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- Mar 22, 2020
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i get that your unhappy about patreon content being leaked but do remember that means one of your patreons shared it with f95zone. Also I know a lot of dev treat this as just an adult game discussion forum but it was from it beginning a pirate site for adult games. Expecting things not to get leaked here i'm sorry is naive. Best bet is if you choose to either continue this project or make another in the future is make patreon content thing like exclusive art and votes on models and what future content might be because patreon download version will be leaked.
Edit: All i can say in the end is i hope you change your mind on ending development of this game it a nice start to something i personally think could be a really good game
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- Sep 6, 2019
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I have mentioned THIS before,...
I LOVE a Futa just as much as the next person, but They are NOT the Answer to Everything!
Being a "spacey" vibe game You Could have a "She-male" alien without the Transgender label.
- on Earth, shemales & trans-fem's are still labelled as 'freaks' (Not My View or opinion).
but as an Alien, who IS to say That WE are not the 'Freaks' to them?
(maybe a 'sexual' chameleon who has the ability to Change their sexual anatomy to their partners desire)
- said alien, has mental ability to 'read minds'/repressed thoughts of what their partner truly WANTS!
Side Note: I also agree the MC Is Too young looking; immature. (he looks 12-14).
(Maybe, At Least, have a "medical incident'; upon 'waking him up' he ages 10 yrs.) ???
(say,..IDK. boy was abducted when he was 8-10 yrs. old; after getting woke up he is Now 18-20)
at least then, the MC would fit the C*ck the DEV gave him.
Never understood why developers get so upset over leaked content.
As a beginning developer you should try to get your name out there and have as many people as possible play your game.
Not like you can run an ad on tv or in a newspaper and it's not like porn games come up in casual conversations you have with people. Main way people find out about games is forums like this.
Even if people know they can play your game for free on here you're still gonna have plenty of people who are gonna want to support it financially.
As a beginning developer you should try to get your name out there and have as many people as possible play your game.
Not like you can run an ad on tv or in a newspaper and it's not like porn games come up in casual conversations you have with people. Main way people find out about games is forums like this.
Even if people know they can play your game for free on here you're still gonna have plenty of people who are gonna want to support it financially.
Does the game have much or any vaginal sex?No tags regarding it
No vaginal sex, Only scene is sucking breasts and the mc nutting on her stomac in the process that's it. No hj, BJ, titfuck, or anything
It's a promising, intresting and over all, a nice game. Keep up the good work!!
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- Jul 20, 2017
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You asked for honest feedback. Normally, I wouldn't, most people do not actually want an honest critique of their work.
I haven't played and do not plan on it for the following reason.
SHOTA: That is a boy, not a man. He is half the size of the females in this game and looks like an 11 or 12-year-old. Not a turn-on for an adult. There are enough games in F95 featuring prepubescent teenage boys with 18-inch cocks pretending to be adults. Unless of course, your intention is to create a world where women are amazons and men look like boys.
In most cases, an adult male will be taller than most females he encounters. Men stop growing taller around 16-17 years of age but will fill out as they age and if he works out. He may be skinnier, but at least a little taller. Naturally, there are some exceptions.
When I look at this, I see a 4 foot 10-inch child and 6 foot 2 or 3-inch adult woman. At the very least, equalize their heights a little and age to boy into a man. Even if the women are a little taller, at least it will look like she is interested in men, not boys.
Just my thoughts. I love the renders of the females.
I haven't played and do not plan on it for the following reason.
SHOTA: That is a boy, not a man. He is half the size of the females in this game and looks like an 11 or 12-year-old. Not a turn-on for an adult. There are enough games in F95 featuring prepubescent teenage boys with 18-inch cocks pretending to be adults. Unless of course, your intention is to create a world where women are amazons and men look like boys.
In most cases, an adult male will be taller than most females he encounters. Men stop growing taller around 16-17 years of age but will fill out as they age and if he works out. He may be skinnier, but at least a little taller. Naturally, there are some exceptions.
When I look at this, I see a 4 foot 10-inch child and 6 foot 2 or 3-inch adult woman. At the very least, equalize their heights a little and age to boy into a man. Even if the women are a little taller, at least it will look like she is interested in men, not boys.
Just my thoughts. I love the renders of the females.
- Jul 20, 2017
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Jesus! I wish you enter in e v e r y shota game to write your absolute useful opinion, do you? I really wish this, really, or I don't sleep well.
- Apr 21, 2018
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Hi! after reading a few bits of this thread it seems that you're still fairly unsure what this game is supposed to be, so I'd recommend to sit down and think about this first. You can make polls about details later. Feedback you get from a single person (somewhat ironic, I know) won't ever represent what the majority of people actually wants to see.
You sure know what other sucessful devs usually include in terms of fetishes, these are usually a safe bet. Going for more specific stuff will limit your potential amount of players and with that supporters (though sometimes a more specific game also works).
I think the story you've started was fairly decent in terms of giving a background for the situation the player is in. Remember that your patreons will expect the game to continue in a similar game it started, so milfs, shota, big dick, harem somewhat implied etc. If you start to include unecpected stuff, people will lose interest. A common example would be a sudden turn of the story to NTR which will leave many supporters unsatisfied. That's why your 8-titted woman was bad recieved because nobody would expect the game to go in this direction.
Hi! after reading a few bits of this thread it seems that you're still fairly unsure what this game is supposed to be, so I'd recommend to sit down and think about this first. You can make polls about details later. Feedback you get from a single person (somewhat ironic, I know) won't ever represent what the majority of people actually wants to see.
You sure know what other sucessful devs usually include in terms of fetishes, these are usually a safe bet. Going for more specific stuff will limit your potential amount of players and with that supporters (though sometimes a more specific game also works).
I think the story you've started was fairly decent in terms of giving a background for the situation the player is in. Remember that your patreons will expect the game to continue in a similar game it started, so milfs, shota, big dick, harem somewhat implied etc. If you start to include unecpected stuff, people will lose interest. A common example would be a sudden turn of the story to NTR which will leave many supporters unsatisfied. That's why your 8-titted woman was bad recieved because nobody would expect the game to go in this direction.
Nice game i like a lot this plot the unique bad thing is get blueballed with this small updates
As far as feedback is concerned:
+The renders are fine
+The premise/story potential is great
-The writing is stilted and doesn't flow well. Unsure if this is due to English not being the devs native language/poor translation, or just a plain writing style.
-You should be using Subscribestar instead of Patreon. Patreon will, sooner or later, censor/de-list your game due to the content. The reasoning doesn't matter for them - you used the M word! Don't act all surprised/abandon your project when this happens in the future.
-I realize it's tagged as a kinetic novel, and that's fine, but SOME choices would be nice, even if they don't end up having any influences in the end.
Overall, a promising start, but so many games on here are. In the end, very few developers have the wherewithal to see their projects through to a proper ending. That said, fingers crossed!
+The renders are fine
+The premise/story potential is great
-The writing is stilted and doesn't flow well. Unsure if this is due to English not being the devs native language/poor translation, or just a plain writing style.
-You should be using Subscribestar instead of Patreon. Patreon will, sooner or later, censor/de-list your game due to the content. The reasoning doesn't matter for them - you used the M word! Don't act all surprised/abandon your project when this happens in the future.
-I realize it's tagged as a kinetic novel, and that's fine, but SOME choices would be nice, even if they don't end up having any influences in the end.
Overall, a promising start, but so many games on here are. In the end, very few developers have the wherewithal to see their projects through to a proper ending. That said, fingers crossed!
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