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desmosome

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X school = elementary
Y school = middle school
Z school = high school

Is that correct?
 

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bro pls keep ntr in the game, ntr makes it sicker and darker. corruption games always feel realistic if there is ntr.
Trying to ruin a good harem/netori game huh?

there are tons of games for your taste if you want to get cucked buddy.

the dev already said it will not be any ntr so go get your fix somewhere else.

And no curruption does not need NTR, You can already currupt girls in this game. ice-cube-slamming-door-arrogantly-lz57o1z03l3rqpd0.gif
 
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clowns234

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Nah. Mc is just another kid speaking like a kid, acting like a kid and thinking like a kid (with a lot of ... in the middle, just little boys insecurities portrayed like that). The horrible man that appears at the start is just an excuse (a good one, btw, just bad implemented) for another ordinary game based on school-teens-milfs-incest relationships. To find a proper, adult developer who knows how an adult person would react in situations like we see in this story would be the needle in the stack.
There are no set rules to dictate how much the old version of MC affects the current version of MC. This is fantasy so the rules become whatever the Dev decides them to be. I see it as old memories being instantly dropped into current MC's brain. The Dev gets to say how the young brain will process that new information.
 
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desmosome

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Question for people who have played through this. Is the MC a horrible rapey ugly bastard looking at this as a 'finally I can take advantage or everyone who I think wronged me', or more of a 'this is a second chance to turn my life around' and he's actually a good person, kind of a story?
I'm still playing through the game, but here is what I'm thinking so far. It's not so black and white with this MC. He is a mix of both of those archetypes you listed.

Basically, he is a middle aged, social reject, pervert loser fucktard. Then he gets the second chance and goes through a lot of introspection, soul searching, and character growth. However, the pervert is definitely still there. As far as I can tell, the balance of those two desires might shift based on your choices (corruption vs seduction and some other flags that are set).

Basically, the game sets up the ambiguous nature of the MC in the shared text lines that show regardless of your route. The girls' corruption vs seduction scenes will give a certain side of the MC more weight.

Whether you like the rapey stuff or are looking for the redemption story, you should give it a shot. The writing is really good. I certainly wasn't expecting this level of depth in a reincarnation porn story.
 

punisher2099

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Trying to ruin a good harem/netori game huh?

there are tons of games for your taste if you want to get cucked buddy.

the dev already said it will not be any ntr so go get your fix somewhere else.

And no curruption does not need NTR, You can already currupt girls in this game. View attachment 2309690
I can't believe that based on this story and this mc people still want ntr.
 

clowns234

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I can't believe that based on this story and this mc people still want ntr.
One person made a fuss about 'keeping' ntr in the game but ntr has never existed so I wouldn't put too much into his comment.
I do agree with you that this game has no need for ntr. I think it is great the way it is, at least so far.
 

Lordsimmons

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Wow, nice game mate. Really good. I love that i can choose my route. I agree with some fellow here in that the little sister looks "too little". Obviously she can´t look like MC´s classmates but maybe she can look "older".

I will be looking for this game. And KUDOS for the story and script.

BTW, do you have any plans on transforming the characters? I mean, i would love to see MC´s Mom and sisters with longer hairs, some make up and/or tatoos.
 

DestroyerX16

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There is a bug instead of Viktoria he called her Catherine and for Catherine, he called Viktoria during the pe period, and when Viktoria say care it is car
 
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desmosome

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Wow, nice game mate. Really good. I love that i can choose my route. I agree with some fellow here in that the little sister looks "too little". Obviously she can´t look like MC´s classmates but maybe she can look "older".
The game side steps age related issues and doesn't dwell on it in a fetishized way, but it's pretty clear what the age of all the characters are.

MC = 13~14
Older sis = 16
Older sis' boyfriend = 18
Younger sis = 1 less than MC
Mom = 33
Age at which mom had her first child = 17

Younger sis model fits her age actually lol. Tbh, the game should have shota and loli tags.

