused, sexually aroused, and then sad and happy all within 3 scenes.
Deb is a constant pot stirrer. Then gets scolded, only to go right back to doing it all over again. Constant wishy-washy mental gymnastics with her.
Milly is passive-aggressive. Then for some reason she turns bi curious, and then jumps into be a dom.
And every one of the women are madly in love with the MC.
At this point I'm just stuck in the story. Not because it's outstanding, but because I've invested so much time with it. It's like you're hoping for another tragic event to happen.
Saying all of that, I do recommend this VN. It does have some interesting aspects, and the humor is petty good. Good luck to Azrayal.