Ren'Py Completed Twists of My Life [v1.1.2] [Novel]

[User_10739]

I am not complaining, things could have been worse. I just want to say that by the moment when the game will become popular, in which I have no doubt, I'll be close to finishing the plot lines(that's if I get +100$ for each update). We'll see what kind of story I'll make up for a next project. Maybe things will differently though, who knows? Anyway, I'll take your words into account.

The expanding of the game's world will result in smearing the same number of events over the increased number of NPCs, and in this case I have two choices either postpone the game's update or reduce the amount of events thus making the game more boring. Given the fact that patrons come only when the new update is released(it takes about a month to make an update) I just can't afford to postpone the release. The second option is even worse.

As long as there are 1 or 2 h scenes per update you're golden! There has to be one for Anne as your "live in" lover and another for whoever, it can change each update. We all know that throwing it into Anne's frenemey will have consequences as it is apparent that she isn't as cool as she thinks she is (developing feelings) and would wig out.

The last update was awesome and you will continue to receive both my verbal and financial support, I hope others join me.

 

[sergop]

I don't know .....The MC kind of already has a friend with benefits....

Honestly, I wouldn't complicate the story. It's great as it is so far.

I was talking about a male friend.

I am not complaining, things could have been worse. I just want to say that by the moment when the game will become popular, in which I have no doubt, I'll be close to finishing the plot lines(that's if I get +100$ for each update). We'll see what kind of story I'll make up for a next project. Maybe things will differently though, who knows? Anyway, I'll take your words into account.

The expanding of the game's world will result in smearing the same number of events over the increased number of NPCs, and in this case I have two choices either postpone the game's update or reduce the amount of events thus making the game more boring. Given the fact that patrons come only when the new update is released(it takes about a month to make an update) I just can't afford to postpone the release. The second option is even worse.

Well i hope you get more than just a 100$ per update because you really deserve it.

 

[sergop]

As long as there are 1 or 2 h scenes per update you're golden!

Can i ask you what is h scene? I saw it in all other topics but idk what it is. I think that its a sex scenes correct me if i'm wrong.

 

[novel]

I was talking about a male friend.
Well i hope you get more than just a 100$ per update because you really deserve it.

Everything rests on not even the money, but the fact that I can't find people. Perhaps if the project is successful, the personnel question is solved. Thank you (Google translation)

 

[Bagger288]

The translation will be fixed in version 0.3. We don't speak English.

The translation was much better in 0.3, thank you. I didn't replay from the beginning, but the new content was consistently good and the translation did not distract.

 

[novel]

The translation was much better in 0.3, thank you. I didn't replay from the beginning, but the new content was consistently good and the translation did not distract.

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helped us to adapt. Besides, I added something from himself. So that it is the same what the author of the game.


(Google translation)

 

[raulz0r]

Gotta say I was pleasantly surprised by this VN, the quality of the images and story is not bad at all

 

[User_10739]

Can i ask you what is h scene? I saw it in all other topics but idk what it is. I think that its a sex scenes correct me if i'm wrong.

You are correct.

 

[Andarilho]

Best teacher! :heartcoveredeyes:
(Fan art)

 

[novel]

Best teacher! :heartcoveredeyes:
(Fan art)

It is very well made. I have a not so realistic. Wow! (Google translation)

 

[Andarilho]

It is very well made. I have a not so realistic. Wow! (Google translation)

Thank you!
It's much more faster and simple with just one figure.
You are rendering and posing whole scenes, with more than one character to deal with, and you are doing great! :extremelyhappy:

Alanna's hair is a pain in the ass to pose, though.

 

[novel]

Thank you!
It's much more faster and simple with just one figure.
You are rendering and posing whole scenes, with more than one character to deal with, and you are doing great! :extremelyhappy:

Alanna's hair is a pain in the ass to pose, though.

Hair is a big problem))))) I constantly am suffering. But they really are)
the Skin came out perfectly.

 

[sergop]

Idk a lot about this stuff but i just got an idea. Can u make a ready pictures for the background and just add the models to them instead of making the whole scene. Because from what i understand u make the whole scene. Correct me if i'm am wrong somewhere but this way u can cut production time if u just add the models in already finished background.

 

[novel]

Idk a lot about this stuff but i just got an idea. Can u make a ready pictures for the background and just add the models to them instead of making the whole scene. Because from what i understand u make the whole scene. Correct me if i'm am wrong somewhere but this way u can cut production time if u just add the models in already finished background.

