Crippy

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Just finished playing this for the first time. Aside from the grammatical errors, which are easy to overcome, the animation needs some serious work. About 20% of the animations look natural and free flowing. The other 80% are jerky and loopy. The also do not blend very well with the background...but look like an overlay or super imposed.

Will keep an eye on it for future releases.
 

RoadWulf

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Nov 18, 2018
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*writes the worlds "Coherent Story" on a rock*
*throws it out a nearby window*

What the hell is the premise of this game anymore? I have no clue. The wife hasn't been seen in forever, does he even remember he's married anymore? Where the hell is the sister for that matter? And now we've skipped past Debra and her family and moved right onto College for some reason? Doesn't this guy have a job? How the hell is he going to College?

DO YOU EVEN REMEMBER YOUR OWN STORY FOR FUCK'S SAKE?!
 

juan palote

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Dec 5, 2017
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*writes the worlds "Coherent Story" on a rock*
*throws it out a nearby window*

What the hell is the premise of this game anymore? I have no clue. The wife hasn't been seen in forever, does he even remember he's married anymore? Where the hell is the sister for that matter? And now we've skipped past Debra and her family and moved right onto College for some reason? Doesn't this guy have a job? How the hell is he going to College?

DO YOU EVEN REMEMBER YOUR OWN STORY FOR FUCK'S SAKE?!
Have to admit the sudden inclusion into college got me confused too
 

Sidereel

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Mar 17, 2018
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Have to admit the sudden inclusion into college got me confused too
Yeah, I'm lost. Also, there is a line at the beginning of the game where the MC mentions that his wife is a homemaker and takes care of the kids... So the MC is like a 30 something year old pretending to be a college student because....
 

juan palote

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Dec 5, 2017
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Yeah, I'm lost. Also, there is a line at the beginning of the game where the MC mentions that his wife is a homemaker and takes care of the kids... So the MC is like a 30 something year old pretending to be a college student because....
Dont remember that line, and which kids? He doesnt seem to have any kids
 

Sidereel

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Mar 17, 2018
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Dont remember that line, and which kids? He doesnt seem to have any kids
It's at the beginning when he is thinking about his wife while she is sleeping. I replayed this last night because I couldn't remember what this game was about, and saw the line, and by the end of the update I realized I didn't know what this game was about because it's all over the place.

It pretty clearly implies the MC and his wife have kids, though they are never seen or mentioned again in the game. The wife is a homemaker but apparently has to leave town for some kind of work thing. Seraphina was supposed to help you get your high paying job back by blackmailing her mother/your boss, but instead she uses her mother, a business owner who hates you, to get you into an elite college for, reasons...

The lewd scenes are fun, but this story is so incoherent the author might as well not even attempt a plot and just make it a fuck fest harem game.
 

Jonny Skull

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Aug 7, 2017
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Dont remember that line, and which kids? He doesnt seem to have any kids
Around where the MC first comes across his wife ingame he says his kids are off "studying abroad".

Correction: It's actually at the very beginning in the background info dump.
 
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juan palote

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It's at the beginning when he is thinking about his wife while she is sleeping. I replayed this last night because I couldn't remember what this game was about, and saw the line, and by the end of the update I realized I didn't know what this game was about because it's all over the place.

It pretty clearly implies the MC and his wife have kids, though they are never seen or mentioned again in the game. The wife is a homemaker but apparently has to leave town for some kind of work thing. Seraphina was supposed to help you get your high paying job back by blackmailing her mother/your boss, but instead she uses her mother, a business owner who hates you, to get you into an elite college for, reasons...

The lewd scenes are fun, but this story is so incoherent the author might as well not even attempt a plot and just make it a fuck fest harem game.

I went again to that scene and you are right, he mention kids....

The story really is kind of a mess
 

jhustrue

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Mar 3, 2020
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Lol this game is so bad that it's actually hilarious. Good job dev, really rode the line.
 

bozoplace

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Dec 7, 2019
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I think the problem with this game is it's rushed, I mean there is no lead up to any sexual partner.

it's like, "hey how are you" then bam, sex right away without any leadup to getting to know someone, then cumming 5 times straight :unsure:

Seems a bit like a porno with John Holmes :D
 

playb0y44

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Just finished playing this for the first time. Aside from the grammatical errors, which are easy to overcome, the animation needs some serious work. About 20% of the animations look natural and free flowing. The other 80% are jerky and loopy. The also do not blend very well with the background...but look like an overlay or super imposed.

Will keep an eye on it for future releases.
*writes the worlds "Coherent Story" on a rock*
*throws it out a nearby window*

What the hell is the premise of this game anymore? I have no clue. The wife hasn't been seen in forever, does he even remember he's married anymore? Where the hell is the sister for that matter? And now we've skipped past Debra and her family and moved right onto College for some reason? Doesn't this guy have a job? How the hell is he going to College?

DO YOU EVEN REMEMBER YOUR OWN STORY FOR FUCK'S SAKE?!
Have to admit the sudden inclusion into college got me confused too
Yeah, I'm lost. Also, there is a line at the beginning of the game where the MC mentions that his wife is a homemaker and takes care of the kids... So the MC is like a 30 something year old pretending to be a college student because....
It's at the beginning when he is thinking about his wife while she is sleeping. I replayed this last night because I couldn't remember what this game was about, and saw the line, and by the end of the update I realized I didn't know what this game was about because it's all over the place.

It pretty clearly implies the MC and his wife have kids, though they are never seen or mentioned again in the game. The wife is a homemaker but apparently has to leave town for some kind of work thing. Seraphina was supposed to help you get your high paying job back by blackmailing her mother/your boss, but instead she uses her mother, a business owner who hates you, to get you into an elite college for, reasons...

The lewd scenes are fun, but this story is so incoherent the author might as well not even attempt a plot and just make it a fuck fest harem game.
I think the problem with this game is it's rushed, I mean there is no lead up to any sexual partner.

it's like, "hey how are you" then bam, sex right away without any leadup to getting to know someone, then cumming 5 times straight :unsure:

Seems a bit like a porno with John Holmes :D
I agree, that build up is not present. But will have to bear with it for time being. Currently MEF's (other game) rewrite is in progress. Afterwards rewrite of UL will start.
 
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I really liked this game but now I have vertigo from how out of control this game is spiralling...
Why did MC run away from the douchebag in the bathrobe in the spa lobby? Seems out of character for such a badass...
Then we switch to Sophia in a room with a bunch of mutts... Like how did she get there??? Then the "Insane Girl Clown Posse" shows up to clean house??? Where was the intro meeting or phone call since they name dropped that they were acting on MC's orders??? Then MC shows up at the scene and has no clue what happened there??? Then fucks the shit out of Scarlett without being able to do enough math to put 2+2 together... Then we get disjointed war memories from the Agent guy who I still don't get why he is there in the first place... Then we want to get into college although I don't know why, to get info about Dakari? Why didn't we interrogate Scarlett while stretching her back door and turning her into our personal cum dumpster? Then we fight Andrew, where did he come from? And where did the original gang fucking with Debra go??? Now I have a karate fight with naked grey people... (I hope Ralph Macchio is one of my clown bitches because a gui closes the same as a bathrobe and I may need to run away again...) Then the Agent shows up again just in time for MC to get a 3-way... Fuck, my brain hurts...
 
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