The fact that the MC himself is a kid (at least in body lol) kinda makes it not fucked up... maybe?
 
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This was really well written. A strong praise of a game is if I read through it all rather than my eyes glazing over and I end up holding down ctrl just to see the smut, and thankfully this was the former. I like rough and pervy stuff so mainly grabbed it because it had twisted in the title, and maybe that was part of the naming intention but what piqued my curiosity was how his memories were all jumbled (or twisted, as per the title). I'm hoping it's more than just supressed memories, it all doesn't add up, and given he's already travelled back in time I'm hoping there's something pretty wild and interesting going on.

Sadly part way through the grammar takes a massive nose-dive. Some of these wouldn't be caught using a spell checker "nest" instead of "next" for example, but lots would and so it's not really forgivable and just comes across as lazy.
I'm also not sure what's going on with the names... Is Cathrine a name in some part of the world or was it supposed to be Catherine and was just wrong every time? Stephanie got called Stephany at least once too, both are right I think but it needs to be consistent.

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My main gripe was that I have a hard time looking past the dumb bodies given to a lot of the women... I'm probably beating a dead horse as I guess it's popular as loads of games seem to do it, but it loses all hotness when they look so comical.

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Speaking of the teacher I wonder if her daughter she mentioned is Mya, they look kinda similar.

Lots of decent LIs in this. Teacher is the prettiest, Steph is probably my favourite as I like dirty girls. I'm looking forward to seeing Viki and the big sister get it at some point too, though no idea how he'll pull off the latter.

Another thing that felt a bit off is the slumdog millionaire effect whereby the MC seems to constantly have a bunch of great skills he just so happened to acquire from a random club he joined for a week at some point (knowing the books, massage, etc)... the bit that felt totally off though is how easily he got to the teacher for a dude that's not had any real social interactions for most of his life.

It's a bit of a shame the dev said there'll be no whorification as there's lots of girls ripe to be exploited, but I'll have to hope things get pervy enough anyway.
 
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desmosome

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This was really well written. A strong praise of a game is if I read through it all rather than my eyes glazing over and I end up holding down ctrl just to see the smut, and thankfully this was the former. I like rough and pervy stuff so mainly grabbed it because it had twisted in the title, and maybe that was part of the naming intention but what piqued my curiosity was how his memories were all jumbled (or twisted, as per the title). I'm hoping it's more than just supressed memories, it all doesn't add up, and given he's already travelled back in time I'm hoping there's something pretty wild and interesting going on.

Sadly part way through the grammar takes a massive nose-dive. Some of these wouldn't be caught using a spell checker "nest" instead of "next" for example, but lots would and so it's not really forgivable and just comes across as lazy.
I'm also not sure what's going on with the names... Is Cathrine a name in some part of the world or was it supposed to be Catherine and was just wrong every time? Stephanie got called Stephany at least once too, both are right I think but it needs to be consistent.

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My main gripe was that I have a hard time looking past the dumb bodies given to a lot of the women... I'm probably beating a dead horse as I guess it's popular as loads of games seem to do it, but it loses all hotness when they look so comical.

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Speaking of the teacher I wonder if her daughter she mentioned is Mya, they look kinda similar.

Lots of decent LIs in this. Teacher is the prettiest, Steph is probably my favourite as I like dirty girls. I'm looking forward to seeing Viki and the big sister get it at some point too, though no idea how he'll pull of the latter.

Another thing that felt a bit off is the slumdog millionaire effect whereby the MC seems to constantly have a bunch of great skills he just so happened to acquire from a random club he joined for a week at some point (knowing the books, massage, etc)... the bit that felt totally off though is how easily he got to the teacher for a dude that's not had any real social interactions for most of his life.

It's a bit of a shame the dev said there'll be no whorification as there's lots of girls ripe to be exploited, but I'll have to hope things get pervy enough anyway.
Yea, the first 20 minutes or so had no noticeable grammar issues. After that, we get the occasional spelling mistakes, weird phrasing, odd word choices, etc. It's definitely not bad enough to detract from the story or characterizations, but it can be distracting. Easily fixed by another pass by a proofreader.