Sometimes I do that. But, it is very evident the role. (Google translation)

 

[PHSummoner]

I like this game, there's an intriguing and gripping plot with a lot of twists that keep you playing, wondering what it's gonna be next. Keep up the good work, author.

 

[novel]

Thank you. It's possible that we'll have a new co-author pretty soon and he's really good at writing. Not so long ago he wrote a scathing review of one of my "projects" and I responded in my characteristic rude manner, thus we had an argument but soon I realized that he wasn't just another hater, in fact, he was the one who understood how the script should be written, so I lowered sights and apologized. As a result, with help of his review I could write the script for the 0.2 version (the 0.1 version was very different from 0.2) . I decided to lower sights once more and contacted him with an offer of cooperation, even though it is hard, from the moral point of view, to invite someone who's doing your job way better than you. So to say, you automatically become the number two. Though, it's not known for sure whether he will agree or not to join our team, but he had already agreed to look through the script and this gives me a hope to get another scathing review that will help me to see what I may be doing wrong. If he agrees by any chance, I believe that it will kick up a notch our game.

 

[Mykee83]

Well, I decided to give this VN/Game another go to see if it had improved from my last attempt... And I do have to say Bravo to whom ever did the re-translation/re-interpretation, as the text in this game went from unbearably hard to read broken English, to being practically perfect English... Very good job on that...

So now that I was able to do another attempt at a play through, I actually enjoyed it... There were a few quirks now and then, but overall it was fun to read/play... I can see a lot of potential in it now... No major over the top plot twists, which I loved... It felt a little like a dating sim as you can choose to go down certain women's story paths rather then over doing it with all or too many women at once... With each woman having their different personalities and needs... I'm a sucker for a good love/romance story, and I hope it keeps up with that feeling, without going overboard with a bunch of melodrama...

I went ahead and updated my review, and I look forward to future content...

It's good to hear you liked the changes, it's kinda hard editing VNs because you're balancing between keeping the original feel of it and making it readable, but Novel's great and let's me get away with putting my own jokes in every now and then.

 

[Barioz]

So after playing the latest update I can say the art and renders are still beautiful. I like the diversity of the girls. Each of them has a unique feeling and personality. Also the translation got much better and although I sometimes still have the feeling some comments are a bit lost in translation it surely improved a lot. I guess it's just very hard to make special sayings or expressions work in English that are common in Russian.

I do feel that a walkthrough will be really necessary though. In this update decisions already impacted a lot of things. But often you had no clue what it will impact, e.g. to get the scene with Helga at the end you had to choose the '69 option' with Alenna, then refuse Anne after the dinner with Thea, lie to Helga and ask her for a date. Unless you do it exactly this way you can't get that scene (or maybe a decision even before the sex with Alenna can have influence on it, dunno). Because when you choose to treat Alenna the rough way there is no choice of refusing Anne after the dinner and thus you can't meet Helga for the date later on. You even get a completely different choice when confronting Helga in the hallway. There is no real way to see this coming by the choices you make with other characters.

And this will become even more complicated in the future since 2 new girls were introduced in this update. Just the amount of decisions and what they influence will leave you without much of an overview for the situation.

However, I enjoyed the game a lot and I also welcome the absence of incest. Feels refreshing.

 

[novel]

By the way, let me know if there are good specialists of 3D graphics here who want to help. Don't expect any money because I simply don't have them. Moreover, it's gonna take half of the year to just cover the costs. I can use any help, drop the links to any good guides you may know, if you know how to use graphics programms and have experience in creating arts, or maybe you know how to work with clothes, hair, textures, do not hesitate to contact me. I think you've noticed that Anne has some texture problems with hair, they look unnatural at the bottom and etc. If you can help with that, drop a comment below. Remember that all this is purely on a voluntary basis.

 

[Barioz]

By the way, let me know if there are good specialists of 3D graphics here who want to help. Don't expect any money because I simply don't have them. Moreover, it's gonna take half of the year to just cover the costs. I can use any help, drop the links to any good guides you may know, if you know how to use graphics programms and have experience in creating arts, or maybe you know how to work with clothes, hair, textures, do not hesitate to contact me. I think you've noticed that Anne has some texture problems with hair, they look unnatural at the bottom and etc. If you can help with that, drop a comment below. Remember that all this is purely on a voluntary basis.

On the contrary, Anne's hair looks great, really stunning. It's something I haven't seen in another game before and it suits her really well. I mean:

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Who can resist a woman like her? Absolutely beautiful!