Man I wish we could choose to not get involved with some girls, Emily is a literal child
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There is literally a setting that gets rid of her and lola's scenes bruh
And IIrc it is turned on by default so you turned it on yourself and then complained about it
It is outright stated in the walkthrough mode that the seduction path for catherine will be slower and the corruption path will be faster.
Subsequently the seduction path for Alyvia is much faster and the corruption path is slower.
Emily gets aged up in the latest Updates, she is taller. Still young, but not as young and small as before (same goes for MC).
That being said, there is indeed a Setting that lets you avoid the content with Emily.
Dogorti
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Jeez some people are really exaggerating, it's obvious they haven't seen games where there are "literally" children and some of them were on this site.
(I mean they used realistic renders this game uses almost cartoonish graphics c'mon).
(I mean they used realistic renders this game uses almost cartoonish graphics c'mon).
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Tyktamsyl
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If you just want a loving relationship why the hell are you even asking between seduction and corruption??
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I don’t JUST want a loving relationship. I like the corruption and domination and I like the loving aspects. I feel like that’s not all too hard to understand. Anyway I’m not even complaining, I’m just asking a question and it got answered.
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I thought it was obvious myself, given how not all devs advance all paths evenly with each update. But some people just can't help themselves from announcing they have issues with reading comprehension.
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So, as I've said in the past, I really like this game, but I have to agree with the guys in the review section that the grammar sometimes takes you out of the story. I pushed through it the first time I played by simply reading in my mind the correct way the sentence I was reading should go, but I recently saw that version 0.9b was released and it said it had "bug and spelling fixes", so I downloaded it and ran it to see if the one audio bug I've been having a hard time ignoring and the typos I remember were fixed. They were not.
So I decided to take a different approach, I took my saves out of the renpy folder and started a brand new game, but this time I did so with the script open by my side, so that any time I saw a typo I could fix it and have my own little proofread version, or at least proofread enoguh for me since I am not a native english speaker either nor am I a master of the language. I've been going through both routes at the same time jumping from two different saves, one full seduction and one full corruption so I see most text in game. I have played for almost 4 hours and I still haven't finished day 1.... and there are 8 of them.... Now I see why proofreading took last place in your priority list baibai, what a fucking headache, and that's coming from someone who is not an expert in english and is only fixing the typos he sees. And only fixing the bare minimum, changing dialog as little as possible to not mess with the narration nor the way the characters present themselves. Although I have to say, I am just at the part where MC is explaining to emily what a magic wand is and I have already changed 17 things in the script, of which at least 15 are true typos that needed fixing. and that's considering that earlier chapters have better grammar, so yeah, this game really needs a good proofreader (Someone better than me at least because I'm sure I must have missed some typos that I didn't notice).
Considering that there are still typos on day 1 even after some years of development, I don't expect the game to have that fixed in the next couple of updates, so I'm keeping my own little changelog with most of the changes I made in case something happens in the next update that forces me to change it all again. At least it's a good exercise for learning English.
For any charitable soul who is a native english speaker or is very good at english, I would like to ask for guidance in two cases where I am unsure if changes are required.
This will all prove useless when baibai releases a proper proofread version but meanwhile it will be my own little english exercise.
So I decided to take a different approach, I took my saves out of the renpy folder and started a brand new game, but this time I did so with the script open by my side, so that any time I saw a typo I could fix it and have my own little proofread version, or at least proofread enoguh for me since I am not a native english speaker either nor am I a master of the language. I've been going through both routes at the same time jumping from two different saves, one full seduction and one full corruption so I see most text in game. I have played for almost 4 hours and I still haven't finished day 1.... and there are 8 of them.... Now I see why proofreading took last place in your priority list baibai, what a fucking headache, and that's coming from someone who is not an expert in english and is only fixing the typos he sees. And only fixing the bare minimum, changing dialog as little as possible to not mess with the narration nor the way the characters present themselves. Although I have to say, I am just at the part where MC is explaining to emily what a magic wand is and I have already changed 17 things in the script, of which at least 15 are true typos that needed fixing. and that's considering that earlier chapters have better grammar, so yeah, this game really needs a good proofreader (Someone better than me at least because I'm sure I must have missed some typos that I didn't notice).
