VN Ren'Py Tune in to the Show [Ep. 7] [RobertDeadth]

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bosp

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Jan 3, 2018
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Nice story, well-written intelligent dialogues, exceedingly pleasurable to be taken for a ride through this VN.
Looking forward to more.
 
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Jaike

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I quite liked this. There's a shitton of content for a v0.1. The set up with Katherine and Richard was a lot pornier than what I expected, based off your first game, and caught me off guard to be honest but both the narration and the dialogues were pretty good. The level of characterisation also surprised me for such an early build, some of the love interests really got a lot of emotional and intellectual background to them. The renders looked nice, a lot of the assets looked original to me and the background music has been picked well. I think I'll tune in.

Back to the porn logic, at least I can imagine how Katherine got into a scandal... :cautious: I bet it involved a bukkake... and a kindergarten... and a full circle of teachers and concerned parents... no pupils of course.

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"you can also choose not to get sexually involved with any of the main girls you don’t like (meaning you can have a sexual relationship with all 6 of them, or just 1, or any combination)."

But then forced into a sex scene in the first five minutes of the game.

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She's probably not an LI. I think all the LIs are participants, right?
 

MisterNephilim

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Jan 1, 2019
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Writing is quite superb.

Evelyn is a sweetheart, not your run-of-the-mill rich cougar archetype. Loved seeing a sentimental, introspective side of her.

Da-eun is giving off all the "wifey" vibes. She's probably my favorite, maybe 2nd fave.

Can't wait for the story to progress. I have other thoughts, but it's very early on so I'll wait on those. But great, great start.
I can already see my MC with Evelyn giving Diane good family affection, specially with Eve's heartwarming attitude towards her during dinner.
 

Mareeeeta

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Sep 1, 2019
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Virgin tag coming definitely. Animations are more complicated since I'm creating the game on a low-end machine. If I save enough money to buy a computer with a good GPU, I'll try to include animations. So the answer is maybe.

When girls look that great it's needed. I cross my fingers about you getting more money :LOL:
Da-eun is really cute, but her huge boobs don't suit her figure.
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Really strong start otherwise !

I just don't know if the fact that there isn't an other full guy make the story less predictable ? Girls seems kind but for a spicy story maybe it lack of something ?
Maybe the TV show part will help though.

As for my favorite I will go with Da-eun (even with her too big boobs :( ) and then Diana.
Maya is more like my baby girl.
 

oidex

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Jan 9, 2018
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Thank fucking god this has the harem tag. It would be a nightmare if we only had to chose one.
I feel kind of bad for Maya though. She is cute enough to give you cavities, but Evelyn and Da-eun are so far in the lead for me, it's not even funny. :love:
 
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ZTex

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Apr 3, 2019
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My only complaint with .1 is the lack of player agency. I think there was all of 5 prompts, 3 of which were a game.

It seems like there was some prime choices for the MC to have the option to choose what they wanted to do. Ex Go to the dance room with partner or go stargazing. As it stands you're kinda forced into doing activities with characters. You still get the chance to deny the stargazing character later sure, but seems kinda weird that you can just ignore it all together.
 
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Hordragg

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★★★★★ ~ will surely go stargazing again <3

Ep. 1 is a nice introduction to the story and the diverse cast of characters. Would've wished for an even(er) spread of screen time for the ladies as I feel myself already becoming a bit biased, but there's many a day to come. Plenty of time to cook, to dance, catch up on lewd books, gaze at the stars, or into Diana's mesmerizing eyes… And oggle Da-eun's chest, of course. :LOL: Please be into wearing high-leg one-pieces.

Amazing quality – both script and renders. Very well done, RobertDeadth!
 

hatefuldisplay

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May 22, 2020
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Off to a very nice start. I am looking forward to more of this and will definitely check out your other game.

I'm not 100% set on any of the ladies yet, but I think I might be leaning toward Vivian for some reason. Still, I'll be happy as the MC makes his way up and down the line.
 
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Sparky13

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Dec 12, 2018
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Nice renders, interesting concept, 80+ likes in the first 24 hours (from a newer dev, no less), positive feedback that often includes more than 20 words and features comprehensible English... Fine, f95, I'll download it. Twist my arm, why don't ya?
 

UnoriginalUserName

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Sep 3, 2017
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Promising start and it's a nice change to have a non-horse-cocked MC. The models and renders are great too. Laughed when the MC kept his shoes and socks on for that blowjob though.

I have to ask though RobertDeadth; was Richard's name random / a coincidence considering his potential nickname? Because if it was on purpose that was a dick move (see what I did there?). :ROFLMAO:

Good luck!
 

Skylaroo

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May 28, 2017
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Promising start, the only two main criticisms so far for me are:

1. The lack of choices. Hopefully this is more because 0.1 is for introduction, and that the choices in the future are not strictly have sex or not. I'm not expecting full on multiple branches, but it'd be nice to have differences between choices that would lead to short/small scenes.

2. Dialogue can sometime feels a bit dragging. Somewhat understandable because 0.1 is for introduction so there's quite a lot of things that need to be front-loaded so we can quickly know who's who and what's what. But I think the writing could be tightened a bit more.

Definitely looking forward to the next update to see how the show will play out.
 

Tkoyama

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Feb 25, 2020
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I loved it! The quality of the renderings are amazing! The only little itty bitty thing I missed was the animation, but even so, I really loved the game. I'm looking forward to playing the 2nd episode. Gl, dev!
 
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