Absolutely agree with the mega boobs. Big boobs are great... until it passes a certain threshold. Then it looks just ridiculous. Nothing to be done about this though. I still like the overall aesthetic style.
 

brothermora

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I'm still playing through the game, but here is what I'm thinking so far. It's not so black and white with this MC. He is a mix of both of those archetypes you listed.

Basically, he is a middle aged, social reject, pervert loser fucktard. Then he gets the second chance and goes through a lot of introspection, soul searching, and character growth. However, the pervert is definitely still there. As far as I can tell, the balance of those two desires might shift based on your choices (corruption vs seduction and some other flags that are set).

Basically, the game sets up the ambiguous nature of the MC in the shared text lines that show regardless of your route. The girls' corruption vs seduction scenes will give a certain side of the MC more weight.

Whether you like the rapey stuff or are looking for the redemption story, you should give it a shot. The writing is really good. I certainly wasn't expecting this level of depth in a reincarnation porn story.
Excellent summary. Thank you, and I'll give the game a try
 

JjJ5

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This was really well written. A strong praise of a game is if I read through it all rather than my eyes glazing over and I end up holding down ctrl just to see the smut, and thankfully this was the former. I like rough and pervy stuff so mainly grabbed it because it had twisted in the title, and maybe that was part of the naming intention but what piqued my curiosity was how his memories were all jumbled (or twisted, as per the title). I'm hoping it's more than just supressed memories, it all doesn't add up, and given he's already travelled back in time I'm hoping there's something pretty wild and interesting going on.

Sadly part way through the grammar takes a massive nose-dive. Some of these wouldn't be caught using a spell checker "nest" instead of "next" for example, but lots would and so it's not really forgivable and just comes across as lazy.
I'm also not sure what's going on with the names... Is Cathrine a name in some part of the world or was it supposed to be Catherine and was just wrong every time? Stephanie got called Stephany at least once too, both are right I think but it needs to be consistent.

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My main gripe was that I have a hard time looking past the dumb bodies given to a lot of the women... I'm probably beating a dead horse as I guess it's popular as loads of games seem to do it, but it loses all hotness when they look so comical.

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Speaking of the teacher I wonder if her daughter she mentioned is Mya, they look kinda similar.

Lots of decent LIs in this. Teacher is the prettiest, Steph is probably my favourite as I like dirty girls. I'm looking forward to seeing Viki and the big sister get it at some point too, though no idea how he'll pull off the latter.

Another thing that felt a bit off is the slumdog millionaire effect whereby the MC seems to constantly have a bunch of great skills he just so happened to acquire from a random club he joined for a week at some point (knowing the books, massage, etc)... the bit that felt totally off though is how easily he got to the teacher for a dude that's not had any real social interactions for most of his life.

It's a bit of a shame the dev said there'll be no whorification as there's lots of girls ripe to be exploited, but I'll have to hope things get pervy enough anyway.
yeah i get where you are coming from. i like it because the models are that way. kinda like a cartoon
imo dont change a thing dev
 

Lordsimmons

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The game side steps age related issues and doesn't dwell on it in a fetishized way, but it's pretty clear what the age of all the characters are.

MC = 13~14
Older sis = 16
Older sis' boyfriend = 18
Younger sis = 1 less than MC
Mom = 33
Age at which mom had her first child = 17

Younger sis model fits her age actually lol. Tbh, the game should have shota and loli tags.

The fact that the MC himself is a kid (at least in body lol) kinda makes it not fucked up... maybe?

jajaja, is true. But come on, MC´s classmates bodies looks like of 16 girls or older. And the MC looks is easy of 15. I mean, i am not against the age, that would be a little hipocritical from me xD (I am, in the end, playing this game jaja) but younger sis body is a little turn off, to me at least.
 
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