Considering that there are still typos on day 1 even after some years of development, I don't expect the game to have that fixed in the next couple of updates, so I'm keeping my own little changelog with most of the changes I made in case something happens in the next update that forces me to change it all again. At least it's a good exercise for learning English.
For any charitable soul who is a native english speaker or is very good at english, I would like to ask for guidance in two cases where I am unsure if changes are required.
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This will all prove useless when baibai releases a proper proofread version but meanwhile it will be my own little english exercise.
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You are correct on both counts. Your instincts in the first example are dead on: The wording is technically fine, but it is nonstandard and a little odd.
Though to be honest, I like Baibai's writing partially for the little oddities like this...so I personally hesitate to say that one needs to be changed, but that's just my opinion.
The second example, yes, "opportunity" is the correct word, and "option" is not. Sometimes Baibai's word choice is a close enough synonym that I still like it even if it's odd, and "option" ALMOST works...but I think here it's simply too far away from what was intended.
There's a peculiar tradeoff between accuracy and charm when it comes to these types of corrections. I believe the writing would be elevated with further proofreading, but I also think if I were to go over it, my "final draft" would preserve a lot of the strange and poetic wording because I just enjoy it.
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There is a bug in the standard version (tried 3 different downloads, all share it), 2 images are missing from the folder "phone" inside the folder "images". One of them, gsff_phone_icon.png, cause a sequence of errors in a scene during Day 6.
It can be fixed by downloading the relative pics from the HD version and copying them in the standard version, under "/game/images/phone/".
I'll share the 2 missing images for who doesn't want to download 15gb just for a fast fix
It can be fixed by downloading the relative pics from the HD version and copying them in the standard version, under "/game/images/phone/".
I'll share the 2 missing images for who doesn't want to download 15gb just for a fast fix
Game is literally unplayable without this guy:There is a bug in the standard version (tried 3 different downloads, all share it), 2 images are missing from the folder "phone" inside the folder "images". One of them, gsff_phone_icon.png, cause a sequence of errors in a scene during Day 6.
It can be fixed by downloading the relative pics from the HD version and copying them in the standard version, under "/game/images/phone/".
I'll share the 2 missing images for who doesn't want to download 15gb just for a fast fix
Justonemore20
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¿How hard does a dick have to be in order to stretch your pants like that, instead of the fabric pushing it along one of your legs ? At that point, it would be considered a blunt weapon.
I love the fact that a lot of things in this game are pretty well grounded, but every time MC's dick gets hard the laws of physics go on vacation. The game even jokes about this when Lola asks the MC if he faints every time his penis gets hard, since there shouldn't be much blood left to reach his brain. When Baibai made the MC taller, he unintentionally made it make a little more sense since he now has a little more blood in him.
If I ever have enough money and figure out a way to support Baibai that isn't blocked where I live, I'm gonna request a render of the MC beating the shit out of Aden with his dick. But leave the pants on, I don't want it to go the yaoi way.
? At that point, it would be considered a blunt weapon.
I love the fact that a lot of things in this game are pretty well grounded, but every time MC's dick gets hard the laws of physics go on vacation
. The game even jokes about this when Lola asks the MC if he faints every time his penis gets hard, since there shouldn't be much blood left to reach his brain. When Baibai made the MC taller, he unintentionally made it make a little more sense since he now has a little more blood in him.If I ever have enough money and figure out a way to support Baibai that isn't blocked where I live, I'm gonna request a render of the MC beating the shit out of Aden with his dick. But leave the pants on, I don't want it to go the yaoi way.
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I know, right. The writing actually has a lot of touching and tender moments with MC trying to help (and corrupt, to be fair) the women around him and prevent them from having the various tragedies that happen to them in the original timeline, but then you've got that comical dick popping up
