VN - Ren'Py - Triple Ex [v0.24] [Azrayal]

Man...this is hard to review. Astrid and Kumiko make this a 5 but MC's sister and daughter make it a 1. The story is above average and the writing has very few mistakes which is nice, but damn the forced interactions with the sis and daughter only make the game worse for me.

This would have been a 3 but, the nail in the coffin is the fact that certain scenes, that have no bearing on the flow of the story, still happen no matter your choice. You don't want to slap your daughter's ass? Too bad, even saying no leads the MC to slap her ass because of her sarcastic comment.

c'mon man

One of the most impresive things about this novel is the fact that has so much bepth and so many surprises in the long run, that will surprise the most of us , i belive so.
The depth of the script is another plus worth to mention. And i mean it.
The story starts really soft and lighthearted but in the next few chapters you get yourself so involved in the story...
The renders are great and the face exprecions gives you the ideal atmosphere in the game.
Very well made VN overall , definetly one of the top 10 !!!

The MC is behaving like like 13 year old in a candystore. He acts like a teenager all the time who have never interacted with girls before in his life. When someone angers him they (girls) only need to show a bit of skin and he becomes a blubbering idiot.
The writing per say is good but so totally unrealistic so you cant really care for the characters. No one not even pornstars on set are speaking with so much sexual innuendo all the time its just not how anyone would behave.

I really got irritated by this game after a good start. My feelings were that Debs was annoying as hell with her foul mouth emasculation of the beta MC and her rapey attitude towards anyone he hankered towards. The daughter also felt annoying with her bitchy attitude and downright bullying of her clueless Father. Added to that was the whole "I can't show Astrid any affection because my daughter won't let me" scenario which frankly just came across as ridiculous.

The MC is supposed to be ex British Special Forces - probably Special Boat Service, the equiv to the US Navy Seals. As someone who served alongside British SF, I find the MC laughable. He's more like a clueless, virgin, boy scout! Trust me, they are nothing like this idiotic wimp.

I find the family story is just getting too bogged down and far fetched, Really getting silly plotwise.
keep it simple and move on with the story and relationship stuff. Stop using MCas a whipping boy, is this meant for cucks dev?

The lack of lewd scenes means it is in real danger of being a snoozefest. For some reason the dev just seems to be interested in making the supposed ex SF a punch bag for the women.

Here's a hint dev: it's getting old....and very boring.
This could have been good but has continued to go down the pan.

Only the diehard deb white knights seem to love it. Enuff said.

This game is well done overall with a fascinating plot - not your 'run-of-the-mill' story about an 18 yr old entering university. The characters are well-developed so far and have depth and emotion. The renderings are above avg to excellent with a variety of backgrounds. The writing is hilarious (I found myself LOL on many occasions!) and keeps you on your toes.
Now, if you're not familiar with British/Scottish humor, you may have difficulty relating to some of the dialogue. Also, some may not prefer the MC (he struggles with emotions/communication with women ) or his sister (she is a bit abrasive and crosses the line at times). BUT, the tension created by these and other characters keeps the plot moving and interesting.
You should definitely check this out! Can't wait for the next episode...

Top notch game as always, salty people will hate it, but overall high quality game .
The art is very fine. Really like the sister and the daughter. Hope there is more mc x sis content compare to other content.

Very unique story, very unique plot, very unique characters. Story threw me off at first, but a couple minutes into it and i was hooked. Can't wait for the next update, would suppor the creator if I could !
As far as low ratings go- don't let a built female emasculate you, it's just VN

To be honest I'm surprised at the low ratings this game seems to have. I started on version 0.5 so maybe I just had more of a developed story to get through than others.
Story The story is complex, interwoven and quite intriguing. It is different from the standard 'cest story about little Bobbie waking up one morning perving on his mother and that is a good thing. At the time of my playing it is quite obvious that there are still parts of the background hidden which will hopefully come out at some point but at present what is there gives very good nuance to the story. The characters are interesting and rather unique. While many seem to be quite upset with the MC's sister, I find the relationship between her and the MC oneof the more interesting things in the game.
Graphics I quite liked the renders. There is a good variety of female body types offering a nice alternative to the balloon-titted women usually in these games. They do not appear to be baseline Daz models which is a definite plus.

All in all an interesting story which is well worth watching and playing.

The daughter has a more swole body than my local gym rats, if the boobs were slightly smaller i woulda guessed it was a mans body i was looking at... Gross. And the sister.. Jesus. Very much a visual novel were you have no choice but to act like a petty cuck which is normaly something developers atleast give a choice to, such a shame because the story was actually pretty well written

I'm not sure why some are disliking it so much but i loved it. Good story with some good characters. People hating on the sister with a mild case of tourette's is hilarious at times to me, anyone with a tight family knows you bust each others chops on a consistent basis and she's also actively trying to get him in a 3 way to boot. She may be a bit over the top in public but it's a story not reality, although i have met a couple people like that in the real world so. Plus you've got hot asian chicks with a kinky side, a hot daughter body builder who isn't so oversized it becomes unattractive (not usually my thing but it works here as a part of the story i think), a sexy maid with great tits and a beautiful swedish stewardess neighbor who has the hots for ya.
The only thing i didn't care for was part of the first sex scene with the sister, a bit cringe worthy for my tastes but to each his own.
And choices make a difference, becoming more dominant or not is based on the decisions you make during game play, getting closer or not to other characters is relative to decisions made. Personally i'm looking forward to future updates and a continuation of this story.

I've been watching this for a while. it has all the things I enjoy in a VN, Incest ..Sister and Daughter.. With good enough Backstory to peak my interest and curiosity. The story had my interest. Once reunited with the daughter i expected the sister and daughter relationship to be deepened.

