shitass1001

Well-Known Member
Jun 8, 2021
1,046
3,793
We're full of non-English speakers here at the moment and it's going very well. You've got to stop thinking you're the center of the world.
this is such a weird response to what he said, yes F95 is full of non English speakers, but what does that have to with the proofreading in an English game? I find his comment disagreeable because despite the grammar errors the game is still very well written, but I have no idea how your comment, especially the "center of the the world" remark makes any sense.
 

RG80100

Active Member
Feb 23, 2018
910
2,488
Even as ESL the typos are really distracting. Especially after v0.5 or something, which hasn't been proofread yet. And yeah saying non-native english speakers are ok with it, is saying you have low standard.
no, it's just being understanding with a foreign dev who'll end up polishing it (as he's already done in the past, as you say). Stop getting offended over nothing. I'd much prefer him to concentrate on his story, his renderings and his animations. Anyway, I'll stop here.
 

dolfe67

Forum Fanatic
Apr 25, 2020
5,432
15,185
yes, there are typos, but I think it is alright, the game isn't finished yet, those things can be fixed in the future
Of course but lots of typos got reported and are still in the game, the dev doesn't seem to bother to fix them. Grammar is mostly good though, just lots of typos.

Despite that, the game is very good and enjoyable.
 

BaiBai_

Member
Game Developer
Aug 31, 2022
126
1,741
Of course but lots of typos got reported and are still in the game, the dev doesn't seem to bother to fix them. Grammar is mostly good though, just lots of typos.

Despite that, the game is very good and enjoyable.
I have integrated a lot of the reported typos, although admittedly I also ignored quite a few of them in the past when other people where in the process of proofreading the game to avoid doing work for nothing (I only recently learned to use script-diff which makes that into less of a problem).

I got some proofread scripts in the backlog which I will integrate into the game for v0.10. For everything else I'll try to use one of those AI proofreading tools and try to get the first episode into as good as a shape as it is in my ability. For the time being things will remain as they are though, its not like its not like the spelling hasn't been a flaw of the game quite some time now after all.
 

RG80100

Active Member
Feb 23, 2018
910
2,488
Weekly development update – Happy Easter
08de4671-88ef-44c9-9de2-5935f86366e6-740x0.png
Alright, this week wasn't exactly optimal or rather, this whole month kind of felt like it went by like nothing. I came back a little bit later than planed this week and also didn't have quite as much time this weekend as I would have liked to. Still, I did get the second lewd scene of the update as well as a bigger dialog scene done. Especially the dialog scene caused me quite a bit of trouble as it is somewhat of a important setup for the further development of two major characters. Normally I like to go about these things a bit more flexible, having a goal in mind but just writing the characters as it feel right and then see where it leads me but this one is a bit different as I need to archive a certain point in a pretty limited in-game time frame which is why I ended up tweaking the script quite a bit while in the process of rendering.

Anyway, just a bit of rambling on my part. As I said this month wasn't the greatest in terms of development but it wasn't horrible either. While I doubt that I'll be able to finish all the school scenes until next Sunday I should at least be able to approach the end of it, although there still remains some lewdness to be rendered. This definitely will be the most lewd school day so far but then again the lewdness is kind of bound to increase in density as the game goes on.

In either case, here is a quick render I made for today. I do wish you all a happy Easter or just a relaxing Sunday, whichever you prefer.
 

mentosa

Active Member
Dec 5, 2021
631
1,800
Weekly development update – Happy Easter
View attachment 4767945
Alright, this week wasn't exactly optimal or rather, this whole month kind of felt like it went by like nothing. I came back a little bit later than planed this week and also didn't have quite as much time this weekend as I would have liked to. Still, I did get the second lewd scene of the update as well as a bigger dialog scene done. Especially the dialog scene caused me quite a bit of trouble as it is somewhat of a important setup for the further development of two major characters. Normally I like to go about these things a bit more flexible, having a goal in mind but just writing the characters as it feel right and then see where it leads me but this one is a bit different as I need to archive a certain point in a pretty limited in-game time frame which is why I ended up tweaking the script quite a bit while in the process of rendering.

Anyway, just a bit of rambling on my part. As I said this month wasn't the greatest in terms of development but it wasn't horrible either. While I doubt that I'll be able to finish all the school scenes until next Sunday I should at least be able to approach the end of it, although there still remains some lewdness to be rendered. This definitely will be the most lewd school day so far but then again the lewdness is kind of bound to increase in density as the game goes on.

In either case, here is a quick render I made for today. I do wish you all a happy Easter or just a relaxing Sunday, whichever you prefer.
"This definitely will be the most lewd school day so far but then again the lewdness is kind of bound to increase in density as the game goes on." This gets me pumped for the next update. Hope that lewdness involves missis Clements. God speed and best of luck, Baibai!
 

wiseold6996

Well-Known Member
Sep 22, 2020
1,878
2,594
Weekly development update – Happy Easter
View attachment 4767945
Alright, this week wasn't exactly optimal or rather, this whole month kind of felt like it went by like nothing. I came back a little bit later than planed this week and also didn't have quite as much time this weekend as I would have liked to. Still, I did get the second lewd scene of the update as well as a bigger dialog scene done. Especially the dialog scene caused me quite a bit of trouble as it is somewhat of a important setup for the further development of two major characters. Normally I like to go about these things a bit more flexible, having a goal in mind but just writing the characters as it feel right and then see where it leads me but this one is a bit different as I need to archive a certain point in a pretty limited in-game time frame which is why I ended up tweaking the script quite a bit while in the process of rendering.

Anyway, just a bit of rambling on my part. As I said this month wasn't the greatest in terms of development but it wasn't horrible either. While I doubt that I'll be able to finish all the school scenes until next Sunday I should at least be able to approach the end of it, although there still remains some lewdness to be rendered. This definitely will be the most lewd school day so far but then again the lewdness is kind of bound to increase in density as the game goes on.

In either case, here is a quick render I made for today. I do wish you all a happy Easter or just a relaxing Sunday, whichever you prefer.
Do you have the Greek mythology renders ?
 
  • Thinking Face
Reactions: DicksInSpace

RG80100

Active Member
Feb 23, 2018
910
2,488
"This definitely will be the most lewd school day so far but then again the lewdness is kind of bound to increase in density as the game goes on." This gets me pumped for the next update. Hope that lewdness involves missis Clements. God speed and best of luck, Baibai!
It's quite possible that Cathrine's cherry will be popped on the corruption route.
 
4.60 star(s) 180 Votes