Unfortunately what occurred was distraction upon distraction that took away from the foundation of the Story, The reuniting of Father and Daughter and repairing their relationship.

I am never one to tell an Artist what or how to develop. But i would suggest looking deeply at what message you want to convey to the watcher and reader. Because right now i am confused as Hell and not in a good way..

Will continue to watch as it develops and can only hope for improvement ...the Foundations of a deep Caring Story are here!

This is one of those games that you play and in the beginning you raise an eyebrow on what happens.. but you continue because well why not.. The women are all attractive. Renders are good as well. I didn't come across any issues. Mc is different looking to most of the models but his personality is the same. Very annoying.

I am optimistic and hope it will get better.

Good renders, good story, Mc could be better, but that is just because I normally like Mc's to be an avatar and not a character, otherwise, the game is consistent in and of itself, and the characters are interesting and have strong personalities and feel genuine not just holes for the Mc to fill, I do wish we had more input on how the MC feels about stuff or just not have his inner thoughts, but other than that the game is amazing to me, and also I don't like how impotent the Mc is in some situations(like forgetting his gun when he is in acting as a bodyguard).

11/08/2021
Hi, it's been a while, since I have to play the game from the beginning again I thought I might give an updated opinion, so first: in the early game(I don't know further in but I'll add to it if it changes) all the choices that are supposed to make you an "alpha male" just sound insecure and childish wich most "alpha males" do sound like so I can't decide if it is good or bad, second: I still don't like that option is behind a point system, and I don't mean affection points I mean MC's personality points, in my opinion, choices that have to do with what the Mc would do should be left for the player and not locked behind stuff like personality points, the only exception being a full rpg-like system like in Clit(although I don't like some restrictions there either), third: sorry for the caps lock but: THE CELLPHONE HAS TO GO, besides it being linear so it isn't really usefull it is also a sorce of lots of errors and just not fun, and having to play from the beginning dealing with it again is just too much. That is it for now I'll edit if something else pops up in my mind while finishing this run.
All caught up, as a gag/comedy game this is fun I would give it an 8/10, everything else is from 2/10 to maybe 5/10, the renders are about 8/10 so far, seen worse but also seen better.

I've followed this game from the start and had high hopes for it. But, I was wrong.

Pros:
Renders are for the most part pretty good. The writing isn't bad.

Cons:
The constant flagellation of the sister towards the MC is ridiculous. The MC is nothing more than a door mat to her. He has no masculinity left. "Speak when spoken to." or "Do as you're told." are what you can expect in this. Choices in this game mean nothing. The game is more a kinetic novel than a VN. I could say more, but, I won't.

In conclusion, the dev needs to add: 'femdom, humiliation' to the tags. The game is not for me. I do wish the dev well with it.

Giving this game 1 stars. Mainly because I really like some of the renders.

Pros:Some really good renders

Cons: Constant cucking by sister character. Unlikeable, and hypocritical family members in general. Game is really a Kinetic Novel, because not a single one of your choices matter. Anytime you choose the wrong option it's game over.

MC is completely irrelevant to the plot. If MC doesn't exist literally nothing would change except for 1 character not being born. The dead fathers in 90 percent of incest games have had more plot impact than this MC.

Had high hopes for this initially but its went completely off the rails as of 0.5

One of the few games I have come across where the renders show average or realistic looks as far as the faces and body, apart from the daughter who is hench like Goku. The characters are very unlikeable, especially the sister, daughter, and MC. The story made no sense but that is probably just me.

I am really liking this game so far. To be fair I haven't played the latest (.4) update yet, but what I have played I enjoyed. The renders are good, not the best out there but plenty good. I like the varying body types that are represented in the game as well. The only critique I have is that the point system is a little complex and I think makes the game require a walkthrough.

I really like the game, the renders are very nice and the story too, Idk why they are leaving negative comments, but everyone has their likes xD, I have played this game on android and at the moment I have not seen any bug or glitch, in what i have seen, the game is very good, generally i dont leave comments, but when i see a good game i usually leave my comment.

I am already waiting for the next update

Good luck to the dev

Let's see. Meh renders. Reproducible glitches (accessing the phone frequently blocks progress or fully glitches the game). Starting a visible point system half way through with no way I could find to max out the points of the one LI I want. But that's not the worst.

The worst, sadly, is common. Yet another game (show, movie) where the MC COULD SOLVE EVERYTHING WITH ONE SENTENCE yet, for no conceivable reason, doesn't tell one the truth. Not sure if it's cultural (British or the like), or just a way to lengthen the movie run time, TV sub or Patreon sub.

In this and other games, you lose points by telling the truth, not being a punching bag, or expressing any doubt or negativity. You can tell what the "correct" path is for the dev.

Also, as some other reviewers have stated, the MC really isn't really the MC, it's the Deb character. No actual FemDom but emotionally close enough. Should make a new tag. Passive MC or British-adjacent. Pick either one.

The only reason I give this one 2/5 is that it's an incest game with D/D content. Considering the mass of B/S content and the absolute monsoon of M/S content, this D/D game gets +1 star for doing "rare" IC content. That's what gets it to 2/5.

If D/D isn't your bag, reduce the rating to 1/5. If that.

I really like the game.

+ There is a lot of content for an early version with an interesting plot to hold everything together, even though there isn´t that much revealed yet.
+ Different models for different tastes: curvy, lean, muscular etc. And not the same models you see in most games posted on this forum, which is a big plus in my book.
+For the most part I enjoy the characters and their interactions / conversations

- The MC´s sister is a bit much at times and the MC himself could be less of a moron. This leads to scenes that can feel a bit awkward and leave the player with choices that I personally would have liked to avoid or have them play out differently , but some of these scenes are foreshadowing events that yet have to come into play so those can´t be judged to harshly yet.